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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

PART ; 5

Geet : Hi pops . I am gud. Yahan boht maza araha hia yahan sab bohat achay hain , Simran aunty , dadima , They are really good .

Geet continued to talk...

In the evening dadima came to geet's room ,Dadima : Geet betay ap tou bore horahe hongi , kia karain ap aj he ayen hain aur maan ko aj he kaam agaya hai , lekin ap fikar mat kijiye humne maan se bat karli hai wo apko disc le jayenge .

Geet : nahe dadima ...

Dadima : beta maan bohat mushkil se disc jane k liye maney hain ap plz mana mat kijiye .

Geet : Ok dadima , thank you .

Dadima : Ap jaldi ready hojaiye maan aate he honge .

Maan honk the car ,,,,,,,,,, Geet to herself # kharoos thori daer ruk nahe sakta #

Geet came downstairs wearing a beautiful dress , looking like a princess .

Maan was watching her with his open mouth thinking # I admire this girl #

As soon as they reached the disc girls surrounded maan and all of them wanting to dance with him , be with him . Geet was dancing on the floor enjoying , maan saw some guys behaving bad with her .

Maan reached there first guy : Teri behan hai ? biwi hai ? girl friend hai ? Ya tu iska body guard hai . Maan held his collar and beat him black him blue . The other guys were so afraid they ran away .Geet was crying as maan asked her : Geet tum theek ho ? She hugged him , he knew she was feeling odd , he wanted to comfort her . his hands slowly moved on her thin waist.

They shared a passionate hug. Geet's tears were falling on maan's shirt .He calmed her and made her sit in the car...

PRECAP: Itna bhi kharoos nahe hai ,...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

PART 6

As they drove halfway she slept. Her hair strands were disturbing her .

He stopped the car at a side and put her hairs behind her ears.

She was in deep sleep so she took his hand .

He was driving now with one hand.

As they reached the mansion and honk the car , she suddenly woke up .

They went inside where dadi was waiting for them , they were tired so went to sleep .

Geet changed her dress and laying on her bed thinking # itna bhi kahroos nahe hai thank you tou bol he sakti hun #

Next day dadi suggested geet to go office with maan as she was getting bored .

Geet asked maan to stop the car infront of a flower shop and went inside.

Maan : Ye larki zarur mujhe late karwayegi.

Geet came and put a flower on his side dashboard and said : Thank you for last night .

Maan hesitant ( THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA HESITANT ) : Nothing like thank u u were in problem so i helped you .

Geet : So can we be friends now ? passing her hand towards maan.

Maan also passed his hand and nodded for yes she saw maan smiling for the first time.

Geet : you look cute when you smile .

They were talking the whole way Actually only geet talking and maan listening .

As the car stopped geet came out and saw a big building written

KC " KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS "

Precap : Geet naraz .

AMY

Part : 7

As they walked inside people greeted them " Hello sir , hello maam "

Geet's foot slipped but maan held her by waist , eyelock ( MAAHI)

They broke out when Adi came : si si sir

They straightened theirselves

Maan : Han adi bolo

Adi : Sir apki aj ki sari meetings cancel hogayen hain.

Maan : theek hai adi.

Maan took geet to his cabin ,

Geet : Agar apko bura na lage tou can I say something ?

Maan : hmmm

Geet : Aj ap busy nahe ho tou can we go for outing in delhi ?

Maan : hmm

Maan was looking in his laptop he was busy doing something .

Geet thought # Aik tou i am talking with him and he ... #

Geet : wese apka cabin bohat acha hai .

Maan didn't answer.

She got frustrated and got up and started walking out of cabin.

Maan stood up and looked at her he knew something is going in her mind .

Maan : Kia hua geet , tum kahan jarahe ho ?

Geet stepping ahead as talking : Apko kia farq parta hai apko tou bus apni pari hai .Maan pinned to the wall.

Maan : Wo main geet , Geet put her finger on his lips , Maan eyes widened.

Geet : ab kuch bolte q nahe ?

Maan pointed at her finger which was still on his lips with his hand .

Geet showed her jhoota gussa and walked out of cabin.

