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craziekudi

@craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

that was so cute and awesome.. keep writing happy stuffs too dear

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laila889

@laila889

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

awww this one was soo cute!!! loved it!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

firstly before commenting i'd like say something pweej promise me u wont disect my comment and take it the wrong way . . . lately within the last 24 hours all my comments are being taken the wrong way . . . yaar m just 18 agar galti se if i say something which is left for multiple interpratations . . . please i have no intention to hurt anyone . . . i mean i m hardly ever serious about anything but everyone is taking it the wrong way and now m scared to comment . . .

AAj ka din mere liye bohot kharab gaya hai . . .

Edited my comment😳 on the previous page😳

Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

i jus read ur os nw n it is sooo cute

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

aaye hayee twinnie...SO.BEAUTIFULLY.DONE!!👏 u know i gotta admit, when i saw the title, i thought of a thousand and one ways on how this could mean something tragic...maybe she used wear a red bindi and now he's thinking about her and other stuff cuz u know, we all know, umm ur tendencies of being generous on us and my awesome statistical analysis was indicating this might be a sad one, but dude, it was happy...like no cry cry baby😲 since i haven't read the ffs yet, i won't ask whether u received a head injury in the recent months🤣😲 but awww man, i love the song twin...my frenz make fun of me for liking old songs, mainly cuz they r all idiots and don't know any😆 but aww...you know u never cease to amaze me...really, u manage to give every story this jaz the jaadugar touch😳...dude what do u eat?...like send over some protein bars here too man...atleast i wouldn't have to see my pathetic essays all the time but wow, i didn't think they wud know each other but ofcourse, its u so there always has to be a twist!😆
awww i love the way u kept on referring to the song entire time cuz usually when writers base OS/FFs on songs, they mostly include it at the end or in one section but u kept it alive...does it make sense? pretend it does anyway

loved it twinnie and if possible, can u show me her bindi pic?😉

yes muffin express is on its way slowly for the rest😆

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

so i loved this too...
so lovely...

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

This the 2nd time i read this,but i comment so much that i forgot if i commented here too,anyway...it was supercute,fabulous,sweet,happy peppy,u name it ,i loved it...Yes,that simple jewel is the most beautiful one that i like at indian wemen and the maang tika too...It was an amazing lil story, wow six years of secret love,they surely foolled their familly...the end was darn beautiful...me getting diabetes from all the sweetness 😆 Thank you jaz,realy enjoyed this!

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

totally loved this OS... so happy that this one doesnt have a sad ending ...

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

how on earth did I miss this??

nicely done!

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Sameenaas

@Sameenaas

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Wowww !!! Awesome OS...!!! I dint know U cud write happy ones also... 😆 😆 😆
Looks like it is an older one... I dug it out anyways...!!!
The start was really promising... I knew its gonna be fun reading... The nok jhok between Maan N Geet was superb !!! 😳 😳
I just got a little surprised when he said abt their purana rishta... N pehle tum meri Geet ho N all... That was something I had least expected... Just loved that scene to the core...esp the kiss !!! 😳 😳 😳
U did a great job in expressing Geet's feelings through her eyes...!!!! That was mind blowing... N the bindiya...the whole OS was abt that only... How cud I forget it !!!
Though I cud not make out wat kind of bindiya she had put on her forehead... But still something abt that bindiya kept me excited all the while...lol
I had a smile on my face while I was reading this OS... N I can assure U that U made my day !!!
Loved the bubbly Geet N shaitan Maan !!!
I havn't heard the song earlier but looks like I need to !!! Loved maaneet's mimicry on the song...!!! N the most beautiful one was at the last wen Maan said Aye haaye !!! 😍 😍 😍
U must try writing happy ends also sometimes... I tell U its not that difficult !!! Infact good for health...😉😉😉
After reading such a beautiful OS... I was left speechless !!! But I still managed to comment something sensible... Hope I did...
The last thing I want to say or rather I feel after reading this OS is... Aaye Haaye !!!

Edited by Sameenaas - 13 years ago

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