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anks_ams

@anks_ams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: maanddy

See ?

It was purposefully, coz I knew after this my official name will be " Heartless " so I thought lemme just try and make them smile !

First I put it in the beginning but later I changed the thought and dropped it down to see smile on some faces !

Like you ! 🤗🤗🤗

Thank you so much babes ! Loved it that despite hating it, you loved it ! 😆

love u maady🤗 keep on writing :)

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

so beautifully written

the love of a mother

her pain

her feelings n emotions

a helpless father n lover

who had to go on with her memories

n raise their daughter for her

amazing

veryu beautifully written

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Beautifully written maddy...loved it to the core...!!
she was a heartless woman 4 maan n her daughter Kriya...still they loved her irrevocably...geet never expressed her love openly but before going she did...she did say she loves him...n that made maan smile thru his tears...
she was a fighter n she had to win the battle of saving her baby...wich she did beautifully...she sacrificed her own life for hers...she was a MOTHER...n mothers can go to ny extent to save their baby whether be it taking their own lives too...n that is the same thing geet did...maan supported her in all ways that he could..n they won the battle...maan had a reason now to stay alive as he had to look after Kriya...wich he did immensely...they both enjoyed their life together n he was always smiling coz geet accepted her feelings...😊...
Amazingly written maddy...👏 👏 👏
beautiful..
loved the OS a lot...!!!

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

woman .. u will be the death of me ... hud hoti hai sadism ki ...

I dont understand one thing .. why the IF writers are hell bent on writing only sad, heart wrenching OSs... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

me not talking to you ... hmmmph ... i asked for a happy one and u gave me another heart attack ... me still not out of Condemned and you gave me Heartless ... I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you ... sniff sniff ... sob sob 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

happy shappy OS mein koi masla hai ?

"goes away to sulk in the corner"

Edit : I guess i dont need to tell you how was it ... itnay dramay se idea to ho gaya hoga

______

Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

hey maanddy ...good to see u back..

as expected painful os..

but touching..

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Hmm! Liked it as you see, the LIKE tab says it all & U know I use it only when I mean it.
So I liked it ...but a question to u my Lady - Why do you have to kill one of them in almost all OS of yours me had the pleasure to read.

Na! it was needed I agree as per the concept here & the rest but, but still why such concept enter you mind that is so full of life...!!!

Do answer & leave me a word when you do. And haan no jootis please 😛

PS. - I liked it coz Vijay has not alloted us L❤️VE button as for yet, toh issi sai kaam chalao😉

Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago

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Aatiya

@PaintedSky

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Maddy u r really HEARTLESS !!

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

speechless... awesome wonderful os...
very painful n emotional one...
heart touching...
a sad ending... hats off to u maddy... no words to express...
i loved it... n me crying after reading this os...
wonderful job...

jyothi