MG FF: Life Has Its Own Secrets - Discontinued - Page 2

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Hey friends.😃 Thank you all for your comments. I am posting the first 2 parts. Just to let you that First few updates will be just around the family and problems caused esp for Geet. Maaneet will take some time.😉 And one more thing, I will be writing the dialogues in Hindi but might use English in between as I am not really good at writing Hindi. So 100% sure there will be errors. i havent checked the part so plz forgive my mistakes and bear with me. (The staring of part one is not written by me. My friend wrote it for me)😛😆

Part 1

It was a beautiful day with sun high making things look beautiful with its golden rays. It was an important day for the Handa's. They were expecting few guests in the evening. Everyone was busy in making everything perfect. The door bell rang and a woman opens the door with a steel pot in her hands. She was wearing a light green sari with her pallu tucked in her waist. Her hair was tied in a bun and she had no makeup on her face except a red bindi on her forehead and lipstick. She had few wrinkles in her cheeks due to aging. It was none other than Rano.

Rano: bade jaldi aye? Kal kaha tha na meine ki aaj guest aane wale hai, jaldi ana. Phir bhi ussi time par aye. Chalo ab mera muh kya dekh rahe ho, dalo dudh. [The milk man pours the milk in the vassal] hey bhagwan, dhudh ka haal toh dekho. Kabhi is mein dudh bhi milaya karo sirf pani mat laya karo.

She goes in. The house wasn't really big but neither it was small. It was perfect for them. They believe that the members make a home home and not the size. It had three bedrooms, a small kitchen and a living area. Brij was peeling potatoes as per Rano's command and Meera was sitting on the sofa applying nail polish. Mohindar came out with cushions and its covers in his hand trying to put them on.

Mohindar: arre jaldi jaldi haath chalao sab log. Meera yeh lo put the covers on, jaldi. [He told meera as he dump the cushions on the sofa beside her and went towards the kitchen] rano, arre sun rahi ho ya nahi?

Rano: [was frying snacks in the kitchen] haath busy hai, lekin kaan free hai. Bolo kya bolna hai.

Mohindar: kam se kam char panch log ayenge toh six seven logo ka banana. Kam nai padhna chahiye.

Rano: itne saalo se toh aap hi bana kar khilate aa rahe hai hume...

Brij: Yeh papa ke balling par mamma ka...

Meera: Sixer

Mohindar: Oh sixer, baatein kam karo aur kaam pe dhiyan do. Mehmaan ane waale hai.

Meera: Haan, cushion cover kar toh rahi hoon

Brij: Nail polish lagate huwe?

Mohindar: [Said In high pitch so Rano can hear] Meera nail polish laga rahi ho tum?

Rano heard it and putting her spoon down she came out glaring at Meera and hits her lightly on her back.

Rano: Ai ladhki chodh yeh nail polish aur jaldi se covers change kar. [She turned around and her eyes went on the curtain which was torn slightly. She went and held the curtains and complained to mohindar] kitna kaha tha mein, naye parde lane ke liye, ab dekh na kis tarah fateh huwe hai. Ab kaise chupaon isse? Kam se kam koi sasti curtains hi le aate.

