M/G OS:Dancing for the Rainbow...

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MysticalRealm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

EDITED ON PAGE TWO... jaldi reply do :D

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hopehot

@hopehot

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

aww loved it ...

.P.S do u know my name ?..and did i mention i love reading ur writings ???

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Thanx for the awesme update

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

beautiful OS...loved the rain dance

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Reya this is really beautiful OS..

Love the story line.. Simple and sweet...

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saba

@luv_DD

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

superb thanks 4r d happy os. . . . . . .. I hpe u get many mre happy ideas n write al of dem

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hey Reya...fantastic OS...we all are Maaneet fans...sometimes I also dream about them in different situations,avataars but I can't write down those thoughts properly as u do,how to explain the scene that is in my mind and all that...their rain dance...their kiss...their conversation...their roothna-manana...every thing so beautiful.

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Reya awesome sweety 😊

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euphoric

@euphoric

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Hieee Reya its me😃

Ohk... so i saw ur PM and was like i need to read this and so i had the page open since morning before i caught with it with lunch😛

hmm and what a coincidence it was raining in the morning over here... u knw i was wondering tht monsoons have hit and no one has put it down in the OS or atleast i haven't read it so this OS came in as a surprise😃 Thanks for putting this buddy😳

I loved it the OS right from the sentence where he's getting impatient to begin his vacation... impatient... and i was keeping my fingers crossed and hoping tht u didn't make her cancel the plans😡😆

his ministrations along with teasings... her combat and demure attitude were simply beautiful. she can be such a kid when she ran into the rain carelessly... Maan praying lords for the street being deserted was so cute😳 and then the rain dance😍 my dil goess hmmm hmmm hmmm😳😆

And then her achoo😆😆... aww his concern over her was so heart touching *feels like pulling his cheeks* I liked Geet's distracting wala dialogue😉😆 ulta chor kotwal ko daante😆😆😆

It was simply beautiful sweetheart😛

Love ya🤗