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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel
congrats !!!!!!! 4 d new os ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89
wow awesome os...
it iz jst simmilar 2 the "notebook"

yes...it is...the concept has been used in many books and movies...thanks for liking it..

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mchopra
Are u sure this was happy...this tooo made me cry..(scratching head)..
and that last line "Mommy rem everythibg today," OMG gosh that was just like heart piercing..

yes...this is as happy as i can be for u...i told...they must be happy tears 😆

..ya..i felt for the little child who has to go through days when her mother doesn't even remember her...so for her...the day she does...it means the world 😳

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: shah10
awesome.

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: sharmake11
awesome job
yu narrate everything magnificent

thank yu so much
come back soon with amazing OS
God bless yu dear

awww...thanks hun for ur kind words...i am glad u like the way i write 😳

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: seemamary
Loved it. Awesome update.

Thanks hun :)

Originally posted by: johnangad
lovely!!!!!!!

Thankoo

Originally posted by: nilu710
awww how sad...but sweet os

lovlyyy

thanks for liking it :)

Originally posted by: Harneetluvesksg
aww sucha cute os

Thanks hun :)

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sindu555
awesome ... the way he narrated the whole story to her was sooo touching ... loved their princess Mahi ... she's so matured for a 6 yr old ...

love

Sana

awww...thank u sano...i am glad u liked it...and yes...she has to be mature because she has accepted the fact that her mom may not recognize her...it's the reality of the disease that has matured her before her age...

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ajenn
This is really wonderful story..
Loved the way u portrayed Mahi n Maan's scene..
The convo btwn Geet n Maan with their flashback was really good.
The movie was really an emotional.. I loved it.. And till to date it makes me cry.
But i would say. U had an different way of writing these story..
Its really beautiful..
Thx for the pM

Thanks hun...i am glad u like the different aspects of the OS...the movie was indeed good...so i am pleased that u like my narration..

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: janu_2006
hey
lovey os,,

thanks for pm dear..

Thanks hun

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
beautifully written!!!!

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: londongirl95
wow that was a great OS. for a minute when i was reading and coming to the end i was thinking that the story is going to end on a sad note but so happy that geet remembered!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

having fear of a sad ending is totally normal for u all when it comes to my writing...but i was feeling nice hence the happy ending...

glad u liked it :)

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

awesome OS reya

really loved it

the way maan told his love story was awesome

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
awesome OS reya
really loved it
the way maan told his love story was awesome

Thanks hun :) glad u liked it

Originally posted by: hopehot
awww
i loved it

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
I loved it! Awesome OS!

Thanks :)

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

i know i know...i have many OS's from you to catch up on...i've kept the pm's marked as "unread" so that every time i logged on it flashed in my face that i had to read them!! lol...but i save all my reading for the weekend...so that i have something interesting to do at work!! 😉...so here goes my comment on this one 😃

i just love it in stories when Maan and Geet have a daughter named Mahi...its so fitting!! i hope they show that on the show...Maneet ki Mahi!! 😳...how adorable naa? 😆...already Geet is gayab from the story...and im getting scared...tauba...you've turned me into a crazy person!! ...so now clearly the lady in the pink dress who was shivering is Geet...aab yeh bata...Geet ki memory ko kya hua? usse tu kha gayi kya!? 🤣...dont tell me she had some accident or something and forgot all about Maan and Mahi? 😭...the flashbacks were so cute!! and omg omg...Nakul ko bengali bana diya!! haila...love it!! 👏...that sandcastle proposal...oh lordy!! dreamy...just...dreamy!!! i could see it in my head!! 😍...OMG!! Alzheimers!!! 😲...ok...DID NOT see that coming...but tauba...Alzheimers at the age of 28? thats just...wow!! 😲...is that even possible? 😕...and the thought of poor little Mahi not really knowing her mother because of such a crippling disease!! omg...heart wrenching...what a bitter sweet story luv...just...awesome!!!

JAZ

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