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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cue1

LMAO...well im doing my A-levels and we have 3 bio teachers...2 guys and one woman. One of the guys has absolutely no knowledge of the subject at all...sometimes it seems like he's the student and we're the teachers :-| Plus he got given the hard part of the syllabus so now we dont know anything and our exam is in about 3 weeks!!!

Only god can help us

The woman is good and the other guy is like a dude when it comes to bio!!

Oooh that sucks. I know what you mean...and i always wonder how those kind of people get the job in the first place!! *shrugs*

Anyways, just study really really hard and I know you will pass with flying colors!😉

All the best!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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drumroll please *Trrr*😆

PART 2:

Classes were over for the day. Geet's eyes were frantically searching around for Maan. She felt that she needed to apologize to him, properly. Why? She closed her eyes as she unfolded in her head today's earlier events.

Flashback (from Maan's POV)

There she was. She was talking to a couple of her sahelis during break. Her eyes. Wow. How can eyes like hers be so expressive? The dark kohl, accentuating the green flecks of her otherwise hazel-brown eyes made his stomach perform several somersaults. As if in a trance, Maan's feet moved of their own accord toward her. His eyes were only trained on her oblivious ones. Geet turned around to wave goodbye to her friend when she suddenly crashed into a hard, warm wall. Whipping her head around in surprise, her braid slammed on the person's cheek, resulting in a red line from jawline to chin. Which also brought Maan back to reality. "Oomph!" "*gasp* OMG! I'm so sorry! Are you hurt?!" Maan was about to open his mouth when he heard her gasp. She widened her eyes in utter shock and quickly sped past him in the blink of an eye. What the heck happened? Did I do something to tick her off? What happened?! a frustrated Maan thought, whilst running his fingers over the red mark. Suddenly getting angry, he stomped off to class, shooting dark glares to anyone who dared to look at him at that moment.

End Flashback

*sigh* Geet sat alone on the bench, trying to think of the many ways that she could have easily saved that situation. Hey, sorry dude. Dude?! No, scratch that. Maan! Hey sorry didn't see you there. Are you alright? Aargh!!! Why am I such a clumsy old fool? She got up to walk to her scootie when suddenly she felt her dupatta snag onto something. Oh please, let there be no gum on the bench! "Geet," a deep voice rumbled instead. "We need to talk." Maan sensing her surprise harshly yanked her dupatta, causing her back to plaster against his chiseled chest. With a barely audible whisper, he spoke against her earlobe, "What is wrong? Why are you trying to run away from me? That's the second time today." By this point, Geet's brain had completely shut down. All she could do was feel. Their heartbeats hammering in a similar rhythm. The close proximity they shared. His breath fanning over the nape of her neck---His warm comforting self. At this rate, she was going to faint for sure. As if on cue, her jellified knees buckled, but before she could fall, Maan's strong arms encircled her waist, further closing their distance; there was no room for air. "Tell me Geet." He stated gently. "I...woh...meh," Geet blabbered in broken fragments. Her palpating heart kept drumming in her ears, making it impossible for her to hear her own words. Maan couldn't resist their closeness. He brushed his lips over her earlobe, causing her to shiver involuntarily. They traveled to her cheekbone, where he placed another soft lingering kiss. Trailing his hands up her arms, he placed one on her shoulder and used the other one to move her hair to the side. Her aroma had hit him right in the face and he lost his senses. He leaned down and kissed the nape of her nape, eliciting a gasp from Geet. Geet subconsciously leaned against him, feeling safe and wanted. "Geet! Kahan gayen yeh ladki?" Pari's shouting broke them apart. It finally dawned on her that she was supposed to give her a ride home today. She reluctantly turned back to see---he was gone. Whoa. Was I conjuring things up in my mind? Yeh kya horaha hai mere saath? Was it REAL? Shaking her head in disbelief, she jogged over to her friend. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Maan couldn't stop smiling. It had been several days since he spent that beautiful moment with his angel. He kept replaying the scene over and over in his head. He could now safely say that she harbored the same feelings he had, though she wasn't quite consciously aware of that fact yet. But now he needed to make a plan that would involve Geet confessing her heart's deep secret. Lekin kaise? Soch MK soch. " Hey-looo Daydreamer Khurana," a happy voice said behind him. Vicky sporting a grin gave him a knowing look. "What do you want?" Maan asked grumpily, after all, his thoughts about Geet were broken. "I know what you waaant," Vicky said in a sing-song voice. "I don't know what you are talking about." he stated matter-of-factly. "Oh, like I don't know bro. Maan bhai and Geet sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G, first comes love, then comes marr-mpfh!" "Shut up Vicks! What if all of college finds out?! I'er, I mean, there's nothing going on between us, got it?" he finished somewhat lamely. "Suuure there isn't," Vicky purred. "Oh come on, all these years I've seen how you make those googly-eyes at her. Don't tell me you guys just started figuring out you both have feelings for each other!" "Wait'so everyone knew this whole time?" Maan asked in a cracked voice. "Of course, but we didn't want to interfere, you know, let nature take its own course, "he grinned. "Why you cheeky little'" Maan chased Vicky through the corridors, Vicky laughing like a lunatic the whole way. Unfortunately, Vicky completely forgot that his elder brother was the fastest runner in the providence and in no time, found himself in a headlock by a smirking Maan. "Dude! BRO! Alright, alright I'll be serious!" With that said, Maan finally let the poor guy go. "Ok, the real reason I came to you was to remind you that the annual Costume Party is coming in a few days. Why don't I butter Geet and her buddies up so that she comes and then you can join us at the party? Besides, this would be a great opportunity to be with Pari'" Vicky trailed off in Pari-land, drool dropping down a corner of his mouth. Chuckling, Maan was all for it. He would do anything to get his girl.

