M/G SS: Vanilla Twilight ( last ch.pg.42) jul 26

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#331

Hey all...i completely forgot i was suppose to give you the song that inspired this whole story...
It's Vanilla Twilight by Owl City...these lyrics are beautiful...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pIz2K3ArrWk&ob=av2e
[YOUTUBE]Owl City - Vanilla Twilight[/YOUTUBE]

"Vanilla Twilight"

The stars lean down to kiss you
And I lie awake and miss you
Pour me a heavy dose of atmosphere
Cause I'll doze off safe and soundly
But I'll miss your arms around me
I'd send a postcard to you, dear
Cause I wish you were here

I'll watch the night turn light blue
But it's not the same without you
Because it takes two to whisper quietly
The silence isn't so bad
Till I look at my hands and feel sad
Cause the spaces between my fingers
Are right where yours fit perfectly

I'll find repose in new ways
Though I haven't slept in two days
Cause cold nostalgia chills me to the bone
But drenched in vanilla twilight
I'll sit on the front porch all night
Waist deep in thought because when
I think of you I don't feel so alone

I don't feel so alone
I don't feel so alone

As many times as I blink
I'll think of you tonight
(Tonight, tonight, tonight...)

I'll think of you tonight

When violet eyes get brighter
And heavy wings grow lighter
I'll taste the sky and feel alive again
And I'll forget the world that I knew
But I swear I won't forget you
Oh if my voice could reach back through the past
I'd whisper in your ear:
"Oh darling I wish you were here"

And also a element of it is also from The Choice by Nicholas Spark...u folks should give that a read :)

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#332

*wipes tears off the keyboard* I loved the update. I knew it was going to be a sad ending, even if I was hoping for a happy ending.

Great SS! You wrote this amazingly! And the song fit perfectly! Thank you for writing this!

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#333

zipped 😃

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: sindu555
zipped 😃

Lolz 😆🤗

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#335

so i come here...to read a completed SS...and it says its inspired by a song...all is well...im reading and reading...and i think at ch 2 it finally clicked...that this is the story you mentioned...your twist on The Choice...so im reading through all the flashbacks...all the cuteness...everything...all the pain...the tears...the sadness and all that...but of course...here im expecting you to carry on like the book did...so im not stressing it 😃...but the...the end is nearing and Maan is all set to pull the plug...im praying for miracle and everything ...but clearly...Babaji was not listening to me!! *hmph*...you KILLED her 😲!! how could you KILL her!! 😭...that is just not cool!! you let me to a false sense of security and i do not appreciate that...*HMPH* 😡...

though...what i did love is that you incorporated the "promise" that maan made to geet...much like the will gabby left for travis...😭...except in the book...travis was a wimp and couldnt pull the plug..thank God! cuz gabby woke up! would it have killed you to let her survive? 😭

JAZ

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#336

Dekha Dekha Reya even Jazz the Saddist didnt like the end..hehe.

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: jnawaz
so i come here...to read a completed SS...and it says its inspired by a song...all is well...im reading and reading...and i think at ch 2 it finally clicked...that this is the story you mentioned...your twist on The Choice...so im reading through all the flashbacks...all the cuteness...everything...all the pain...the tears...the sadness and all that...but of course...here im expecting you to carry on like the book did...so im not stressing it 😃...but the...the end is nearing and Maan is all set to pull the plug...im praying for miracle and everything ...but clearly...Babaji was not listening to me!! *hmph*...you KILLED her 😲!! how could you KILL her!! 😭...that is just not cool!! you let me to a false sense of security and i do not appreciate that...*HMPH* 😡...
though...what i did love is that you incorporated the "promise" that maan made to geet...much like the will gabby left for travis...😭...except in the book...travis was a wimp and couldnt pull the plug..thank God! cuz gabby woke up! would it have killed you to let her survive? 😭
JAZ

So i am all excited that you actually came for the first time to comment on my work...the jaz commenting on reya's work...it's a big deal...then u burst my bubble by not liking the end 😭

come on Jaz...how true would the character of MSK (who is a a man of his words) if he didn't carry out the promise? he was a whim for a year...one whole year he didn't plug the plug but then Geet came in his dream...and told him to let her go...

i wouldn't have killed me to let her survive but a happy ending didn't sit right with me...so ya

u always make us depressed with ur stories...it was time i returned the favour 😆

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: mchopra
Dekha Dekha Reya even Jazz the Saddist didnt like the end..hehe.

oh please...look who is talking...4 time killer😡

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: mchopra
Dekha Dekha Reya even Jazz the Saddist didnt like the end..hehe.

when did i say i didnt like it...i liked it...painful as it was...it was good...Reya made the story her own...and i applaud that...you keep killing them reya!! main hoon tere saath!! ha ah😃

JAZ

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Jazmin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#340

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
So i am all excited that you actually came for the first time to comment on my work...the jaz commenting on reya's work...it's a big deal...then u burst my bubble by not liking the end 😭
come on Jaz...how true would the character of MSK (who is a a man of his words) if he didn't carry out the promise? he was a whim for a year...one whole year he didn't plug the plug but then Geet came in his dream...and told him to let her go...
i wouldn't have killed me to let her survive but a happy ending didn't sit right with me...so ya
u always make us depressed with ur stories...it was time i returned the favour 😆

eh lo Babaji...yeh bhi...when did i say i didnt like the ending? i simply said your false sense of security...the one i had since i read The Choice...was what i didnt like...but the ending was awesome...and i agree with what you said...MSK wouldnt be MSK if he ignored the wishes of his Geet...no matter how painful it was for him...the part when you said that at that moment two people died...geet and her soul mate maan...tears were stinging my eyes!! 😭...and ya...happy ending not sitting well..i know all about that...he he...i loved this piece!! 👏

JAZ

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