Os on maneet reunion after ML epilogue pg 3

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I hope you all will like my Os my first attempt.
This scene is starting from where when maan insults geet in conference hall

Part:-1

Maan went to his cabin in angry mood and Dev also follow him
D:" bro yeh aapne Kia kiya apni hi biwi ko Sab ke samne bezat kar diya kyun kyun"
Mk:" yeh tum mujhse puch rahe ho yeh jante hue bhi ke usne nakli wedding ki pictures ban wakar nashar kar wa rahi hai"
D:" woh pictures nakli nahin hai bro"
Mk:" geet meri biwi kabhi ho hi nahi sakti Dev sirf tumhare aur dadima ke kehne par meine usse apne office aur ghar mein rakha par an nahi Dev"
D:" woh ghar sirf aapka nahin hai geet ka bhi hai saath phere liye hai aapne uske saath, saath janmo ka waada nibhane ki kasmein kayi hai aapne, puri duniya ke samne aapne usko geet se geet Maan singh khuraana banaya hai, har takleef mein woh saaya bankar aapke saath sirf isliye rehti hai taake aapko takleef na puchey, jab bhi aapko chot lagti hai tau dard usko Hota hai, agar aapko pareshaan dekhe tau aapki sari takleefo ko woh apna bana Leti hai, ek baar nahin do baar usne aapki jaan bachaiye hai bro aur agar aapki yadasht chali gayi hai agar aapko aapki geet ke alawa Sab kuch yaad hai tau usmein us bechari ki kya gait hai bro jawab dijiye"
Mk:" mujhe in jhooti kahaniyon pe yakeen nahin hai aur kya kaha tumne meri yadasht chali gayi hai"
D:" haa bro aapki yadasht chali gayi, aapko partial amnesia hai, aapke pichle dead saal ke yadasht jaa chuki hai isliye geet aapko yaad nahin hai"
Mk:" kya bakwaas kar rahe ho"
D:" mein bakwaas nahin kar raha hu aur aapko pata hai bro aapke samne wese tau geet buhat bolti hai, khush rehti hai, hasti hai muskarti hai par us muskarahat ke jo piche udasi haina woh meine dekhi hai koi din ya koi raat Aesi nahin jaati jis din geet ke ankhon mein ansoo naa ho din raat woh bas yahi dua karti hai ke aap use wapis mil jao"
Mk:" Dev chale jao yahan se plz leave"
D:" mein tau Chala jao ga bro par mere jaane se sach badal nahin jaaye ga, geet ko apna lijiye bro isse pehle buhat der hojaye"
Dev left from there
Maan sat on his knees and remembering each word of dev's, he had tears in his eyes
Mk:"kya geet sach mein meri biwi hai aur agar hai tau mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi kya mujhe sach mein partial amnesia hai issliye mujhe kuch yaad nahin, yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe, aur mere saare Sawalon ke jawab dadima de sakti hai mujhe dadima se pochna hoga"
He get from there, wipes his tears and runs to home
Maan went to dadimas room, she was reading magazine
Mk:" dadima"
Dadima:" Maan bete aap kab aaye"
Mk:" dadima mein aapse Jo punchu ga plz mujhe sach sach bataiye ga plz"
Dadima was shocked what happened to him suddenly
Da:" haa bete boliye"
Mk:" mera geet se kya rishta hai"
Dadima was OMG did he know about his and Geets relationship
Mk:" aap khamosh kyun hai jawab dijiye"
Da:" bete woh geet"
Mk:" plz dadima"
Da:" theek hai agar aap sach sunna chahte hai tau suniye geet aapki patni hai"
Maan was shocked
Da:" aapne saath phere lekar unhein apni biwi banaya hai..."
And she narrates every single thing to him about geet when they meet in hoshiyar pur, when geet joined his office, what Dev did to geet, how they get married, about Amritsar, her baby loss everything
Maan was crying and hugged dadima
Mk:" yeh meine kya kar diya, apne hi haathon se apni zindagi barbad kar Dali, kya kuch nahin kaha meine geet ko aur woh bechari chup chap sunti rahi mein apne aapko kabhil
Maaf nahin kar paoga kabhi nahin, kya kuch nahin Saha usne aur ab phir... Nahin mein is baar kuch galat nahin hone donga kuch galat nahin

Precap:- geet's accident

I hope u all will my first attempt plz plz plz do comments and tell me how it was, should I continue


