M/G SS: Vanilla Twilight ( last ch.pg.42) jul 26

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#321

I had lump on my throat throughout this update.
I knew u would end it this way, but as usual I gave a second tot u might give us a happy ending.
Thou it was an painful part but I am convince with ur decision to end Geet's life.
Maan made a correct decision by fulfilling his promise to Geet.
He needs to set her live free...
Thx for sharing a wonderful story...
Truly brilliant.

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Mishali Patel

@londongirl95

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

this is the first SS that has made me cry so so so so so so so so so so much!!!!! this last chapter was just so heartbreaking and i cant stop crying!! you penned it down so well that i cant stop crying!! its difficult to stop my tears!!! just imagining everything and maan in so so so so much pain!! i was hoping that a miracle would happen when the doctor asked maan for the last time if he wanted to do this and geet's voice would be heard but NO!! instead we got her dying!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

but i would really love to read the ending that you wrote. i really do want to read it. and i hope you come back with a new story soon!!

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Awesome update..

really sad n emotional one...

continue soon

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

OMG reya u made me cry while reading this SS...could not stop the tears rolling down...😭
brilliantly written yaar...
the way u portrayed maan's emotions when he was to stop the machine...he did as he had promised his mishti...Oh God...it must have been so hard for him to do that especially wen she was his life n love...!!!😭...
its hard for people to stop the life supportin machine for their beloved ones who r suffering like this..
in a way u r giving them freedom but still doin it with ur own hands is really really hard...n reya u have brought out those emotions really well...
this was a sad one..
but it was awesome n beautiful...!!!
loved it alooott...
thanks for the PM...😳

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

oh! the way you explained maan's day , I thought he is living a robotic life, but then she was still alive, how will he live without her now????????? ,

sad yaar , i seriously want to bring her back just to see him smile once please please you are a writer right? that means creator of this story, you can do whatever you like, please if you want keep her in life support thats fine but dont kill her , he will be in more pain than herself.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

part 6
u made me cry...
that was really very touching and damn emotional...
exactly 2 lives were lost...
not just Geet but also Maan...
very painful story...
nicely written...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Thanks 4 da pm Reya...read the update before cld get pm n did comment. Nyways thanks 4 a superb yet sad OS. The end was justified...

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Very nicely written 👍🏼 but , yeah , I cried ... big time !!!

You write tragedies very well 👍🏼

I can feel the pain in my heart ; the entire imagination part ,I knew since you started it coz somehow I felt you're not gonna give us Geet that soon ; well in the end , my guess was right !!! 😆

You really have to make up for the hearts you broke with this 🥺

Come back with a brand new romantic story of Geet & Maan sans the death of the leads ! 😆

Awaiting that 😍

Loved "Vanilla Twilight" & thanks for pm 😊