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her voice doesn't raise much more than a whisper...and even when she speaks she doesn't say what she means...she wears her heart on her sleeve...her intention is read clearly form the scrunching of her forhead and nose...her turned down lips...that judging by her words should have turned up in a smile...the way her eyes fill to the rim with tears...and the way they overflow...till the drops spill out like rain...the carefull tending of his wounds...that her touch not add to the pain...she knows only too well...that sometimes the cure hurts more than the blow...the grand gestures speak louder than words...and in a volume clearly audible to the spectator...there is no confusing whats in her heart...just silence the words...and hear with your eyes...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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"that sometimes the cure hurts more than the blow" Oh wow Syl that was amazingly beautiful!
Loved it as usual.
Yes, today Geet's silence didn't matter as her eyes spoke it all .. and he read them too well. As soon as he felt her touch on his wounds, rubbing on it and soothing it, whilst she winces in seeing his pain and bruises, he has a content smile knowing too well that she has forgiven him and loves him. Her words may not come out now but they surely will after she gets alone time to think things through in this 24-hour Challenge!
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so glad to see you back z...even when she did speak...it was obvious by her gestures that she was just trying to convince her worried heart...she is as happy to see he has left as she was to leave him...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

her voice doesn't raise much more than a whisper...and even when she speaks she doesn't say what she means...she wears her heart on her sleeve...her intention is read clearly form the scrunching of her forhead and nose...her turned down lips...that judging by her words should have turned up in a smile...the way her eyes fill to the rim with tears...and the way they overflow...till the drops spill out like rain...the carefull tending of his wounds...that her touch not add to the pain...she knows only to well...that sometimes the cure hurts more than the blow...the grand gestures speak louder than words...and in a volume clearly audible to the spectator...there is no confusing whats in her heart...just silence the words...and hear with your eyes...

o my my wht a piece of writing...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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here u r again impressing mr with ur analysis😊
loved the analysis
...she knows only to well...that sometimes the cure hurts more than the blow...
there is no confusing whats in her heart...just silence the words...and hear with your eyes...thudd😳..sry i fell after reading this..so beautifully written...👏
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Originally posted by: mgdg_2010

o my my wht a piece of writing...👏

yay ren!...geet is a piece of work...we could fill a book with what she tells through her gestures..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"she is as happy to see him leave as she is when she left him" RIGHT ON POINT! THAT is exaclty my point .. she isn't happy AT ALL! She's giving herself fake confirmation .. but that's her mind speaking there .. not her heart.
You know you're lying to yourself when Lucky can see right through you 😆
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Originally posted by: Naz_Angel

here u r again impressing mr with ur analysis😊

loved the analysis
...she knows only to well...that sometimes the cure hurts more than the blow...
there is no confusing whats in her heart...just silence the words...and hear with your eyes...thudd😳..sry i fell after reading this..so beautifully written...👏

thanks naz...so we decided it is an analysys...i'm down with that...i guess this was the favorite line...it has much more meaning than it looks like...😉
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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

"she is as happy to see him leave as she is when she left him"
RIGHT ON POINT! THAT is exaclty my point .. she isn't happy AT ALL! She's giving herself fake confirmation .. but that's her mind speaking there .. not her heart.
You know you're lying to yourself when Lucky can see right through you 😆
Z

i liked that z...actualy, you know you are bad lyer when even lucky can tell you're lying..😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely words Syl...every one of them!😍👏
So Beautiful!

Her heart says one thing and her lips - something else! And we all know where her heart lies...with her love, Her Maan!
She will be restless until she sees him in front of her again...And that reslessness was coming through very clearly in all her actions as you mentioned!

Waiting for their reuinion...hope it i s an explosive one!😍☺️

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