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hopehot

@hopehot

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Ohmygod!

ok...i m trying really hard not to cry 😭...trust me its hard ...ok...can i just say i LOVED IT ...

it was...

beautiful, hair-raising, heart-stirring, heart-stopping, spine-tingling, amazing, astonishing, awe-inspiring, exciting, impressive, magnificent moving, overwhelming, stunning, thrilling

all these words seem like an under statement

THANK U sooo much for writing this OS

Edited by hopehot - 14 years ago

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

as soon as i saw a PM from u...i was like...ok..prepare urself...u will say i hate...u will cry bitterly n will curse her y does she writes so beautifully...

so here i am...trying to decipher what to write...🤔

starting with the story...loved it...

wonderful OS...

i so wanted to say i hate you...but just couldnt...

coz it was related to a mother who would do anything for her daughter...she was indeed a heartless woman who gave her heart to kriya n maan...

it was beautifully written...

loved the pain that they shared...somewhere i think maan always knew what geet would do...or at least i guessed it as soon as i came to knw that kriya needs a donor...

n she being her mom...well the word MOM says it all...no need to explain furthur...

loved reading it...

it was emotional n heart touching...

thnx for PM...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

dear u are really heartless but very beautifully written...
the power of Mother's love is very nicely expressed...

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: maanddy

Ha ha !

Good Good ! Otherwise, you will end up like me, voting only for readers ! 🤣

and there is one more good reason for me not to vote..actually i have a lot of favs in ffs/os and ss so i am not able to make up my mind...

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

I am heartless, because the very first time I saw you, I lost my heart to you...

This one touched me deep!

RESERVED for I don't know what!

Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

OMGGG..this is so good...this piece touched me deeply..and the way u wrote was just fab...

Geet really is the best mother one can be...and the love of a parent runs the deepest...and u portrayed it so beautifully

You had me teary eyed by the end of the piece...

so i loved it...

thank u for a wonderful piece...

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

that was heart breaking!!! but beautiful!! so sad!!
JAZ

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: maanddy

Thanks Jyothi ! 🤗 I wonder if you are saying this in one OS of mine, what will you say when you will read my other works ??

Pakka, Heartless ! 😆

ohh maandy frankly to speak u r really HERRTLESS hahaha...
i read other ur other os also dear...
A MIRACLE N A PROMISE WELL KEPT r my fav...
when i read a promise well kept... really i cried...
bt the way u write na i loved it...

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-Mrs.MSK-

@-Mrs.MSK-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: maanddy

OMG !

Thush, I saw you on my works thread after ages ! And, I am so glad to know that I am someone's kind of writer ! Even I love sad and dark stories ! 😳

Now that you are back, I know you must have missed my last few depressing OSs ! 😆 And, I am so much honored that you only read my OS ! WOW !

Thank you so so so much ! 🤗🤗🤗

Keep in touch man ! 😉

Lol damn busy these days but Will Never gonna miss ur Awesome Os's ..Well i actually went yesternight to read ur FF and then saw all the pages and stopped 😆Now stop looking at my comment in a angry way..im such a lazy one 😆dont worry now im again going to search the one i missed to read... the only best writer i kn in this forum is u soo now i have no way, have to read it anyway 😆 Just Kidding ...Good luck for ur Upcomeing works..Love ya 🤗 🤗🤗 and yep sure will keep in Touch after all we are still and will be Die hard fans of Maan 😳

Edited by --Thush-- - 14 years ago