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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
awesum...
nw maan showed his attitude..
nw its tym for geet to show her one..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was sooo interesting n maan😆 is unbelievable yaar...i loved it...looking fwd...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
lovely dear
so now u have took MANMADHUDU
great dear
it suits for himmore
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
its awesome n funny...

actually i like everything abt this story from chars to dialogs...

every dialog is a punch dialog through out the end
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
AMaaazzng;@)
cnt soonn;)
thanks for the pm;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
love the movie manmadhadu, loved nagarjun in that,,,,

wow cant wait to see maan in the same character 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

part 3

hi frns back with another part

but sorry to say u cant find any updates in any of my ff's until this moth end atleast until 24th becoz i have my semister exams and i m really busy...plz understand

will surely update daily after then...holidays na...

enjoy the update friends...



"mama coffee" geet came home shouting at her mom for coffee.

In the living room rajji sat watching tv while mohinder sat in other sofa reading newspaper.

Rano came out of kitchen asking "office kaise hai beta"

"very big" geet replied removing her coat and throwing it on the sofa and sat.

"mein yeh nahi pucha ki kithna hai….yeh pucha ki kaise hai" rano said.

"abhi abhi aayi hai na…don't pester her" mohinder said closing the paper and turning towards geet and continued "y r u dull beta"

"car broke down in the middle papa" geet replied weekly stretching herself and continued "I think I stepped into the office in rahul kal"

"good" spoke rajji still looking at tv. Geet ran to her and hit her with a pillow which is on the diwan. "ouch" rajji shouted.

" mera MD hain na….he is stupid than rajji….she had dust allergy and he had women allergy " geet sat beside rajji.

"ufff…..he is showing me the hell" geet said irritatingly.

"is it nice?" rajji asked.

"what?" geet questioned.

"hell" rajji replied casually.

Geet instantly took the remote from rajji and started beating her. "di..di"rajji shouted and tried to run.

Before geet could get up rano came and handed her the coffee "coffee".

Geet took the coffee from her and complained her like a kid " why did u give birth to her mama?"

rajji came back and sat saying " tum acha nahi laga isseliye"

"ahhh" geet said and turned to mohinder complaining "papa"

Mohinder turned to rajji "rajji go and study don't irritate her she is tired"

"what is need to work….u would have married na" rano said patting on geet's head.

"wo bas ek din office gayi aur aap lo mat janeko keh raheho…aur mein har roj school jathi hoon par ek bhi mujhs mana nahi karoge jaane se" rajji cribbed as she stood.

"tum ko to mein…" geet said and got up and rajji ran to her room. Every one laughed.

In a park………

Tasha is waiting for someone sitting on a bench and then came the someone….yash. he is also an employee in khurana ad agency.

Tasha is continuously looking at yash and yash asked "aisa kya dekh rahi ho?"

"dekh rahi hoon kit um mujhse sach mein pyaar karthe ho ya nahi" tasha replied.

"kyun?" yash asked.

"its been long now since we fell in love but not for once u took me to ur house" tasha complied.

"nahi nahi…agar mera papa ko patha chalgaya na…mera khair nahi" yash feared.

" mujhe mere papa se dar hai" yash said.

"par mujhe tumse pyaar hai" tasha tried to convince him and she continued as he kept quit " I feel like talking to u for hours…I feel like living with u…being beside u every time….if that doesn't happen….i feel killing myself"

Yash looked at her "aisa math kaho tasha….i love u"

They both went.

Now there were in the traffic…it is red signal and the vehicles stopped. Yash was riding a bike and tasha sat behind. They came a halted beside a black bmw car.

The mirror of the car came down and there there is….ha ha our great MSK…..

Yash turned and saw msk and instantly tasha ran away from their leaving yash with msk.

Next moment….

Maan and yash are in the same park walking.

Maan asked "kya yash coffee keliye aaya?"

Yash is walking beside him with full fear and answered in low voice "yes sir"

" coffee pigaya?" maan asked again.

"yes sir" yash replied.

" who paid the bill?" maan asked again.

" mein hi pay kiya sir" yash said.

" ghar drop kar raheho?" maan asked.

"bus stop tak…."yash said.

"hmm…who paid for petrol in bike?" maan asked again.