Geet was walking outside in anger and maan was following her " Geet geet ruko tou , meri bat tou suno "

The office staff was surprised to see this scene.

Geet came out and sat in car . Maan sat on driver's seat.

Geet " Ab kiun mere peechay arahe ho ? Apko tou lagta hai u r alone in the cabin " Hnn

Maan started the car .

Precap : Maan manaofying geet

AMY

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Part : 8Maan started the car and drove quitely and geet with her big baby face .Maan stopped the car on the signal . # Sahab phool lelo , taaza phool hain , maam sahab boat khush hongi , ap dono ki jodi salamat rahegi #Both of them felt embarrased . Maan took the flower's basket from the child and gave him money.He put the basket in her lap and after holding his ears said : SORRY.(I am wondering MAAN SINGH KHURANA , sorry????)Geet : Its ok. Thank you for the flowers.Maan teasingly : ye flowers tumhare liye to nahe hain.Geet held the basket tightly as maan tried to snatch it,Both of them were having WWF for the flower basket , The basket went into the air and all the flowers fell on both of themEyelock , holding each others hand ( MAAHI MAAHI VE MAHI MAHI VE ).As the car behind them honked , they straightened themselves.Maan started the car and drove her to the cafe. Maan : Pehle lunch karlete hain , I am starving .Geet : Ok.Maan ordered lunch for both of them.They were eating and laughing ( Only geet laughing , maan smiling ).Cafe staff was surprised to see maan like this , because he only came for business meetings.After the cafe they ate baraf gola , Gol gappay , Chaat .On geets insistance .They reached home and went to their respective rooms.Both of them were being really good .Maan in his room # Is larki mai zaroor kuch bat hai , mene iske bare main galat socha tha , ye tou sabke sath adjust karleti hai, Hansti bhi hai , kitni cute hai #Maan had obviously started feeling somethin for her .PRECAP: Trip

PART : 9In the morning , geet came out of her room.Dadima and everyone were sitting on dining table . Dadima : Maan beta dr.gupta ki beti ki shadi hai amritsar main , Hamari tabiyat theek nahe hai warna ( Geet didn't let her complete as she heard dadi not being well)Geet : Dadima kia hua apko ? Apki tabiyat theek nahe hai ? Dadima : Nahe beta bus halka sa Blood Pressure low hai isliye...Beta maan ap q nahe chale jate aur geet ko bhi le jaiye , ye amritsar ghoom bhi lengi or indian wedding bhi dekh lengi.Maan : Lekin dadima wahan ...Geet : Lekin wekin kuch nahe mai tou jaongi , Dadima :Bus maan tou faisla hogaya k geet apke sath jayengi , ( And winked at geet )Both of them went to their rooms to pack their luggages .Dadi came into geet's room : Geet beta hum apke liye kuch indian dresses laye hain .Geet : Lekin dadi mujhe tou ye pehanna nahe aata.Dadi : Hum hain na beta .Dadi taught her how to wear a saree which she was going to wear in sangeet .Maan was waiting downstairs .When geet came downstairs , everyone was glancing her , She looked damn gorgeous , Wearing a frock .Geet : Dadima , dekha apne I said I wouldn't look good , And pointed at maan's face .Dadi : Maan beta geet achi nahe lag rahe kia ?Maan : Nahe dadi , mera matlab hai han bohat achi lag rahe hai.Maan and geet sat in car and started driving .As they drove halfway rain started .Geet asked maan to stop car she came out and started dancing in the rain .Maan was watching her from inside the car.He came out of the car still lost watching her .She remembered of her family , and her memory dancing in rain with her father .She stopped and tears falling out of her eyes .Maan went to her and put his hand on her shoulder hesitantly.She turned and hugged himMaan heart was singing , winds were blowing , rain was falling and his life in his arms , But he didn't knew what was the feeling.AISA LAGA JAISE DILL MILL GAYE.They broke out and felt embarrased and sat in car and started driving.

PRECAP: Guess the bride and groom.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

PART : 10

When they reached amritsar it was evening , Every one welcomed them .

Geet was really excited . She asked to a girl about the bride . The girl told she's in the garden .

Geet went in garden and saw a beutiful girl .