Mohindar: [Taking a sigh] ok, mein abhi order kar deta hoon. [Turn towards the idol of the god] bhagwan, meine curtains order kiye the? Abhi tak aye nai. Toh Bhagwan mujhe itna maldhar bana tha na ki apni madam ke liye ek curtains ki dukaan khol leta [rano turn and glared at him] kiya aisa bolun? Thank you god. [He turned towards Rano] waise ladhke waale ladhki ko dekhne aa rahe hai, pardeh ko nai, aur jo pardeh dekhne ayenge, unhe hum ladhki denge nai. "Mama kuch jal raha hai kiya?" Meera asked sniffing and so did the rest. "Oh ho mere pakode!" rano exclaimed running in the kitchen. Mohindar turned to Meera "beta call and check where Geet is?" Meera nodded. Rano came out of the kitchen with her pakoda which had turned black. "Yeh dekha apne?" she moved the plate in front of Mohindar. "Sab aap ki waje se huwa hai!!" she complained. "Mere waje se? Arre mein toh kitchen mein gaya hi nahi."Mohindar defended himself. "App ko kitchen mein jane ki zarurat hi nahi, dus feet ke duri se hi app bahut kuch kar sakhte ho." Rano bang the plate and went back. "Beta, Geet ne phone uthaya?" Mohindar asked Meera. "Nai papa, line hi nai lag raha hai. Mein phir se koshish karti hoon." Mohindar nodded and saw that the mat was stuck under the table. He went and lift up the table to set the mat but couldn't as it was heavy. He applied pressure and it lead to short of breath. Meera noticed and ran ran to him. "Papa, kya huwa? Mamma jaldi ao, dekho na papa ko kya huwa." Meera shouted for her mom. Rano came out running and made Mohindar sit on the chair and gave him a glass of water. "Yeh kya kar rahe the aap?" Rano asked taking the glasss back from him. He took a deep breath and replied "kuch nai, bas woh mat table ke niche tha, toh use nikal raha tha. Lekin yeh table itni bahri hai ki..." "Aap ko kar ne ki kya zarurat thi, Brij bhi kar sakhta tha." Rano said in anger. "Waise aap ne dawa li hai aaj?" rano asked concern. Mohindar didn't reply and rano knew he didn't. "Dekha nai li na? Aap bhi kabhi meri baat..." but Mohindar cut her in bitween. "Tum shant ho jao, abhi dawa nai hai, jab ajayegi, mein le lunga." "Kya dawa nai hai? Par aap toh kal lene gaye the nah? Phir?" "Woh market mein paise kam padh gaye the toh..." rano sighed. "Arre tum fikar mat karo, meine brij se kaha tha lane ko. Mein ja kar dekhta hoon." Mohindar replied calmly and went to brij's room. It was a small room with two large windows closed by blue curtains. He had a single bed in the middle, a study table in one corner and wardrobe in the other. He had few old book packed and placed near his bed. He was sitting near the study table and writing something. Mohindar went and placed his hands on his shoulder. Startled brij looked back to find his dad smiling at him. He quickly closed the file on which he was writing and sttod up. "Papa, aap yaha? Kuch chahiya tha?" he asked nervous looking at his file. "Haan beta. Woh meine tum dawa lane ko kaha tha, laye?" "Nai papa, woh mein bhul gaya. Ek kaam karta hoon, mein ja ke leke ata hoon." "Arre nai koi baat nai. Waise tum kuch kar rahe the?" Mohindar asked picking up his blue file and opening it. Brij panicked but calm downed as he saw his dad trying to figure out the paper but couldn't since he wasn't wearing his glasses. "Haan papa, woh Geet di ki shadi hai nah, so I was applying for a loan." "Loan?" asked Mohindar surprised. "Haan papa, mein nai chahta ki Geet ki shadi mein koi kaami rahe. I want it to be perfect jaisa app log chate hai. Aur phir Geet humara itna khayal rakhti hai, toh hum uske liye itna toh kar hi shakte hai nah?" Brij said smiling. Mohindar placed his hands on his head and said. "I am happy that you are taking your responsibility as a brother. Har bahi behan, maa, baap ka sapna hota hai ki woh apni beti ki shadi dhoom dham se kare. Agar tum yeh sab Geet ke liye karna chate ho toh mein tumhe nai rokunga." "Thanks papa. Par yeh geet hai kaha?"

