Screenplay that I wished to see today! 9/9/2011

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Screenplay that I wished to see today! 9/9/2011

Hey Guys you have always liked my work and I am really thankful for that! It's your replies and wonderful comments that make me pen down something new! This is just pure Maaneet scene that I wished to see; and if I were the Creatives would have surely put this scenes! I hope you will appreciate it!
Maan had heard everything; he knew that she was juggling the Puja work and also the immense efforts she was putting in completion of the file as she realized that she lost the file! He felt overwhelmed to have been married to Geet! She fulfills all her duties of a wife; with no expectation. Nothing in return; not even my love and bears every tantrum I throw. I have to fulfill my duty as a husband!
And the he remembers the Vachan they took while sitting in the Puja!
Maan: "Har mushkil main ek doosre ka saath denge!"
He retreats to her room; to see her exhausted and slump in the chair with a file in her hand.
She looked so innocent and angelic while sleeping. He went near her; gently lifted the file and kept it on the table. Her hair was flying on her face; and it did attract to him; he tucked away her hair. Picked her up not disturbing her sleep; which she needed as she was completely exhausted and settled her on the bed. He pulled the comforter; increased the temperature of the air conditioner and sat in front of the table!
It was past midnight that he finished with the quotations and was himself down on energy and hurried himself to the kitchen to make a coffee. He returned to see Geet shivering. Why? The temperature was not high; then?
He went close to her; entangled their fingers and slept with her; right on the edge of the bed; not sure that should he be so close to her; what if she doesn't like it? Will she accuse me?
It was morning and it was the call of the client who files Maan was preparing last night! He got up in an awkward situation. Geet was holding onto his arm; he couldn't move and inch and he had to talk to the client; so he calls them home at around 10.00 am.
He moved put of her grip somehow and took a nice shower; recalling their moments of yesterday and the vows they took! He had a huge smile; he was surely getting attracted to her and he didn't know if this was love?
He returned to her room to see his sleeping beauty still in bed. He knew she likes tea; he went and bought her a cup of tea; and he woke her up.
She got up with a shriek when she saw that it was morning and Maan was sitting next to her with a cup of tea in his hand.
Maan: "Good morning Geet!"
Geet was shocked out of her wits? Was she dreaming? She pinched himself and he yelled out in pain;
Maan: "Yeh kya kar rahi ho Geet? Mujhe dard ho raha hai."
She gave an apology. She was about to move out of his sight so as to not answer any questions; he made her sit back!
Maan: "Geet mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai. Mujhe itna paraya kar diya ki yeh batana bhi nahi chaha kio tumse file ghoom ho gayi hai? Itna bhi yakeen nahi kiya mujhpe ki mujhe aakar apne dil ki baat bata sako?"
Geet: "Maan wo main dar gayi thi; aapka gussa dekha hai maine; to maine socha ki aap mujhe bahut daatenge; maine job hi vishwas kamaya tha; aapke aankhon main mere liye; use toote huye nahi dekh sakti thi."
Just then Deepak the servant comes and informs them that client had arrived; Maan told him to take care of him till they both come down!
Geet: "Maan client ghar par aaye hai? Par file to taiiyar nahi hai; mujhe quotations nahi pata; to ab hum kya dikhyenge unko?" she asked innocently!
Maan: "Geet kal humne Puja main vachan phirse liye the; tum bhool gayi kya?"
"Ki har muskil main'"
And she completed;
Geet: "Ek dusre ka saath denge."
Maan: "To maine bus wahi kiya hai. Main nahi jaanta hamare baare main; par tum to sab kuch jaanti ho na? Geet aajtak tumne sab kuch kiya jo ek patni ka dharm hota hai; ab meri baari hai. Main tumhara pati hone ke saare farz aur zimmmedari nibhaoonga. Tumhe shikayat ka koi mauka nahi doonga! Haan Geet; aur yeh Maan ka Vaada hai!"
Geet: "Mujhe to laga tha ki aaj bhi aap wahi Maan Singh Khurana hai; wahi Dusth danav hai; par nahi main galat thi; aap aaj sirf aur airf Maan hai! Geet ka Maan!"
He gently wiped her tears away and told her to freshen up and come down for the deal.
Geet: "Par Maan jahan tak main jaanti hoon; aap hi har deal sign karte hai."
Maan: "Haan aajtak karta tha; kyunki main yeh nahi jaanta tha ki us cheeze par kisi aur ka haq hai; tum maalkin ho Geet! Jaldi aao."
She hugged him and he reciprocated!
Just then Nandini comes in their room crying!
So guys do you want me to pen down an Epilogue for this? Do leave your precious comments! They really mean a lot to me!
So guys how were it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the Maaneet fans!
Positive criticism is always welcome!
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Love And Luck Always!
Mayuuu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me first.. me first..of course after you moaning myrtle..🤣

Awww... that was an awesome screenplay.. Sorry for the late edit as usual 😆 .

Loved the scene, it would have been great to see GC and DD enact this😳 So dreammy.. why dnt you leave your veterinary thing and go and join the CVs.. atleast we will keep getting such beautiful moments..and less Devini😆

I want an epilogue😳

Love you Behna 🤗 and Keep Rocking as always😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good One...that would have been interesting & Maan & Geet would have really made it Awosome with their MINDBLOWIN & SICILLATING PERFPRMANCE AS USAUSL...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Only if this happened Mayu Bless your beautiful imagination
It would have been a perfect maneet episode
You should be a screen play writer
Do write an epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mayu-

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After reading such a beautiful script and imagining maneet in it!
Maneetians are in heaven!
Loveee the post!
Wish to see something like this in the show too!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one.. really wish we at least get see something similar on the show... luved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luvly screenplay,ye hota to kya baat thi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvd it :)

pls epilogue needed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HYEE WHAT A SCENE YAARRR
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looveedd it;D:D
Ofcourse yaar epilogue is needed;D;D
Lovveedd it;D

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