Geet : Kia ap mujhe bata sakti ho where is the bride ? I want to meet her.

Girl : Yes, you are geet na ?

Geet : Yeah , how do you know ?

Girl : Tumhain kon bhool sakta hai , Meri sari anklets le jati thi or mere sare gifts bhi tum hi kholti thi.

Geet: Tum riddhima ? Tum yahan kese ?

Riddhima : Riddhima nahe Dr. Riddihma Gupta , Main he hun bride .

Geet hugged her . She was so delighted .

Geet : Acha ye tou batao wo bandar kahan hai /

Riddhima blushed , Geet understood that Bandar is his groom

Riddima : Tum sangeet tak boys building mai nahe jasakti and no one of them can come here. Meet him in sangeet Ok?

Geet and Riddhima were childhood best friends.

Armaan and Maan were like brothers.

Later at night riddima went down with other girls , geet was still getting ready.

Maan came to take some flowers from Riddhima's room where geet was ready and coming out of the room .

Both of them clashed on the room door and rolled on the floor with flowers string which was on gate for decoration and tying them.

They were tangled as they tried to get up they were falling on each other.

Maan : Aik minute , (He untangled the string and got up and passed his hand to geet for help)

Geet : thank you phir se bachane k liye .

Both of them started laughing .

Maan : Chalo sab hamara neechay wait har rahe honge .

He came close to her and whispered in her ear : You r looking gorgeous.

She blushed ( OMG she blushed).

They both went downstairs where armaan and riddhima were sitting on a sofa .

As armaan saw them coming with each other he whispered in riddhima's ear : Ye dono bhi hamari tarah made for each other lagte hain.

Riddhima nodded for yes.

PRECAP ; Maneet dancing

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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

PART :11

SANGEET

Soon the sangeet ceremony started , many people were dancing ,

Riddhima took geet to dance with her ,

Armaan took maan to dance ,

All of them were dancing on punjab dhol,

Geet's foot tripped in her saree as she was not used to wear it ,

Maan held her , everyone was watching them.

After the sangeet , some girls came and took armaan : Shadi tak riddhima di se no meeting ...

Armaan :Lekin ...

Maan : Ye tou na insafi hai , Q nahe mil sakta wo apni dulhan se

Geet : Ae lo g , main samajhti thi ap business man ho , ap tou lawyer bhi ho.

Maan : GEET. ( maan shouted but geet made a baby face pleading FOR SORRY)

Maan smiled. They took armaan out.

Maan and armaan were sharing the same room . Riddhima and geet were sharing their rooms too.

MEHANDI

Girls were applying mehndi on their hands . Geet was also applying mehndi , The girl asked riddhima kia naam likhna hai ?

Ridhima blushed.

Geet : likho bandar hehehehehehehe.

Ridhima : chup , likhye armaan .

Geet : oey hoey ahem ahem .

The girl had seen maan with geet on sangeet day, she thought that they might be engaged or something ( They are always made for each other i thought )

The girl wrote " maan " on her hand when geet was busy talking.

Ridhima : Geet apni mehndi tou dikha kesi lag rahe hai ?

Geet showed her hand to ridhima , Ridhima's eyes widened , she was shocked.

Geet : aise kia dekh rahe hai , kia hua ?

Ridima :Geet apna hath tou dekh .

Geet saw her hand and shouted ye kia kardia ? Kisne kaha tha ye likhne ko ? He's only my friend.

Everyone except riddhima started laughing on geet..

She ran out on terrace , crying , Maan was there Actually he was attending a business call, When he heard someone crying sitting on a bench .He knew it was geet's voice.

He went there and asked her : Kia hua geet ? TUm ro q rahe ho koi problem ? and wiped her tears.

Geet showed her hand ,

Maan : Tum isliye ro rahe ho ? Mera nam itna bura hai kia ?

Geet : Nahe , wo us mehndi wali ne galti se apka nam likha and everyone started laughing on me ( Sobbing geet )

Maan : shoo ... chup bilkul chup , isme ronay ki kia bat hai.Let them laugh.

And hugged her ,

He couldn't see tears falling of her eyes , his heart broke into pieces, he was definitely not happy , He didn't knew why he was getting so restless.