On the other hand, a girl came out of her office running and went and set on her scooty. She placed her helmet on and drove out of the parking lot. She went and stopped at the pharmacy and bought the medicines and few the necessary shops and took her route home. She went and parked in the corner and went inside. All were in the living room. "Yeh lo agai humari geet." Mohindar said. Geet came and hugged him."Papa yeh aap ki tablets aur yah aap ke liye ek chota sa gift."She said handing him a box. Mohindar open it and it was his new glasses. "Beta yeh..." "Kuch nai hai papa. Aap humare liye itna karte hai toh kiya hum nai kar sakhte?" geet asked hugging her mom. "Acha Geet sun, sham ho gai hai, chal jaldi se teyaar ho jao." Rano told her pushing towards her room. "Aur haan, neat se ready hona, woh jo sari meine tere liye liya tha nah, wohi pehena." Geet looked at her confused. "Lekin kyon maa?" "Kyun kya, kuch guest aa rahe hai, is liye. Chalo Meera, help geet." Meera nodded and Geet guessed the situation. "Aap ne mujhe phele kyun nai bataya?" she demanded folding her hands across her chest. "Agar bata dete toh tum manti? Phele bhi kitni ristoh ke liye mana kar chuki hai." "Lekin maa..." "Dekh beta, you are grown up now, at the age of marring. Hum sab chateh hai ki teri shadi hojaye kisi ache se ghar mein. Aur Dhruv acha lakha hai." Mohindar explained her holding her shoulder. "Par mein aap sab ko chordh kar nai jana chati." Geet said pouting. "Toh aaj hi koun sa jana hai, bas dhurv se mil le aur dekh ki woh tujh pasand hai ya nai." "Lekin..." "Lekin wekin kuch nai. Chalo jaldi se teyar ho jao. Meera di ki help karo."Rano said shoving Geet in her room and Meera went behind her. The guest came after an hour or so, Just Dhurv and his parents. Geet came out of the kitchen wearing a light blue sari with silver embroidery on it totally complimenting her. She had applied minimal makeup making her skin glow. She had a thin silver chain and a small earring on with few bangles on each hand. Dhruv was completely blown off by Geet and was just staring at her. His parents seemed happy too. Geet bought the tray of snacks and offered to Dhruv's parents. "Arre beta Dhruv ko bhi toh do." Rano shot geet a galre who was at the edge of running away. Geet went and lowered the tray towards Dhruv who was still staring at her in a daze. He just raised his hand and picked up anything from the tray not moving his eyes from geet. All noticed this and brij decided to help him. "Papa, I guess Dhruv aur Geet ek dusre se baat karna chate honge. Why not we let them talk alone for a while?" all agreed to this and Geet escorted Dhurv out. Both were walking side by side looking here and there not knowing what to say. Finally Dhruv spoke clearing his throat. "It's weird nah? I mean yese ladka ladki ka milna and all? Tum he pata hai tum pheli ladhki ho jise mein dekhne aya and trust me I am not regretting." Geet just smiled at him. "Acha waise tumne mere bare mein koi image toh bana hoga nah? So do I live up to it?" he asked curious. "Image?" Geet asked him confused. "Haan like how do I look and all. You know whether I have hair or I am bold, if my nose is tall or short or maybe whether I am fat or thin?" Geet let out a small soft laugh and replied him honestly. "Actually no, I didn't know that you were coming. I just got to know 15 minutes before aur woh bhi pakode banane mein nikal gaye. Waise aap ko toh pata tha, so did you imagine me?" Geet asked looking at him. Dhruv smiled. "I did, but you are more beautiful then what I thought.

