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Surprise Confession


Geet gets up in the morning''.it's her birthday '''

Geet(self thought) Happy Birthday Geet'..par kya fayda maan ko to yaad bhi nahin hoga na ki aaj mera birthday hai''.Hey babaji ye mere saath hi kyu hota hai''par nahin main apse koi shikayat nahin karungi'..aajkal maan meri kitni parwah karne lage hai or kal jo hua'. She recollects all those moments she had spent with maan in the basement'.

aaj apne birthday wale din main maan ko keh hi dalungi ki muje bhi gaadi chalana sikhna hai'..mera bhi maan karta hai ki main khud kahin jau'.har waqt muje driver ki zarurat rehti hai'or kal to maan ko khud mujhe ghar drop karne aana pada'..kab tak chalega aise'..

Geet(self thought) he babaji aaj to kitni der ho gayi uthne mein or main abhi bhi pata nahin kya soch rahi hu'..jaldi kar geet maan to office jaane wale honge

Geet gets ready and rushes to the kitchen to cook pasta for maan.

Geet(self thought) aaj main har cheez unhi ki pasand ki banaungi''

Maan comes to the dining table'geet serves pasta and sits on the chair. Maan notices geet that she wanted to say sumthing

Maan: geet tumhe kuch kehna hai kya??

Geet: vo maan main apse ye kehna chahti thi ki'

Maan: haan kaho geet

Geet: maan muje driving seekhna hai'.please aap muje sikhayenge na???

Maan: geet ye achanak se gaadi chalena ka khayal tumhare mamm mein kaise aa gaya

Geet: please maan har waqt muje driver ki wait karte rehna padta hai ki kab vo ayega or muje lekar jaega'muje driving seekhni hai please maan please

Maan: geet ye kaisi baccho jaisi zidd pakad li hai tumne'..

Geet: matlab aap muje nahin sikhayenge na??


Maan: geet aaj muje kafi kaam hai'meri kafi important meetings bhi hai'main abhi chalta hu iss bare main hum phir baat karenge

Maan leaves for his room to collect his files''geet is really sad after hearing this'..meanwhile nandini comes and wishes geet a very happy birthday'.dev too is shocked that its geet birthday and wishes her.

Nandini: geet didi jijaji ne apko wish to kia na??

Geet: kaha nandini,,,,unhe apne kaam se fursat ho to wish karenge na

Dev: matlab bro ko tumne bataya bhi nahi ki tumhara birthday hai

Geet nods her head in approval.

Nandini: to isliye meri geet didi ka mood kharab hai'..

Geet: nahi nandini'vo to maine maan ko kaha ki muje gaadi sikhni hai'unhone vo baat bhi taal di''chado muje kisi se koi baat nahin karni

Geet leaves from their in an angry mood.

Dev and nandini are thinking for a plan so that they can tell maan that its geet's birthday today'..Maan overhears them.

Maan(self thought) aaj geet ka janamdin hai or maine bechari ko naraaz kar dia'..kitni umeed se usne mujse kuch manga tha or main bhi na''.Maan singh khurana ab tumhe apni galati ko sudharna hoga


Maan goes towards dev and nandini and makes a plan for geet's surprise party.

Geet is sitting in her room.

Geet: kya manga tha maine sirf yahi na ki muje car chalana sikhna hai..uss baat ko bhi taal dia maan ne'..dust daanav kahi ke'..main bhi ab kuch nahi kahungi'.kitne pyar se maine unki pasand ka khana banaya par ye maan na kabhi nahi sudherenge'.dekh rahe hai na aap babaji'..

Maan is in his office and recalls her moments he had spend with geet''.

Maan: aisa karta hu geet ko call karta hu'uska mood to kafi kharab hoga'muh fula kar baithi hogi

He calls up geet but she doent picks up the call'.He is about to call her again but adi comes in

Adi: sir saari tyariyan ho gayi hai

Maan: very good'.muje kisi bhi cheez ki kamin nahin chaiye'.sab perfect hona chaiye'

Adi: sir jaise apne kaha tha sab waise hi hai'.par ek problem aa gayi hai

Maan: kaisi problem'.?