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Edited by XXaquafireXX - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Brilliant!
I had a smile plastered on my face all through the time I read the two parts😃
please add me to ur pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Aww this was awesome...
Loved it
Continue sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
hahaha..! nice plz pme me.! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
This is a great part.
I loved the MaanEet scene, it was amazing and sensuous.
I'm already lovin' Vicky, he seems adorable.
Wonderful update, I can't waiy to read the party scene.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#27

Oooh that sucks. I know what you mean...and i always wonder how those kind of people get the job in the first place!! *shrugs*

Anyways, just study really really hard and I know you will pass with flying colors!😉

All the best!!

Lol I know same here...thanks and Inshallah the exams will go well :-)

BTW awesome update...everyone knew except for Geet and Maan

Their always the last ones to find out arent they :P

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow thats was realy good .

i lk ur story line .n ur writing skils r greet .

i hv send u a buddy reqst plz add me in ur pm lst.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#30

😆Hey guys! Here is the last part of my OS😉

PART 3

The much awaited event had finally arrived. A few days prior, Geet and Pari were chatting in the canteen with Vicky, when he suggested that they should join in the fun. Much to his surprise, the girls already had plans to attend. Geet especially, since the dress she was going to wear was designed herself and couldn't wait to show it off. The dcor of the hall cum gymnasium was very formal in appearance, except of course, the people participating in it. Maan and Vicky were standing with a couple of friends, and drinking their neon green Gatorade fruit punch. Vicky was portraying as a very handsome Aladdin. Maan took the cake, however. He looked dashing, dressed up as a police officer. The first few shirt buttons were undone, showing off his smooth golden brown abs, making all the humans of the opposite gender in the vicinity swoon and sway. Completely non affected by the swirling situation around him, his eyes kept darting towards the door, awaiting for the arrival of his sweetheart. What will she come dressed as? A fairytale princess? Definitely something cute and girly. Just then the doors opened, breaking his thoughts. Pari came bouncing in, as a nurse. Vicky's eyes were completely glued to her. Maan smiled, shaking his head. But where was his mishti? He then saw her enter in what seemed like slow motion. His jaw practically fell to the floor. She was wearing a pirate costume and boy was she looking smoking hot in it!

