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Mahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079
too good
awesome and mindbowing os

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: ansah
Mahi that was awesome...those maaneet moments came back rushing..

That was exactly the purpose! Thank you!

Originally posted by: Desigirl144

Absolutely beautiful... you described everything so well... Everything fit like a puzzle... 😊 Please write some more!

Thanks a lot! I'll definitely write more whenever I get good ideas.

Originally posted by: shah10
amazing

Thanks!!

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Mahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ninand
god ! this was superb.. simply too good! Damn why cant such simple scenes be incorporated int he show!

This had everything, logic, the magical pull they have, the restless connection , everything.

Her pain was really what had brought them together.. what had made her rebel, open up, what had made him attracted to her-- it was only through that that they had formed a connection-where he would show her the way in arrogance, and she would follow as if it was the most natural course to take.

The depth of their bond , was brought out soo well in this piece. I totally loved it.

very well written. The essence of their story preserved, and the intensity, revived.

You said it all! 👏 I was trying to portray all of that.. the depth of their connection, the undying bond.. I'm glad it all came through. Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: riza792
So beautiful...and moving! The end moved me to tears...Love Maaneet forever!
You write so well😊

Thank you so much!! I feel really strongly about the end too, I'm glad it had the desired effect.

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Binge

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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful OS, Mahi! 😊 Do write often. 😳

PS: I so love your name. 😃

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Chandlerbing1

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome os

loved the hug part

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Mahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya-
Beautiful OS, Mahi! 😊 Do write often. 😳

PS: I so love your name. 😃

Thanks, Shreya! Will definitely write more whenever I get a good idea.

P.S. I wonder why 😳 *Mahiii* 😉😆

Originally posted by: sarkh26
awesome os
loved the hug part

Thank you!! That was my favorite part too... and the tears in MSK's eyes part.. describes the depth of their relationship.

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

beaautifully wirtten... read it with tears in my eyes...

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Parisa

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Posted: 14 years ago

awww this was beautiful...Loved it...and its been really long since we got a Maaneet hug

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Mahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee
beaautifully wirtten... read it with tears in my eyes...

Aww.. thank you!!

Originally posted by: -Parisa-
awww this was beautiful...Loved it...and its been really long since we got a Maaneet hug

Thanks a lot!! Yes, been sooo long since Maaneet hug! We need one soon.

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maanluver

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum os

just awsum superb etc

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Mahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha0504
loved it!!!!!

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: maanluver
awesum os
just awsum superb etc

Thanks so much :)

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