MG-OS-Your Presence Still Lingers Here!!

Hey guys this is my first os with a maaneet angle !!!!!
sooo pls spare my mistakes
this is a vry simple story but i wanted to show the change ,our lives face when we lose our loved ones even though life moves on... adjusting ourselves to the life to whch our loved ones are not a part of ,becomes vry difficult or impossoble sum times, nd the news of the ending of GHSP has effected me a lot...how r we gonna live without watching maaneet...!!!!!😭😭

The night was very dark , she was very tired , the weather was irritaing her , at last she reached her flat she was in dressed in black top and blue jeans, she opened the door very unwantingly,

emptiness was purely visible in the house , it 's so dull very lifeless she went inside to change and came out to eat something ,there was no glow in her face , her beauty was covered by the veil of pain of missing someone very badly,it has been 5 months that she lost her maan in an accident that was the end of her life too, she lost her soul , her husband whom she madly loved he was her world. until one day that shattered

her life into pieces and now it's impossible for her to even fix them...!!!
now tears are flowing from her eyes continously , this emptiness was tearing her up very badly , every second in that house was like stepping on the thorns, she rememberd those lovely days before 5 months .

remebered maan's cute sorry...!!! He was very naughty , The word 'was' was pricking her ...more tears flowed from her eyes.

passed it was getting more difficult for her to forget him ,now she snapped out of all her thoughts and ran into the washroom and sprinkled

waer on her face , but that made the situation more worse , when she saw herself in the mirror she remebered the way maan used to hug her

and gently kiss her on the neck , and then on the cheek his touch automatically brought smile on her lips , even if her mood was off, he was

always so mesmerizing , even a glimpse of him had the capacity to make her smile and happy...thinking about these she started crying very

badly she wanted to shout , but her voice was choked , even though she always tried to hide her pain and move on but her love , addiction to maan made things worse she wiped her eyes like a mad girl not wanting to cry, but her heart wanted her to cry out ...!!!!

house very much , he always loved to enjoy the cool breeze with his geet in his arms, they used to drink coffee and enjoy the lovely weather and

he used to put his head on her lap and whenever he did that she always used to kiss hiss forehead .Maan always supported geet in all the phases

of her life, he had many shades , a matured companion who would do anything to see his geet happy , and his childish behaviour , and his

anger , he was a very calm and soft person , but geet thought his anger was also so cute as him...all the memories of him were making her life

hell the day she lost him she used to spend all the days and nights crying like a mad soul but she knew that life moves on it doesn't wait for

anyone , life moves on and we have to move on with it...and she tried to move on , but it was not at all easy for her to adjust with a life without

him , because he became her soul ,but she had no option she had too move on he was a part of her life forj ust 3 years but he became a part of

her , Now due to this 3 years of her life she have to spend all her life craving for his love , for his presense , for his smile , his laugh , his anger ,

his support , his protection...!!!!
now she sat on her bad she looked at her phone , her heart was pleading for a call from him , her heart was bleeding , she desperately

wanted to see his name , she picked the mobile and dialled his number "the number you have dialed is currently switched off"
her eyes turned red but she had no expressions in her face , she dialled her mobile number from her landline and watched the display "Maan

calling" she smiled like a dead soul watching his name on his mobile...!!!!
she saw the T.V...it remebere her of their fights for the remote control they used to pull remote and then start fighting , the used to fight for the

whole hour , and both used to miss their fav programs...she kept staring at the remote , she remebered his hands on the remote .
then she watched the pillow , he used to kiss her forehead every morning after waking up and she used to smile watching him and she used to

hug him ...!!!!!!
Everything in that ouse reminded her of him , and not only the things , even her presence reminded her of maan.
Tears were now not flowing from her eyes ,she just kept staring at her mobile expressionless..!!!
And the next morning she left for her hospital , while leaving the house she blurted "Bye Maan"
then she realised wat she said...she then locked the door and whispered "Bye Maan, aj officce se jaldi aa jana, saath me dinner karenge"
"bye dear, All the best for the surgery , agar tum kaho to mai office hi nahi jaaunga , abhi se khaana banana shuru karunga , to raat tak ban hi

jaayega khaana khane layak" She wished to hear...!!!!

Na aaye ho, na aaoge
Na phone pe, bulaoge
Na shaam ki, karaari chai
Labhon se yun, pilaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge
Na din dhale, sathaoge
Na raat ki, nashili bai
Sey neend mein jagaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun
Yeh raat baaki hain
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun
Saath baaki hain..
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hain
Gaye kyun..
Toh Jiyein kyun..

Yaar today is crying day or what😉😉????? First the news ater that all my friends being upset with the news make me upset and now this very sad ff.heart tuched.

U did awesome job with this ff. very sad indeed .oh I can't even put in words. I felt very bad for Geet.

Thank you for the PM and painful update.

Originally posted by: mrk_1

i loved it dear ..😊

either there is no maneet or u kill either of them 😡