SCARY MANEET SS: ETERNITY(IMP NOTE:Page 15) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats for the new SS... A different concept - scary one... liked the concept.. . waiting eagerly... u missed me in the pm list... dont forget to add me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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add me 2 d pm list
n waiting 2 see wt this ff has in store for us...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting 4 ur update...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PROLOGUE

In the night,A man about 28 years old was slowly walking in the forest.

Man(Sadly):Acha bhala maal haat se nikal gaya...Per shukar hai iss guard se main bach gaya warna jaan se bhi jata.

He saw a mansion whose lights were off.Haunted Mansion halloweenHe smiled evilly.

Man(Thinking):Lagta hai sab so rahe hain aur yahan koi guard bhi nazar nahi aa raha.Aise moka (Chance) roz roz nahi milte.Mujhe iss moke se faida uthana chahiye.

He was near the gate of the mansion when he saw a woman was crying.

The scene was kinda like this.Please watch the scene from 2:25 to 3:10.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=aB4akJ3WKyk[/YOUTUBE]

He was facing her back.He came close to her.

Man:Tumhi kya hua tum kyu ro rahe ho?

The woman didnot give the answer.He heard rustling of leaves.He turned around and found no one.When he turned towards the woman.He was shocked to find no one there.He felt someone behind his back.He turned around and found her.

Please hear this.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVPt5CwtNkc&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]

He started to run.Suddenly someone gripped his legs.He started to scream.But then there was just silence...

A old man holding lantern came out of the mansion.Railroad Man Holding Lantern

He looked around and found a cat.

Old man:Idhar kya kar rahe ho snowbell.Chalo andar chalte hain.

Snowbell followed him and went in the mansion.While looking at her back...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTE:

Thanxxx for ur wonderful comments🤗.

Sorry for late update😭!

I will try to update part one today.

Part 1 will start after the prologue with maneet's entry.

I want to make the prologue kinda scary but i guess that was not scary.

But still i hope u guys like it😳.

Love❤️,

Fatima

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanxx for liking and commenting😃!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

it was simply mindblowing



Thanxx for liking it 😃!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please do add me to your pm list
omg i just saw the pic on your prologue of the girl and it scared the crap outta me
yes i know i'm smart to check out this at 12 midnight
anyways as soon as i saw this pic my friend texted me and my phone made a sound and i nearly jumped!
awesome scary start PLEASE don't forget to pm meee xD
i've learned my lesson i'm not brave enough to read scary stories at night!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u know wht ... i love horror n scary stuff a lot...

its really awesome to read this... cant wait continue yaar

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