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice, but in real, I want Maan himself to remember the whole, coz others telling him look much like forcing...
By the way, welcome to IF and to Geet forum 😊
Edited by temorocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I know maans memory will be come in real so dont worry I will update in next part 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice OS...loved it..
waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update!but i dnt want geet's accident.kitne baar chakkar lagayenge khurana's hospital ka.ab aur nahi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I know yaar 😆 but it will be interesting just like filmi reunion, geets accident will bring maan's memory back that's why i know you will love it 😳
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Part:- 2
Night:8pm
Geet was walking alone on road
G:" kyun babaji kyun kyun kia aapne mere saath aesa kya gunnah hai mera yeh ke mein apne Maan ko apni zindagi se bhi zada pyaar karti hoon ya phir aap mujhe kush dekhna hi nahin chahte, kyun karte ho aap mere saath aesa, mere maan mujhe bhul Gaya hai aaj meine aapne jeene ki akhri wajah bhi kho di kis kiliye jiyu mein koi nahin hai mera koi nahin"
Geet was crying loudly
Maan sit in his car and went out for looking her
Mk:" kaha ho Tum geet bhale mujhe kuch yaad nahin par mujhe itna zaroor pata hai k Tum meri zindagi ho aur mein apni zindagi ke bina nahin jee sakta"
He was madly driving his car looking here and there
Finally he saw geet but when he saw that car is coming towards her,
Mk:" geettt geet"
Geet was not listening she was lost in her thoughts
Maan was scared to death
He rushed to her but that car hit geet and went off
Now everything was silenced atleast for5 minutes
Maan saw geet laying on road with blood flowing from her head
He remebered everything yes he remembered that she is his wife yes geet is his wife
How he can forget his mishty how he hated himself
Geet saw him Maan saw her
Maan runs to her and put her head in his lap
Maan was crying
Mk:" kuch nahin hoga geet mein tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga"
G:" ma..maan Maan aa..aapko sa..b yaad aagaya hai"
Mk:" haa geet mujhe Sab yaad aagaya hai geet mein apni misty ko kuch nahin hone dunga"
He lifts her in his arm and took to her hospital he was shouting
Mk:" doctor doctor "
Nurses and doctors came
Doc:" o god yeh tau police case hai"
Mk:" doc meri wife ko bacha lijiye"
Doc:" pehle yeh form fill kar dijiye"
Maan gets angry
Mk:" damned with your forms doc mein maan Singh khuraana hu aur agar meri biwi ko kuch hogaya tau mein is pure hospital ko barbaad kar dalunga aab jaldi kijiye"
Doctors got scared and said
Doc:" yes mr khuraana"
Doc:" nurses jaldi inne operation theatre lekar chalo"
They started her operation
Dadima, Dev, Adi, pink, nandini and lucky came
Da:" maan bete kya hua geet ko"
Maan was crying
Da:" maan jawab dijiye" shouts
Mk:" ge..geet ka accident hogaya hai dadima"
Da:" kyaa"
Maan hugged her
Mk:" meri geet ko bacha lijiye dadima mein mar jaunga uske bina"
Everyone looked at him with shocked face
Dev:" bro aapko Sab kuch yaad aagaya hai"
Mk:" haa mujhe Sab yaad aagaya hai"
Da:" kuch nahin hoga humari geet Kau kuch nahin"
Just then nurse came out
Mk:" nurse meri biwi"
N:" sorry mr khuraana abhi hum kuch nahin keh sakte abhi operation ho raha hai" she left from there and Maan sat there helpless praying in his heart from geets babaji
Mk:" meri geet ko bacha lijiye plz"
After 1 hour
Doctors came out and said
Doc:" congratulations mr khuraana aab aapki wife out of danger hai"
Mk:" kya" he said happily
Mk:" thank you so much doc"
Doc:" thanks mujhe nahin upar wale ko kahiye kyun Jo haalat unke beach mein hogayi thi uske baad unhe bacha na buhat mushkil hogaya tha par aab sab theek"
Mk:" kya mein unse mil sakta hu"
Doc:" abhi woh behosh hai unhe 1 gante tak hosh aaya ga abhi hum unhe icu mein shift kar rahe hai uske baad aap unse mil sakte hai"
Mk:" thank you"
Doctors left from there
Maan hugged dadima and Dev and everyone
She was shifted to icu and maan came there and saw geet laying on bed, she was looking so peaceful, so calm
He sit beside her and hold her hand very gently and caresses it
He bends down and kissed her forehead
After1:-
Geet gets conscious and slowly opened her eyes
And said
G:" maan"
Maan looked at her and smiles widely with tears in his eyes
Mk:" kaisi ho mishty I am sorry geet mujhe Maaf kardo mein tumhe kaise bhul Gaya... Mein buhat bura hu tumhe kitna pareshaan karta hoon I am sorry"
Geet put her hand on his cheek and caresses it lovingly
G:" aapko maafi mangni ke koi zaroorat nahin hai Jo kuch hua usmein aapki koi galti nahin hai, maan I LOVE U"
Maan kissed her forehead and said
Mk:" I LOVE U too mishty I will always love u "
Dadima and Dev everyone came to meet geet


Precap:- epilouge
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Posted: 14 years ago
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No repplies I think you don't like my os 💔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome parts
waiting 2 read the epilogue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome os.. waiting for the epilogue:)

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