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Part 2

Geet's marriage was fixed with Dhruv. Even Geet had no objection. The family had decided and fixed the engagement in five days time with just close families invited. It was Monday and Geet went back to her work. She worked at the Khurana hotels. During its staring period Khurana hotel was just a mere restuarnt. Tej Khurana worked hard all through his life and made turn this restaurant in a five star hotel and today they own a hotel in every corner, infect took over some. And now his son's Dev and Maan are taking over. Geet rushed in just to see her friend Pari waiting for her at the reception with her hands crossed. Geet met pari at her college. At the first meet they had liked each other and from that day they became friends. Pari has also visited Geet's home and consider Geet's family as her own as she was an orphan. Geet smiled and went and hugged her. "Good morning Pari." "Good morning ko maro goli, aur tu late kyon hai?" pari asked in annoyance. "Late?" Geet looked at her watch "par mein toh time se phele hoon." "Lekin mein tum se phele hoon, so you are late. Ok forget this, yeh baato, how was the boy?" Pari asked suddenly turning excited. Geet told her every tiny detail. "Tum bhahut buri ho ho tumhe pata hai, mujhe invite bhi nai kiya."Pari complained. "Pata nai Dhruv ne tum kya dekha? I mean tumhe pasand kaise kiya?" she added thinking. "Kyon ki do minute ke liye mila tha na is liye." "Poor guy." Pari said giving a pity look on her face. Geet hit her on the shoulder. At that time her phone rings. "Hello, ji sir? Yeah sir, ok." Pari turned to Geet. "Diamond ki exhibition ki arrangement ho gai nah?" she asked walking ahead while Geet moved with her and replied. "Yeah." "Good, boss ne detail mangi hai, tumhe andar bulaya hai." k woh sab is file mein hai, tum check kar lo." Geet handed the file she was holding to Pari.

Brij came out of his room, with a file in his hand. "Maa, aap ne meri blue file dekhi hai kya?" he asked looking around. "Bhai, aap ke haat mein bhi blue file hai. Red nai." Meera said coming out of her room. "I know, par yeh mera nai hai." Rano came and took the file and had a look. "Yeh toh Geet ki File hai. Lagta hai same colour ke waje se mix ho gaya hoga aur woh teri file lete gai." "Kya?" Brij almost shouted. He grabbed the file and ran out of the house while Meera and Rano stood watching confused. "Ok maa, mein bhi chalti hoon, computer classes ke liye late ho jayega." Meera said hugging her mom and left. Brij ran and stopped a taxi and went to khurana hotels. "Yeh Geet ko bhi meri file le jani thi? Agar us ne dekh liya toh? Nai nai, yesa nai ho sakhta." He mumbled to himself worried. "Driver please drive fast."

"Ab itna acha ladhka mila hai, haat se jane may dena."Pari said walking towards the exhibition room. "You know you are very lucky. Mujhe dekh, abhi tak ek ladka ne 'hi' tak nai bola. So kab mila rahi hi apne is 'Dhruv' se?" pari added opening the file. Geet hits her playfully and walks ahead. Pari went through the file and went after Geet. "Geet yeh koun si file layi ho tum?" she asked turning the file towards her. "Kyun, kya huwa?" Geet asked confused. "Is mein toh London ke immigration paper hai." "London ke immigration papers? Waha koun ja raha hai?" Geet asked surprised. "Uhh tumhi dekh lo." Pari replied handing the file to Geet.

