M/G OS: Hamesha and Forever (epilogue, pg.10)

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

yu wrote in spectacular way

love it

even yu made me cry

thnx so much

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princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

running short on time warna acche se maarti😡 but, i still think i will write a poem for this one!

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mandymore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Its beautiful,u n shika r in competion who can make us cry more
Its emotional n sad one but relly liked it

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

ohhmmmggg..😡😡

i hate u hate u hate u😭😭😭 i was in the bus going out...to a conf..all ban than ke...and on the way i read it!😭😭

and now i am looking like a bhoot😡😡 wwith all kajal running down my face😡😡 i sooo hate u😡😡😡😡

but it was ase-freaking some...baby i loved it!! beautiful is not the word!!

it was real n touching..i cud feel the happiness and pain here.

poor kids...i lovedd it whan KHUSHI aid i will kiss it beeter..i cried so much..poor baby..

and then neev says..mumma plz dont go..

baby i am still crying..i heve no words to say..

more than maaneet...u kno the mom-kiddy bond hokked me here..i didnt even notice maan(am i bonkers?)😭😭

reya hun i lovee u...ummahhh

P>S..me is NOt reading the SS😡😡 till get a few positive vibes frm there😭😭

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

I was pretty sanme till the last few lines...i think i was prepared for it..hehe...

awww u killed her..nutto here u could have cured her..now i am blood thirsty..i need to kill that thirst..hehe

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soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awsome relii touchin

made me cry so emotional n heartbreakin x

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sanu3108

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

moi scared after reading the comments ... .. kya karon "bites nails"

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: sindu555
moi scared after reading the comments ... .. kya karon "bites nails"

stop chickening out and read it 😆

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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

hey

very hearttouching story.. u made me cry too..

thanks for pm dear..

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Jazmin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

so finally im here...you already know why im late...😳😳😳 but you know how they say...joh bhi hota hai aache ke liyeh hota hai...im so glad i put of commenting/reading your stories...my brother decided to catch up on everything he recorded on our DVR...that means HOURS of stuff...so...i have something to do myself!! eee!!! 😃😃😃...so here i go...

oh oh...many people have warned me about this OS...they are like "oh its sad"..."you will cry"...especially Sana...ha ha...its funny 😆😆😆 cuz they think im going to kill you cuz its sad...the dont realize the sadistic bond that we share!! 🤗...😉...ok enough bak bak...

first thing...i love the title...i love how it doesnt give anything away...and instead is sort of misleading...you think humesha and forever...you think...aww...love...forever...so sweet...but little do people realize...it also means...love after separation and death 😳😳 brilliant!! 😛

you know...when geet says she's going to miss being close to him...i cant tell if its foreboding that something is about to happen...or a hint that something has already happened...this is what happens when you have a mind like mine...cant simply enjoy a story and go with the flow...no no...i start thinking up scenarios and stuff ...i loved the whole falling in love after marriage...usually its a love marriage that we tend to write about no? seeing an arranged marriage is nice...traditional...know what i mean 😳😳...oh oh...she said it...take care of my family "until i can"...if thats not foreboding...i dont know what is 😛...aww..."me still daddy's baby"...kushi!! *jaz pinches cheeks*...😳😳...breakfast scene was beautiful...and the bond you showed between Pari and Geet...how she worried for her mother...haila ...just ... amazing!! 👏👏...he he...Meera the bestfriend!! 😃😃 why is it that the only one to shut up and control a Geet Singh Khurana is usually a best friend...ha ha...😆😆😆...and THERE is it!! bloody ovarian cancer!! 😡😡😡...kya reya...rula diya naa mujhe...already my eyes are pricking with tears in the part where maan finds out about her cancer...though from previous conversations it seemed like they already had an idea...😭😭...omg...Pari...*jaz fights tears*...when she said that stuff about geet not being around 😔...omg...baas...hogaya naa...when Kushi says she will kiss it better...😭😭😭😭😭...ok...that is pretty much it for my comment because i can no longer see the screen thanks to the tears you so kindly provided...i have a lump in my throat not...and it HURTS!!! 😡😡...that goodbye...omg...🥺...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

beautiful piece Reya!! truly...and i know what you mean by crying at your own work...usually...my own work doesnt make me cry...but...when i did Daddy's Little Girl...i bawled...because i love my dad so much!!...stellar piece yaar...stellar...if anyone says anything to you...you send them my way...ill handle them 😉😉
JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 13 years ago

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