Adi: sir vo Punjab wale delegates aaj hi meeting karna chahte hai'.

Maan: unse kaho ki aaj maan singh khurana koi bhi meeting nahin karega'saari meeting kal ke liye postpone kar do

Adi: ok sir.

Adi leaves from the room. Maan is tensed that geet is not picking his call..

Maan: ye geet to mera call utha hi nahin rahi hai'.ab main use baat kaise karu???

He calls up nandini and tells her to bring geet to a venue where they had decided for the party.

Nandini: kya geet didi..subah se kamre mein baithi hui hai..chaliye na kahin bahar chalte hai

Geet: nahin nadinin mera mood nahin hai

Nandini: kya didi mood nahin hai'apko meri kasam apko chalna hi padega'chaliye jaldi se tyar ho jaiye'..

Geet gets up and opens her cupboard for choosing a dress

Nandini: di main apke liye ek dress layi hu'aap please wahi daaliye na

She gives her a red saree..which was actually given by maan for geet.

Geet: arey nandini hum ne ghoomne to jana hai itni bhari saree dalke main kaha jaungi

Nandini: arrey di'aaj apke liye itna special din hai'agar jija ji ko yaad nahin to kya hua hum to apka birthday celebrate kar sakte hai na

Geet: thik hai jaise teri marzi'..main aayi tyar hoke'geet is reafy and looks like an angel...


Nandini calls up maan and tells her that they are leaving from KM''.Geet is sitting quitly in the car..

Nandini: kya didi aap chup chap baithi hui hai'.please ab bahut hua aap apna mood thik kijiye'..

Geet: par nandini tune dekha na maine maan se ek cheez mangi or unhone vo bhi mana kar dia

Nandini: to kya ab aap uss baat ki sazza hum sabko dengi'..chaliye mood thik kijiye apna...chaliye di apki pasand ka khana khate hai'muje bhook lagi hai'..

Geet: chal jaisi teri marzi'..

They stop at an hotel.

Geet: yaha par kya khaenge nandini'..kahin or chalte hai'..

Nandini: nahi didi maine dev ke saath yaha par khana khaya hai'yaha ka khana kafi acha hai''ab chaiye

Geet and nandini enters inside the hotel'.its all dark in the hotel'

Geet: yaha par itna andhera kyu hai'..lagta hai light gayi hui hai''

She is about to fall'.but maan comes and holds her.

Maan: sambhal kar geet.


Geet: aap yaha par'..

Lights were turned on and it's a grand party for geet. Geet is surprised to see the arrangements'everything is in her Punjabi style'''

Everybody was singing for geet's birthday'''she had tears in her eyes''''

Geet looks at maan: ye sab apne kia hai

Maan: I m so sorry geet maine tumhe subah naraaz kar dia'..muje maaf kar do'.

Geet: maafi to muje maangni chahiye'.main hi subah se muh fulakar baithi thi'apka phone bhi nahin suna''muje maaf kar dijiye

Dev interrupts in between'..

Dev: aap dono maafi hi maangte rahenge ya geet apne birthday ka cake bhi kategi''.waise bhi bro ne sunah se kaam karwa karwa kar haalat kharab kar di hai

Geet looks at maan'Thanku so much maan..muje itna acha surprise dene ke liye.

Geet is about to leave where in maan hold her hand from behind'..