AISA HE HOTA HAI JAB DILL MILL GAYE.

He left her to her room . Said : Goodnight and left.

PRECAP: Shadi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Next mrning riddhima went to parlour , everyone was happy , excited and getting ready.Geet got ready and was trying to tie her string .Maan was passing from there .She called him : Maan plz meri help kariye na...Maan was shocked , she didn't knew what will her touch do to him.Maan closed his eyes , And tied her string as he touched her , his touch sent 1000 sparks in her body, that was first time she was feeling anything for him .She never knew what it is ? YE HOTA HAI JAB DILL MILL GAYE WEDDING CEREMONYAll the rituals took place very nicely ,Geet saw maan disturbed during the whole ceremony, He was continously talking on his phone .He didn't even had his food . He went to the terrace .Geet followed him with food in one plate for him . Even she haven't eaten anything.Geet : Maan , koi problem hai kia ? Apne khana bhi nahe khaya , boht disturbed lag rahe ho ?Maan : nahe , koi problem nahe hai .Geet placed the plate on a side and put her hand on his shoulder .

He hugged her and tears ran down of his eyes.Maan : Mera sapna mujhse chin gaya , the project I have always dreamed of ab wo mera nahe raha , It was really important for me .Geet : Dont worry ye project nahe tou koi or mil jayega , Isme itna tensed hone ki kia bat hai ...Maan : Geet tum nahe janti ye project meri mehnat hi nahe mere jazbat se bhi jura tha.Geet : Acha baba koi bat nahe MAAN SINGH KHURANA k liye kuch bhi impossible nahe hai ,,,,,,,,, ( And gave him a big smile ) " Acha ab ye khana tou khalo , main itni mehnat se layi hun "They broke out of hug,Maan : nahe mujhe bhook nahe hai geet.Geet : Theek hai wese tou mujhe bohat bhook lagi thi lekin ap nahe kha rahe tou main kia karun chaddo ...Maan : Tumhare jesa dunya main ek hi piece hai , ... Geet didn't let him complete and placed a spoon full of rice in his mouth .Maan also placed a spoon in her mouth .They had their food . They went downstairs . After bidaai everyone went to their rooms ,Maan came to geet's room. He knocked the door and came in and gave her a small wrapped gift box. She opened it ,( They were anklets = payal )Maan : Thankyou for being mine, Mera matlab hai thank you for being my friend...Geet :Wow ye bohat pyare hain lekin I dont know how to wear them ?Maan : Can I help you ? Geet nodded for a yes . Maan sat down on his knee and placed geet's foot on his leg and put the anklets .Geet was smiling and looking at his grace , his gesture. She was falling in love with him .Geet : Kese lag rahe hain ?Maan : Bilkul tumhari tarah khoobsurat...Maan and geet lost in each other ( Maahi ve mahi mahi ve )Wo is qadar gum thay ek dusre mainAisa laga jese dill mill gaye .

PRECAP : Maneet Dream Wedding ... COMING SOON

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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

PART : 13

Maan and geet reached to the khurana mansion where Dadima , Yash , Simran , Jai and Pammi were waiting for them.

Geet was so happy to see her parents .

Maan went to his room , he was thinking of the last night where he was hugging misti.

Dadima came : Maan beta shadi kesi rahe ?

Maan : Dadima achi thi shadi , apko pata hai geet ne bohat achay sea djust kia hua tha , usne saree bhi pehni thi , or tou or usne wahan sab ka dil jeet lia tha , sab itne khush thay usse.

Dadima : Beta kia ap geet se shaadi karenge ?

Maan : Kia dadima ? Mene uske bare main kabhi aisa socha nahe wo sirf meri friend hai .

Dadima : Beta ap soch k tou dekhye , Hum sab bhi yahe chahte hain ...

GEET'S ROOM

Geet : Mama apko pata hai maan bohat achay hain unho ne meri boha help ki ...

Pammi : Beta will you marry maan ?

Geet : Mama dadi , simran aunty or specially maan kia kahenge wo sirf mere achay friend hain ...

Pammi : Dadi , or simran aunty ko koi aitraz nahe bus unhain tumhari han ka intezar hai ...

