My first FF do read & comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is for the first time I am writing an FF So I will only continue if you all will like me to continue I am writing down the basic character sketch of maan&geet their family background & the plot of the story if you all will like it then I will continue
Geet
An 18 year old girl who aspires to become a dancer for this she enrols herself to a dancing school in mumbai
she lost her mother at a very young age her stepmother heted her & had planned to kill her but she was saved by a woman who runs a brothel house initially that woman wanted geet to become a prostitute but later she started loving her as her own daughter hence she enroled geet to a dance institue in mumbai where she can fulfill her dreams of becoming a dancer
Maan
A 24 year old bachelor who has returned to India after completing his MBA from USA
he hates music love marriage as a kid his mother was abandoned by his fathr who left them only to make a name in music world his mom raised him working as a school teacher but after some time his father returned maan's mom reema accepted him back for the sake of maan she wanted him to have a normal life this was not taken well by maan he never accepted amariner as his father he startd maintaining distance from his mother as well he studied hard to get a scholarship from USA h got that scholarship & went to USA now he is back to India with an MBA is an MD of a known company he hates music as it reminds him of his father he hates marriages he hates love he hates any type of emotions he is a money minded person & lives away from his family
OTHER CHARACTERS ARE
ADI- Geet's childhood friend with whom she enrols into a dance institution
PINKY- Maan' sister she want her family to be toether she wants maan to live with them
REEMA- Maan's mother she works as a teacher in a school
AMARINDER-Maan's father who is still a struggler does not work still aspires to be a musician
JAMUNA-A prostitute who raised geet & enroled her to a dance institution so that she can lead a life of dignity & fulfil her dreams of becoming the best dancer
So tell me whther you like the plot characters& background or not if you all like it then I will continue otherwise I will not continue it so do read & tell me if I should continue it or not

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Priya204 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Could you please tell all your friends to read it as it is my first FF so I want some likes
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice intro dear...
continue soon...
add me in...
Edited by geetsweet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey nice start.But I wanna give u a suggestion ..plz high lite characters..n if u can use colors that will b great.n.i.I know it is difficult to attract people n mer also was suffering from this thing...But I think more promotion is also major thing.. promote ur FF ..sending messages..

Add index also


pm me for next part


lov


Jass


go through my Fictions also
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Priya m a mobi user so i cant post d link...:(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulation for ur First ff
awesome start
loved it
update soon
and pls post the link ot GEET FB official wall
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Veryyy interesting!!!
Loveee the plot!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

Hey nice start.But I wanna give u a suggestion ..plz high lite characters..n if u can use colors that will b great.n.i.I know it is difficult to attract people n mer also was suffering from this thing...But I think more promotion is also major thing.. promote ur FF ..sending messages..


Add index also


pm me for next part


lov


Jass


go through my Fictions also

Thanks for your suggestion I will do it this is my first FF hope people will like it & I am also quiet nervous about it will update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickachu

Veryyy interesting!!!

Loveee the plot!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

Thanks for liking the plot will update it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

congratulation for ur First ff
awesome start
loved it
update soon
and pls post the link ot GEET FB official wall

Thanks for liking it but I don't know how to post links if you know then can you please do it for me will update soon

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