Yash replied "mein hi sir"

"hmm..dekha..ladkiyon ke saath jaayenge to yahi hai…..sab kuch hamhi pay karna hoga….agar ladke ke saath jaayenge to……if u take him to movie he will buy the cool drinks…..if u take him to the dinner he will buy the ice cream….agar ladkiya to thrill uska aur bil hamara……usko lift bhi hame denahai aur gifts bhi hame denahi…..aur wo hamko finally unki wedding card degi…….dekho yash…tum bache ho isseliye kehrahe hoon…..be aware of girls and transformers…..its is better for u……why do u want to play with power yash….u will turn as a crow" maan gave yash a lecture and went away leaving a confused yash behind him.

Khurana mansion

Maan came in and saw adi waiting for him in the living.

"what happened adi? Do u want something?" maan asked adi sitting in the sofa.

Adi who is standing infrount of him spoke "nahi sir…I want ur blessing"

"is it ur birthday?" maan asked casually.

"kal mera shaadi hai sir" adi said.

"SHAADI???" maan shouted shocked.

Adi nodded his head in negative and replied calmly "shaadi sir"

"kyun?" maan asked.

Adi taking a card from his bag said " if anyone says marriage means they will ask 'when' but u r asking 'why' sir"

"iseliyeh puchraha hoon…kyun?" maan said.

"cooking on own becoming difficult sir" adi replied.

"appoint a cook" maan said casually.

"there is none to take care of the house sir" adi said with hope.

Maan got up and walked towards the stairs and adi followed him "buy a dog" maan said.

" where can I find a dog which gives dowry sir" adi replied loosing all the hope.

" satire kya?" maan said looking seriously at adi.

" agar aap se satire maroge to mein retire ho javoge sir" adi said looking down.

"kuch bhi bolo adi…..tum shaadi karna mujhe pasand nahi" maan said.

" that is why I m not inviting u to the marriage sir…..just for reception" adi said looking at him.

"aap log kabhi nahi sudroge " maan said and walked away cribbing "ek aakar shaadi kahoge…dusra pyaar aur koi aur aakar honey moon kahoge…..jao sab lo jaakar naash hojaov "

Adi replied from bottom of the stairs "honey moon mein kisi ko invite nahi kiya sir"

Maan turned back giving a glare at him and saying " remember one thing adi….shaadi is not a boon….its a sin"

Repection: Pinky Weds Adi

"congratulations sir" tasha said.

All the office staff surrounded adi and pinky and gave them gifts.

"maan sir yaha nahi aaraheho na?" sasha asked adi.

"mein bas use formality keliyeh bulaya…compel nahi kiya" adi said.

"to zaroor nahi avoge" said yash and all laughed.

And then they saw maan entering into the reception hall in a black tuxedo looking dashing as usual. He came to adi and handed him a bouquet greeting "congratulations"

"thank u sir" adi said smiling.

Pinky smiled at him but he dint return it. Maan turned to adi and spoke in a low voice " kya adi naam to pinky hai aur ladki dekho to monkey jaise hai?"

"thank u sir" adi said and realized what he said and shocked.

But maan is maan. Maan continued " bride ka naam top mein likha aur tumhara naam niche? Abhi se domination?" but adi is giving him all types of confused looks.

"its okay….jo honatha wo hogaya….i will try to arrange for divorse in 2-3 months….dont worry" maan said as if consoling him.

Adi looked him horror struct. Maan went from there.

After some time maan and adi sat with their drings and maan again spoke "waise….tu iss shaadi ko haan kehdiya ya koi majboor kiya?"

Before adi speak anything pinky called adi from other end of the hall "suniyeh"

"haan ek minute" adi said and turned towards maan again.

But maan dint stop " what is her qualification?"

"intermediate tak padi sir" adi replied.

"kyun?" maan asked.

"someone ragged her in degree and she hit him. Matter toda serious hogaya sir…iseliyeh…." Adi said and pinky again called this time a bit harshly "adi ji"

Adi saw her and maan again said "whatever…u be careful"

"yes sir" adi said and again pinky called him this time very roughly and irritated "ADI"

Adi worriedly looked at maan "jao…agar todi der aur hogaya to pata nahi kaise bulavoge"

Adi went away and maan turned to other people.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
amazing update dear...

loved it a lot😊

good luck 4 ur xam👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
😆

i luvd ds maan a lot..poor adi!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago

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