Brij reach the office and asked for Geet. One of the staff told him the way and he went running in the direction. Geet open the file and was shocked. Brij reached and called out to her. "Geet?" he went to her "by mistake tum meri file le ai ho." "App London ja rahe hai bhaiya?" geet asked in an appalled voice. Pari excused herself and left. "Answer me? Aap ja rahe ho, woh bhi humesha ke liye?" Geet asked again." "haan." brij replied bluntly. "Lekin aap yese kaise? Aap kyon ja rahe hai bhaiya?" "Apna carer banane." "Carer banane? Hum sab ko chod kar?" geet said in a teary voice "apna carer bhi toh nai chod sakta." "Lekin phir Mummy papa, aap ke bina...?" Brij raised his hands and cut her in between. "Please Geet, mom dad ko apni zindigi mein jo karna thaw oh kar chuke. Lekin meri life toh ab shuru hui hai. Aur mujhe apni life banai hai, phir chane jaise bhi." He replied coldly looking away. "Lekin aap yaha bhi toh..." "Kya hai yaha? Uhh? Mujhe yaha rehe ke ek middle class life nai jina papa ki tarah, ke har bar kuch lene se phele yeh sochna padhe ke lun ki nai, budget mein hai ya nai. Bas Geet, nai jina mujhe is tarah. Mein nai chata ke jab mein jao toh log kahe key eh middle class jar aha hai. Tang agaya hoon mein in sab se. Mujhe upay jana hai, samjhi tum?" "Lekin papa mummy ke umeedhe hai aap se?" Geet managed to say as tears fell down. "tih yeh unki galti hai, mein nai kaha tha mujh se umeedhe rakh ne ko." "Bhaiya please? Aap ek bar khud ko unki jagah rakh kar sochiye." "Mein ab sirf aur sirf apne bare mein sochunga." "Lekin..." "Bas geet, Bahut hogaya. Behtar hoga ki tum meri life mein interfere mat karo." Saying this Brij grabbed his file and thump her file in her hand and march out while geet stood there helpless not knowing what to do. Brij went and met his agent. He handed him the file and bribed him to make his paper process. But to his hard luck, they demanded more money forthe fees and other requirements as those were to be done legally. Brij assured them that he will somehow manage to get the money and they proceed with the papers. He came out running his hands in his hair worried. "ab mein aur paise kaha se laun?"

Geet ran out to the backyard of the hotel and cried. All she could think was her parent. Who will support them? Who will look after them? She was getting married and Brij is leaving. Meera was still in computer school. She had no idea what to do. Somehow she ended her day and went home. Brij was already there with the family. He had bought gifts for everyone and was giving it out. Geet smiled through her tears seeing all so happy. She only wished her family was like this forever. Brij came to her with a parcel, but Geet dragged him in his room. She tried to make him change his mind about his leaving but Brij didn't budge from his decision and left. Geet half hearted came out and looked around. All were busy in the preparation of her engagement. It was late and meera still hasn't returned yet. Rano got worried, but Geet consoled her and decided to go and get her as Brij was out. Geet went to her college and asked the receptionist for Meera. The receptionist checked the coputer and replied there was no such student as Meera Handa there, which shocked geet. "How could you say that? She school's here, please check again." Geet requested. "I am sorry, but there is no such student as Meera here." "How can that be possible, please cheack properly." Geet said getting restless. At that time she saw one of the girls coming out. "Yeh toh Rasika hai, Meera ki friend." Geet went and stopped her. "Rasika? Meera kahan hai?" Geet demanded her. Rasika was shocked to see Geet there and didn't know what to reply.

It was a large room with camera's placed in the centre and lights on the scenes. One man was sitting behind the camera and his assistants behind him and one of the men was holding the blower towards a girl who was giving different poses. She was wearing a silver top and a black mini skirt revealing most of her. Geet entered the room and looked around and her eyes stopped at the girl. Disgust took over her face and she shouted "Meera?" Meera turned around and stood startled on her spot.

Geet dragged Meera home after she changed and pushed her in her room.

"Yeh kya gatya harkath hai Meera?"geet said in anger "Geet di! Kya galat kiya meine uhh? Kya galat? Mein khobsurat hoon, talented hoon. Arre jab mujhse bakwas ladkiyan modelling kar sakti hai toh mein kyon nai?" "Aur mummy papa? Unke bare mein nai soche gi tu?" "Unko soch ke hi toh yeh sab kar rahi hoon. Socho woh kitne khush honge jab mein model ban jaungi. Sab taraf meri photo hogi, sirf meri hi baat hogi. Imagine 'Meera handa' one of the top models, wow." Meera said dreamingly. "Meera hosh mein ao. Yaha lakho ladkiyan ati hai model bane, lekin kuch hi successful hote hai. Meera yeh achi line nai hai." Geet Held her hand trying to make her understand but Meera jerked away "Di, kam se kam mujh mein sapne dekhne ki himat toh hai. Arre aap ne toh woh bhi nai kya. Aur jitna aap char din mein kamati hai nah, utna mein ek din mein kama ke dikhaungi. Dekh lena." "Aur jis din mummy papa ko pata chala ki tu computer class ke beje yeh sab kar rahi toh to unpe kya beetegi?" "Unhe batana zaruri nai hai.Woh meri sapon ko nai samjhe ge, aur mein un se jhagda nai karna chati. Aur waise bhi, i have decided. Mein model hi banugi. Rasta bahut lamba hai di, aur mein apni manzil tak pahuchne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hoon, kuch bhi." Meera went and held Geet by her shoulders. "Is liye please, mere raste ka kata mat bano, please?" She jerked Geet back and left the room while geet slummed on the floor breaking down not

