Love and Fate (MG) FF Pt 3 pg 11 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: namita25

amazing update...really liked it a lot..


thnku so much for comment😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: am_sweet_pari

superb
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet4everXxX

Loved the intro!!! It was amazing!!! Do continue soon and thanxs for the pm

Saba xxx



i m glad that u liked it...
thnx for the comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

congratulation for the maaneet ff
awesome start
loved it
continue soon



thnku so much rakhi...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

wowww loved it

but i think u wrote once arnav instead of maan
n those guys who had thrown the girl r so mean n ruthless
plzzz add me to ur pm list


ohh may be by mistake😆

anyways... thnku so much... added u in the PM list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi...just read the intro...sounds interesting...update soon n pm me wen u do
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi...just read the intro...sounds interesting...update soon n pm me wen u do


updating in half an hour!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love And Fate




Part 1




The sun rose removing all the grey clouds and storm and confusion with it.




It was indeed a beautiful and fresh morning, Maan thought as the fresh scent of shampoo filled the air of his room. He turned with his eyes closed. a smile crept his lips as he stretched his hands and legs. but it was replaced by a frown and surprise when he felt the rain drops!




What LEAKAGE in Khurana Mansion! he thought. He opened his eyes and was mesmerized by the scene in-front of him drowned in his mind.



She was standing there near mirror combing her wet hair... probably the source of the scent.he thought but later shrugged. Her face looked calm and normal as if she belong there.




Maan looked at her in astonishment. He just couldn't trace the awkwardness anywhere.




"You are still in bed... go freshen up." she said.




She was about to move out when, "what are you doing in my room. Look you were not well so we brought you here. some people left you on road in that bad weather probably to die. WHO ARE YOU? WHAT is your name? From WHERE you have come?" Maan asked all in one go. He was really frustrated.




"What do you mean by that? Don't you know whom am i?" she said in confusion.




Maan looked at her from up to down. and his anger held no boundaries.




"What the hell! What are you wearing. This is my kurta!" he said almost shouting.




"kya hua Maan? chilla kyu rahe ho?" Kaka came from his room hearing his shout.




"kaka... yeah mere kamre mein kya kar rahi hai?" Maan said slightly getting angry.




Before KSK could say anything the girl answered offended."mai yaha kya kar rahi hoon matlab? agar mai yahan nahi hoti toh kahan hoti?"




KSK was taken aback with how the girl talked toMaan. He had never seen any girl argue with him.




"voh beta iska matlab hai ke tumhe apne kamre mein hona chahiye... tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai." KSK said to her in utmost sweet manner so that it doesn't feel awkward to either of them(Maan and the girl).




"par Kaka ji... ye kamra bhi toh mera hi hai na?" she asked looking at Maan. "aur ye aap aise badi badi aankhen kr ke mujhe kyu dekh rahe hain?"




KSK controlled his smile. This girl really has some guts! he thought.

But then thought about what she said. "ye kamra bhi toh mera hai" KSK looked at her bewildered!




"ye tum kya keh rahi ho... ye sirf mera kamra hai.. Kaka.. ye sab kya hai... " Maan looked at the girl angrily.




"achha achha theek hai" KSK said to make peace. "what is your name? kaha se aayi ho? pariwar mein kaun kaun hai tumhare?" he asked.




The girl looked at KSKas if she is not listening to what he is saying.

"mera naam...mai... mera naam... mujhe... mujhe yaad nahi..!" she said and fainted.




ok guys thats it for now...

wil update more in evening.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Kalika...thanks 4 da pm n superb part one. Geet arguing wid Maan. KSK was surprised n Maan frustrated! Poor Maan lol. Geet den faints...update soon

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