Geet : Or maan , kia wo tayar hain ?

Simran came into room and whispered something in pammi's ear .Pammi was happy.

Simran : Beta geet maan ne tou ,,,,,,, han kardi hai . Lekin hamare liye apka faisla janna zaroori hai ?

Geet : Mera faisla han hai...

All of them were happy , they lall were sitting in the hall ,

The date of their wedding was the day after next day. Tomorrow was haldi and mehndi.

HALDI

The next morning , maan jumped from geet's window .

Geet : Ap yahan ,koi problem ?

Maan : Han , main nahe chahta k ki or tumhain mujhse pehle koi haldi lagaye thats why I am her. Can I ?

Geet blushed , maan applied some haldi on her cheeks , He turned to jump from the window.

She pulled him , they both fell on bed with maan over geet.

Geet rubbed her cheek with his cheek and in that way applied the haldi .

He felt glad and asked her: Kia tum khush ho ?

Geet : G. Kia ap khush hain?

Maan kissed her forehead : Han bohat.

He jumped out ov the window .

They both were dreaming of each other .

PART : 14

WEDDING

Maan and geet both got ready.

Geet looked in the mirror , Girls teased her : Aj tou maan jiju gaye kaam se ,

Geet herself blushed of thinking about her wedding night .

Maan was looking like a prince charming , the dream boy of every girl.

Maan was sitting when geet came downstairs with pammi and simran .

His eyes were froozen on her. She was looking like a fairy.

All the rituals took place . It was the time for dinner.

They were sitting around a table . When every one was having dinner and were busy talking and discussing ,

Maan held geet's hand under the table and whispered in her ear : I LOVE YOU

Geet was blushing , she loved every gesture of him and his sudden I love you made her felt very special.

Geet whispered in his ear : I LOVE YOU TOO MAAN.

After the dinner , geet's bidaai was done .

BRIDE GROOM'S ROOM

Geet was sitting with ghoonat on her face , maan opened the door , came inside.

He watched geet from every side . He came close to her and as he was going to open her ghoongat AN ALaRM CLOCK RANG , He saw it on the table he closed it .

As every time he tried to do so The other alarms rand .

They knew it was their friends and cousin's mischeif.

They found out all the alarms , closed them .

Maan took out her dupatta and placed it on a side

He opened her hairs , kissed on her neck , Removed her earrings very carefully not hurting her , He removed all her jewellery

( As in maha episode of jungle u saw )

As they lay down lights went dim .

NEXT MORNING

( ON ALL YOUR REQUEST )

Maan sleeping shirtless , geet's hand on his chest and her head on side ways.

Maan woke up he was watching geet ,

He whispered in her ear :

GOOD MORNING MRS. MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Geet opened her eyes , still in the same position said : GOOD MORNING MAAN .

PART : 15 : LAST PART

AFTER 5 YEARS

Jai and pammi happy and lives in delhi now near khurana mansion .

Sometimes visit there.

Yash and simran also happy with having a good and responsible son with a caring a loving bahu .

Dadima happy because her choice wasn't proven wrong .

MANEET ROOM

Geet opened the curtains of room , comes close to maan and whispers in his ear : Good morning jan . Uth jaiye .

Maan pulled her on him : Good morning mishti , lekin itni kia jaldi hai abhi subah thori hui .

Geet : Maan chorye na plz koi ajayega

Maan kissing her hand : Koi bat nahe ajane do.

Geet : Maan , dekhiye apko bhi late ho raha hai uthye na

Maan : Jan tum kaho tou main office he na jaon .

Suddenly a cute little girl comes out of spread : Han papa , mama theek keh rahe apko bhi late ho raha aur school k liye mujhe bhi .

(It was maan and geet's little daughter maneet .)

Geet got up from maan and asked them to get ready .

Maan and geet both went to drop maneet school.

In school Armaan and Ridhima's son Prince waiting outside school for maneet with Ridzy and Armaan..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys it was only a short try by my side . I hope u like it.
Its season 2 will come soon with lots of masti .
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LOVE : amy😃👏:*
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sound interesting...please add me to ur pm list
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read all the parts in one go u write very well waiting for season 2

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