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Deva

@jwalamukhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

hey don't throw stones on me for starting new work without completing old ones...but kya karu agar nahi likha tho mein concept bhool jaonga...isliye..i gave a prologue..so that i can update slowly and steadily after that...if u don't like this concept plz feel free to express..😊

prologue

It was the duty of angels to protect humans. For each human..there will be one angel safe gaurding him/her. All the angels were doing their duty properly...except two...one the angel of geet and the other the angel of maan...they were enjoying themselves as they had no work...because maan was there for geet to protect her all the time and geet was there for maan to take care of him each and every second...So their two angels had no work and were commenting on other angle's work...This sort of irresponsible behavior was reported to the head of angels by their colleagues and they were presented before the concerned authority...

The head of angels asked them...the reason for their irresponsible behavior...the two angels answered "my lord... those two humans are not giving us any chance to protect them...so what can we do...they are protecting each other before we reach them...making us jobless..." with a disappointed face.

the head of angels got furious..."u r trying to escape..thats what i can analyse from ur explanation...now..i don't want to hear any word from u...next time i should not get any complaints...if not i will make u humans"

the two angels got scared ...they sat and made a plan...they themselves got disguised as maan and geet and reached the earth to create problems between maan and geet...to separate them..so that they can do their duty...

but little they know that they are messing up with MSK...who will not spare even god if he troubles his geet...

to be continued...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QO2YI9O8nig[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago

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saim

@amzu32

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

very unique story...sounds really interesting .

plz cont soon:)

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

nice concept but dear first finish ur pending works

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-Crayon-

@-Crayon-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

very unique concept ...sounds intresting!!! 😊

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

i think u have got a very innovative brains already u r running 5-6 ss still u got one more concept thanks so much and i think first u would finish with love...maan as it is close to 40 parts plz answer me