Maan: ek minute geet'''

Maan: geet main nahin jaanta ki ye muje kya ho raha hai''.kyu main har wat tumhare bare mein sochta rehta hu''har waqt dil yahi chahta hai ki tum mere pass raho'..tumhare chehre se meri nazar hatne ka naam hi nahin leti''''

Geet is surprised''she turns back to maan and looks in her eyes''.had tears in her eyes'

Maan: main jaanta hu geet ki maine tumhe bahut rulaya hai'par sach maano geet mera iraada kabhi bhi tumhe dukhi karne ka nahin tha''par jab se tum meri zindagi mein ayi ho'na jaane zindagi ke mayane hi badal gaye hai''har baat tumse shuru hone lagi hai ot tum pe hi khatam''.

Geet is in tears'..

Maan: tum hasti hi to hasne ka mann karta hai..tumhe rota dekh muje becheni si hone lagti hai''.main nahin jaanta ye kaise ehsaas hai'par haan ek baat keh sakta hu ki meri zindagi tumhare bina ab adhuri si lagti hai,,,

Maan: geet main tumhare babaji se bas yahi dua karte hu ki vo tumhe hamesha mere saath hi rakhe''geet meri zindagi ki tumhari aadat si ho gayi hai''please muje chod ke kabhi mat jana'main tumhare bina jee nahin paunga geet'..kyuki main bhi tumse pyar karne laga hu

Geet keeps her hand on maan's mouth'

Geet: chup kijiye aap..or khabar daar dubara aisi baat ki to'.main apse kabhi baat nahin karungi'..!!

Geet: maan aap jaante hai ye baat sunne ke liye main kab se intezaar kar rahi thi par aaj babaji ne meri sun li'..aaj mere janamdin pe muje ye sabse khoobsurat tohfa mila hai''thanku maan


Both of them share an hug'..

Maan: I love u geet'.main tumhere mina nahin reh sakta''

Geet: I love you too maan'.

Both of them beak the hug

Maan: geet muje tumhe ek or tohfa dena hai''

Maan takes out keys of car and give them to geet'.

Geet: ye kya hai maan'

Maan: ye tumhara birthday gift hai meri taraf se

Geet: par muje to gift mil gaya maan'..muje aap mil gaye hai'.muje pr kya chaiye..

Maan: geet phir bhi'waise ye tumhari nayi car ki chabiyan hai or main aaj tumse waada karta hu ki main hi tumhe car chalana silkahunga'.!!

Geet is all happy and in tears and hugs maan again'.!!

Well how was it friends'..??😕😕

Will wait for your comments'..😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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me first o hoe..
di hum sab ko marne ka erada hai kya...itna acha aur pyaara OS de kar...
aur keh rahi thi ke shayad acha nahi hogi...agar ye acha nahi tha to acha kasa hoga...imagine kar ke deekhti ho..😉
Os is mindblowing di...superb work...
kehte hai sabar ka faal metha hota hai...mene wait kia aur kitna acha os mila...
GHSP me to abi itni jaldi maan ka confess milne se raha...apke os se mann bar diya
full happy like geet😆
every thing is perfect di...
maan confess is too good...
do more...
love u alot...
khushi
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww .. it was sooo adorable ... I hope they do something like this in the show ...
loved it
write soon
love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U know what Silky I was in tears reading that confession I so wish k serial mein bhi aisa hi kuch ho kal k episode ne kafi hopes de diye hai
well loved geet's birthday and the way maan made it all the more special by confessing his feelings
Devni serial mein bahut pareshan karte hai but in this OS they were adorable loved d way nano brought geet to the venue and loved Dev's dialogue k ab aap log sorry kehthe rahoge ya phir b'day celebrate bhi karoge subah se kaam kate thak gay hoon...
But overall enjoyed it
kaash serial mein bhi geet ka b'day celebration mil jaye
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this was so nice and sweet...i loved maan's confession...continue soon and thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow that was an excellent os
hope something like this happens in the serial
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh so sweet...it was wonderful...agar cvs iska aadha bhi dekha dein na to mazaa aa jayega
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one yar...that was so sweet...awww luvd it tc😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful OS dear 😊
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I REALLY WISH THEY SOMETHING LIKE THIS

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