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kirti_fiji

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Posted: 14 years ago

that was a nice update, loved the way you put a song in and described all that happened,

thanks azi

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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

Just read it!!
It's great! Continue soon!

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mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice prt.dis song is also alltime fav of my...all verses r well matched wid maaneet story.luvly prt

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

beautiful part.
loved it.
loved the song sequence along with the description of geet's pain, happiness, love .
continue soon.

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Sneha Bhattacharya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautifully written, loved the lyrics and how u hav incorporated them in ur story...

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sky_86

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Posted: 14 years ago

👏wowww 👏👏Azz take a bow! 😊it was the most wonderful journey of Maneet i have ever read.😊...the way you captured all thoseintense memories and the depth of all that geet felt for maan remembering them uff..if we had been lucky enough to see even a fraction of what you mentioned here our TRPs would have been going up the roof.😃...but alas writers who understand their subject as much as you just did hardly get recognition...😭😭

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palakchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

pls update soon . i loved ur os . pls add me to your buddy list

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palakchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

PLS UPDATE SOON WAITING FROM SO MANY DAYS

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kirti_fiji

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Posted: 14 years ago

azi twiny when do we get part 4

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piya27

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Posted: 14 years ago

when are u updating part 4

make it quick can't wait man

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