Geet: Maan:

It was not revealing at all, but it was hugging onto every single curve of her delicious body. How can she make a pirate costume look so damn sexy on her??! However, he was jolted out of his reverie after realizing that some of the other men, single and taken, were walking toward her'eyeing her up. A large wave of jealousy and over-possessiveness took over him. He made his way over to her by the indoor water fountain. Geet was searching through the mass of people when her eyes finally connected with his. An invisible magnetic pull brought them together. "Come with me Geet," Maan stated with a major attitude when he reached her side. He grabbed her wrist tightly. Taken aback by his rude tone, Geet snapped her hand away from his steel-like grip. "Woke up on the wrong side of the bed today, huh?" She retaliated sharply before slapping her hand to her mouth in shock. Oops. Me and my big mouth! A vein ticked in his temple and he spat, "No one talks to Maan Singh Khurana like that, samjhi tum?" He grabbed her arm and stalked off with her to the college terrace. After closing the doors to the stairway, he whipped himself around. His hands viciously grabbed her petite waist, crushing their bodies together. Geet felt scared. She knew him too well. When he got angry, all logic left in him would escape from his grasp. Their faces were millimeters from each other. Geet struggled to free herself from him, but alas, Maan was physically much too strong for her. He took one of his hands and thrust it into her hair grabbing and pulling her head even closer to his. Her skin looks so smooth and creamy, was the last of Maan's thoughts before he crushed his mouth to hers in a searing hot kiss. Heaven. She tasted like pure heaven. Geet was in a state of shock. She had imagined this moment so many times, but never would have guessed that it would actually end up happening in reality, ever. Meanwhile, Maan's kisses grew more urgent as he tried to make her mouth move with his. He sucked on her lower lip tenderly, completely enthralled with her intoxicating taste. This was his Geet. Perfect in every which way. Geet found herself losing into him. The fists that were pummeling his chest a moment ago had ceased. Slowly and tantalizingly, she drew her hand up his shoulders to the base of his neck. She reprociated his kiss with equal fervor to that of his. After what seemed like forever, both broke apart reluctantly for air. Breathing heavily, they rested their foreheads together. "Maan'"she whispered. Oh, to heck with the plan. "Geet'.I love you. Since the fated day we met. Your innocent smile, your musical laugh, the way your nose crinkles when you are thinking," he chuckled lightly. "I have only realized in all of these years what my feelings for you actually meant." Geet's eyes were brimming with unshed tears. "Geet, please don't cry!" Maan yelled frantically. He couldn't stand to see her in any kind of pain. "I didn't mean to hurt you, I'm so sorry Geet, I-" "Chup, bilkul chup. I've only dreamed that you would say those precious words to me. You've made me the luckiest girl in the world today Maan'" Maan stared." Oh and one more thing'"Geet spoke quietly. "What?" "I LOVE YOU!!!" she screamed and without wasting any more time, she grabbed his face and kissed every inch of it. Geet stopped almost as soon as she started. Her eyes widened once again that day as she realized her actions." You know, I love it when you do things like that." "Huh?" "I mean, the way you leap before you think, it definitely has its advantages," he winked at her naughtily. She blushed ten shades of red and smacked his shoulder. Then he laughed out loud, genuinely. She gaped. Geet had never seen him laugh like that, straight from his heart. Geet melted. What a wonderful sight she was lucky enough to witness and how she wished that she could stare at his beautiful face forever. She felt elated that she was the chosen one to give Maan this happiness. Maan then kissed Geet's forehead and engulfed her in a deep hug that held promises of togetherness for all of eternity. And thus, these two souls finally became one.

FIN

And that about wraps it up. I hope you all liked it😆


Edited by XXaquafireXX - 14 years ago

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