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neha5058 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolmaan

i luved it it was really very nice and wildly performace lol it was awesome suhagraat lol :D



sakshi
i had typed it more wild but then cut it...

n thanks for loved it...
Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Eid mubarakh...lovely updte,thnks fr pm...do cntnue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh m god...lovel post it's so romantic I tried visualizing each and very part and couldn't keep my heart in control...lovely post..!! Keep it up..!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanappin

Oh m god...lovel post it's so romantic I tried visualizing each and very part and couldn't keep my heart in control...lovely post..!! Keep it up..!! 😊



thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: hayaimaan

Eid mubarakh...lovely updte,thnks fr pm...do cntnue



same to you dear...😊
and thanks like the post...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
geet's birthday
maan has planned for her birthday...he left a letter for her

on the bed in their bedroom...geet comes in room and cursing

maan that he forgot her birthday...geet saw the letter and read

it...he wote in that letter...wear this saree and come on

terrace...she opened the box...wow..!! kitna pyaari saree

hai...my fav colour...geet wore that saree and went to

terrace...she wears red net saree...as sson as she enterd on

terrace...she saw the whole terrace was fully decorated with

lights and flowers...geet get surprised...then maan arranged a

shower there...and that shower starts showering flowers on

geet...geet lifts her hands for feel them and starts searching

to maan...she called him..maan..maan..where r u?
maan came from behind and hug her from her her behind...she was

about to scream but maan rest his palm on her mouth and said

chup...he turns her...geet asked from maan..what is this

maan...?
maan hold her hands and points in the direction of sky...and

starts moving her finger in way to write something on the

sky..then a beautiful spark of stars appears on the sky...and

showing it...I LOVE U JAAN...HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETHEART...
geet's eyes filled with joy and tears of happiness...she

turned to look at maan...her eyes said it all to maan...she

hugged him immediately...maan hold her and kissed on her

foreheadand said..happy birthday jaan...geet with lots of love

moans maan...then maan asks geet to cut the cake...she noded

for yes...both hold each other hands and cut the cake...and

maan feed her cake...and geet was about to feed him but he

stops...she notted her brows..y? he said..mujhe ye wala cake

nahi khana..he points her lips..mujhe wo wala cake khana

hai..she shies...maan leaned closer to her and take the cake

from the corner of her lips...hmm...kitna tasty cake hai..
she shied after heard this...geet raised her hand in front of

him and said mera gift...?
maan said..oops gift to mai bhul gaya...she made a baby

face...and said..how can u forget maan??
geet was about to turn then immediately maan gives her

gift...and said...open this...
she still making a baby face and open the gift...after open the

gift box...her eyes popped open..maan ye kya hai?
maan said...kya hua geet? tumhe pasand nahi aaya kya?
geet=nahi maan aisi baat nahi hai...ye bahut sundar hai par mai

aise nahi kapde nahi pahanti...
mai janta hu geet...par tum iss dress me bahut sundar

lagogi..ek bar pahan kar to dikhao...
she noded...
maan restlesely waiting for her...he loved to see her love in

that dress...geet came out...maan's gaze fell on her...he

forgot to blink his eyes...geet looks like a fairy in white



gown and pearl necklace added more grace in her beauty...
she feel shy due to his non-stop gaze...she is not able to look

at him...maan came close to her and said...it's like i am

dreaming with my open eyes...like...a fairy is standing in

front of me...geet shied and blushed...maan sat on his knees

and gave a proposal to her...shall we dance my princess..?
geet noded and give her hand in his...
(imagine this song frnds..)
song starts...mere rang me rangne wali...
pari ho ya sapno ki rani..
ya ho koi prem kahani...
maan rest his one hands on her waist and geet rest her hands on

maan's shoulders...they start dance...
maan said..may i kiss my fairy??
geet get down her eye lashes and blushed...that means

yes...maan leaned closer to her and rest his lips on hers..and

gently kissed her... a cold breeze touched her body...she

shivers...and tries to go away but maan hold her hand and pull

near to him with a jerk...aaj nahi geet...aaj koi bahana nahi

chalega...geet turned her back...and eye lock...they hugged

each other instantly...then suddenly slow rain started..both

were drenched in rain.maan lifts her in his lap and made her

way to their bedroom...maan just in the beauty of geet...
geet=maan mujhe nichey utariye...
maan made her stand on her feets...geet turned her back...but

her wet hairs touched maan's face like it's a trap to become

maan lost in her...maan stops her by holdinh her shoulder...and

made her turn...their eyes met...maan kissed her eye lashes one

by one..kissed her cheeks...then he take the lower lip of geet

in his and then upper lip...and then the kissed changed in to a

passionate kiss...geet grip's around his neck become more

tighter...they have shared their breath..their breath

mingled...they want to contact the whole oral parts of each

other...but they have to stop their kiss...for taking fresh

air...they can feel their breath which was fanning on her

neck...she was melting in his breath...they looked each

other..her cheeks turning tomato red...maan open the zip of her

dress in a jerk...her eyes widen opened...her dress fell on her

feets...she folded her arms around her upper part...maan

shamelesely move more close to her...and lift her and rest on

the bed...her cheeks turned pink in shame...maan kisse her

shoulders and move to her back...and kissed on her bare

back...geet couldn't control herself from that feeling that was

produced by maan's touch...just mesmerized with it...and she

moans..maan...maan becoming more and more wild..start biting

her back..she turned and stop maan and hugged him...he removes

his shirt and vest...geet hides her face...
maan=look at me geet...
geet=pls..first turn off the light...
maan did the same...but the moonlight spreads on her...her eyes

full of intensity...her almond eyes werre pulling him...maan

kisse her lips with full of passion...then he starts play with

the every curves of geet...she too start kissing him..bitting

him..she bite his ear lobe..maan moans aah...and she

giggles...she carreses his feets with her toes..maan controled

over her by pinned her on mattress by stretch her hands and

holds them tightly...and locked her legs by his...his breath

fanned on her lips...geet just said maan in her meak

voice...maan kissed her wildly...she hold him tightly and left

the nal marks on his back and neck...the silene of room got

broken by their heavy breath...cold breeze touching their

bodies...both become 2 bodies and one soul...now it's better to

call them maaneet instead of maan & geet...both lost in each

other arms...both lost in the dreamland of their love...as soon

as the night becomes more dark...maaneet will lost in each

other and reached at their climax...




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from neha...thanks...

neha5058 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank u frnds for comment here and for likes...
this one is for u all...








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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
sooo romantic luv it luv the luv description in it, ... it was lovely keep up the romance ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Awesome...loved your post. Thanks for putting all SR stuff in one thread. 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
nice updte dear...beautiful maaneet moments n beautifully written as well 👏thanks fr pm.

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