knowing what to do with her siblings.

The Handa house was decorated and lit up. Finally the day arrived. Geet was getting engaged today. Guest had arrived and dhruv was sited on his chair which was located centrally. Few women were playing the dhol and singing while others chatted. Rano bought Geet out and made her sit on the chair next to Dhruv. Dhruv smiled and nodded at her, indicating she was looking stunning. Geet gave a weak smile and turned away. Her eyes spotted Brij who was standing with Dhruv's friends and Meera who was with the ladies singing. They looked at Geet and turned away. Their words kept on replying in her mind. Brij will leave and Meera will continue her modelling. They want to live their life. Then what about the parents? Geet looked at her parents who were standing with dhruv's parents. Tears filled her eyes. She couldn't leave them. No one will be there for them if she marries and move away. Who will take care of them?

Geet went in her house. Everything was shattered. Things were lying around the house. She called out for her parents. "Mamma? Papa?" but no reply came. She kept calling out and searched the entire house. Finally she spotted her mom who was sitting in the corner of her room. Geet went and held her. Rano was sitting lifeless, looking pale and weak. Her hair all messed up, cloths not properly done. "Ma, kiya huwa aap ko?" Geet shook her. Rano looked up at Geet. "Geet tu aa gai? Tujhe pata hai, Brij aur Meera humhe chor kar chale gaye. Hum kab se intezar kar rahe hai. Woh ate hi nai. Tere papa ne toh khana bhi bandh kar diya hai. Unki dawa bhi khatam ho gai hai." "Papa kaha hai?" Geet asked in a ripped voice. Rano nodded to the corner. Geet show her father sitting on the floor muttering something. He looked sick and weak. Her heart split in million pieces seeing her parent's state. She went and held his hand and tried to hear what he was saying. "Geet ke jane ke baad sab khatam ho gaya. Humare bache hume chor ke chale gaye." He kept repeating this. Geet broke in tears as her dad didn't hear her, not responding and just kept repeating the same lines.

"Geet?" Pari came and placed her hands on her shoulder. Geet came out of the blue and looked around anxious and looked at Pari. Pari hugged her and gave her a gift. "Congratulations meri jaaan. Sagai Mubarak ho." Geet sighed. She was just dreaming. But would it turn to reality? Geet smiled and thanked Pari and introduced her to Dhruv. They got busy chatting and Geet again looked at her parents. Her mom was setting jewellery for her with Dhruv's mom and their dads were talking to each other. Geet knew her brother and sister won't back out of their decision. She has to do something, for her parents. Dhruvs mom came with the shagun thal. She lifted a red veil and said "beta, yeh chunri is ghar ki maan aur maryada hai. Is ghar ki izzat hai aur aaj yeh tum par sajegi." But Geet's mind was occupied with her thoughts to listen to what was happening around her. While Dhruv's mom continued and placed the veil on Geet's head. "Ab is pariwar ka sammaan rakhna tumhara farz hai." Geet held her hand and stopped her.

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i loved both the parts...they are amazing n wonderfully written...continue soon...i cant wait for maan to be introduced...n plz plz me whenever you update...

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i loved both the parts...they are amazing n wonderfully written...continue soon...i cant wait for maan to be introduced...n plz plz me whenever you update...

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