ss - first love ..update P-5

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first love

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Geet a plain-looking, dark-skinned spectacle wearing school girl secretly in love with an older grade 10 guy named Maan.Maan is a photography enthusiast and a popular student in their school a lot of girls in their school are going crazy over him, including Geet. However, Geet is well aware that she is not the prettiest of the bunch, but she doesn't give up easily. With help from her close girl friends,Geet tries everything to make herself more beautiful and outstanding in school, hoping that Maan would like her someday.
geet :
maan:

And please give your inputs ...whether I should write this story or not ...

Months ago I also had started a FF hidden love when i joined the IF but becuase of my horrendous schedule of school I'm sorry I had to keep that on hold but after 5th june I am going to update it regularly with long parts ...

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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NICE QUITE INTERESTING.LEKIN EK BAATH DHYAAN SE SUNO GEET KA CHARACTER THODHA SA EMOTIONAL HONA CHAAHIYE.DONT MAKE HER AS A COMEDY ONE.ITS JUST AS A ADVICE.IF YOU LIKE IT THEN FOLLOW OTHERWISE DONT MIND.SORRY.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start
plzz add me to the pm list
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice start
Geets character is interesting
Cont soon Xx...
Du add me to your PM list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey the pic of geet is vasan eye cares na ???continue soon ...do pm me
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Monday 8 am

geet was on way with her three friends tashs, meera, pinky to school but before reaching school they always visited their favourite cake shop ... it was exactly only favourite of geet's ...though the shop took more than 30 minutes to reach from her house she preferred this cake shop only ...and her friends always wondered why she never goes to shop near to her home nd spends her 30 minutes morning energy to come here ...

Meera , pinky , tasha ...geet's other gang member ...they were together from first grade ...pinky was cute bubbly girl nd looked 2 year older than her age because of her ...little oversize body ...tasha a dusky girl who almost resembled a skeleton nd meera only a more than average looking girl in their group ...they always used to gather at geet's place to do the school homework ...

Geet what are you doing here outside let's have ur pastry if not we will be late for school ...pinky suggested geet , observing the opposite shop where geet was looking continuously with no blink ...geet din bother to move for few sec but suddenly she jerked inside ran towards the glass window of shop nd stood there ...that was shock to pinky nd other two girls tasha nd meera whom geet passed but did not give any notice ...

The girl ran behind her nd stood next to her geet din notice that her each move is under observation of her girlfriends ...nd then they saw ...

A tall boy wearing school uniform of their school coming out of the shop ...all girls instantly looked at geet...but geet did not budge now they were like spectator looking at boy to geet nd otherwise

The boy looked here and there nd then kicked his bike to start ...he just has started his bike when he saw a boy helping a blind man crossing the path ...he got off his bike nd helped them ...

All the while geet was just looking at boy with a very silly shy smile on her face ...which she herself din know when appeared on her face ...

So this is the reason why u like to come to this shop only ..huh ??? pinky asked looking at geet ...

Geet who was busy in watching her crush nd din know what girls are asking shook her head in yes ...she din blink her eyes nd her silly smile din vanish to her face until she saw him gone from her sight with his bike ...nd THEN geet realized what she has done ...

So we get it now why do u come here everyday meera said

No its jus...t just...just his bike its too strange ...geet completed her sentence fumbling ...

Girl squinted their eye brows nd then meera said ...He is super-smart ...its not weird that u r crazy over him

Are you non-sense i don't ...geet stated ... albeit geet raised her voice convince her girlfriends ...but cudn't nd they gave each other a cheeky smile ...

LIAR !!!!! they shouted almost making geet deaf

SIAM SCHOOL , THAI ...Classroom ...5 second floor

So class why is everyone looking so saturated ...be cheerful like you are in lunch break ...english teacher Nam ... announced while distributing corrected answers sheets of students ...

Geet jumped with joy when teacher gave her answer sheet she had scored 49/50 ...

Don't be so happy you only score good in English ...in other subjects you are just too bad... BAD ...

Geet dip her head down ... hearing teacher's remark ...yes that was true she was BAD VERY BAD in studies and the only reason her English was good because her mom was Canadian ...

when teacher nam started her class they four started writing something on their notebook as teacher nam had said but she din know the four were not writing wat teacher has asked for they were writing something else ...they always preferred to sit on back bench so that they could do their never gossip without any disturbance of teachers ...

...meera passed a notebook to geet ...written

His name is MAAN ...Maan singh khurana A grade 10 student ...but his past is so terrible , he is a wicked boy ...

geet replied on the same notebook nd passed to meera ... no that's not true?

and their chat started through notebooks ...

meera : he is not a good guy... two girls had to resign to school because of him ...a danger boy .

geet : I don't believe don't meddle with him

meera: You know ? you know my fried used to be in the same class he was in ...

meera passed the notebook to geet ...

paper ??? meera looked up with a confused face to find teacher name standing in-front of he ...Meer thought geet has this time replied on paper instead of notebook but no she was caught by teacher nam ...

meera stand up ...teacher ordered with frowning face ...nd you too geet ...

second floor

geet was heading towards girls washroom ...nd then she turned to look back teacher nam was still scolding meera ...well she asked a simple question what meera couldn't answer nd geet answered nd result of what teacher allowed her to go for a leak nd meera was being scold ...

geet sighed ...nd then ran ..ran on third nd then fourth floor ...she stopped skidding ..before class 10-A ...straighten her skirt , shirt nd with a girly grace what she normally never has walked slowly passing the class 10-A ...smiling stupidly ...

he was there sitting on middle bench of classroom doing one of his mischievous act ... an unknown smile what always just decor geet's face seeing him appeared on her face ... after passing his classroom she ran to to washroom nd jumped... jumped smiling , giggling ...

She refrained herself nd headed towards her class ...nd then again she saw him ...but what why is he standing with one folded leg ...geet thought to herself ...

Oh this was the firs time she was going to pass him so ...so closely ...

He was standing with his one leg folded nd he took out his ear phone ' nd plugged in ear phones ...

Nd when she crossed him unexpected happened ...

Silence ...she looked back ...he was gesturing her silence basically imitating his teacher who had punished him for hs smischievous act ...she looked at him shocked nd confused but he kept his finger on his lips nd again imitate his teacher silence or else out of the class ...she smiled he smiled nd she went to her class running while put he put his earphones on ...

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Edited by maan_mishthi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrk_1

hey the pic of geet is vasan eye cares na ???continue soon ...do pm me

yes 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part
pls do cont
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update
Oooh maan the danger boy,,nice😉
awww geet alwaiiz went to the cake shop to see maan walk past
Loved how maan was mimicking the teacher
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr

Awesome update
Oooh maan the danger boy,,nice😉
awww geet alwaiiz went to the cake shop to see maan walk past
Loved how maan was mimicking the teacher
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the Pm

thanks ...he is just known as danger boy but he is not

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