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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great start ... circumstance made them apart ...waiting what is in store for them.

wonderful part!!!
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BITTERSWEET
MEMORIES

Part 1 b

The words 'I Love You' are not for anyone to say from their mouth to their beloved one.
Its a feeling that you can whisper to each other from heart-to-heart without saying it out aloud

6 years back

Geet & Maan's marriage was arranged by Savitri Devi who was a dignitary @ Blooming Orchid Orphan House in Delhi . Savitri Devi visualized Geet as her future daughter-in-law & the Khuarana bahu from the day she saw her .

An ethereal beauty with porcelain complexion , hazel eyes , soft wavy voluminous hair , her petite yet full figure which beautifully complimented an innocent face that would melt even the meanest hearts instantly .

On the other hand Sameera's mother Naintara (NT) Rathod was a widow . Crooked by nature her sole aim was to get Sam hitched with Maan by fair or foul means .
Arjun Rathod , NT's husband was a good soul. Maan's dad Kunal Singh Khurana & Arjun Rathod started their joint enterprise Khurana & Rathode constructions .
But Arjun by nature was shy & way too humble to be in the limelight focus so he requested his buddy Kunal to restore the title to Khurana Constructions only much to the disgust of NT .

It was one such day when Arjun & Kunal were returning from LA when their flight got lightening struck & exploded in air killing all the passengers including them.Misha Khurana wife of Kunal went into depression & used to take a lot of sleeping pills in hope of giving her eyes rest from prolonged crying .Mysteriously those very sleeping pills caused her to sleep forever ; only never to wake up this time coz she had an overdose which became lethal to her nervous system.

Having suffered the loss of his parents in childhood , Maan was always the intense , angry , young man of few words . He stopped expressing himself to anyone except her sweet & only friend , his grandma .

So , when Savitri Devi asked Maan to see Geet's picture he downright refused it & made it very clear that there's no room for discussion over this topic .

It was only on the occasion of the Independence Day @ the Orphanage that Dadi insisted Maan to join her as his father never backed from charitable work.Having no choice Maan succumbed to the Dadi's emotional blackmail & agreed to accompany her .

Blooming Orchid Orphanage
Independence Day

Savitri Devi was called upon to deliver a small speech on Independence Day which was to be followed by a program of traditional songs & dance . During Savitri Devi's speech Maan (who now tookover Khurana Constructions from Dadi) got an important overseas call. He went outside the auditorium ; having done with it he turned to go back but instead collided with a delicate & fragile frame. He as if instinctively wrapped his arms around her slender waist& looked @ her .She was the most innocent beauty he had ever seen ; her eyes tightly shut in fear of her impending fall , her arms were wound around his neck .
( the above part as you all well know is an inspiration from our very own Geet Hui Sabse Parayi trademark scene 😛 😆)

Maan had been in company of many beautiful women before , but that was it they'were only beautiful . The girl in his arms had enticing beauty but along with it her innocence was attracting him like a moth to a flame ; a puzzle he could not decipher so willing to get lost in forever .
She still had her eyes closed , her luscious lips slightly parted , a small frown on her temple she was looking so cute Maan fought the urge of engulfing her in his arms & take her away with himself .

Geet , on the other hand could not fathom what happened she was instructing a co-worker to get flowers ; her back towards where she was heading & what happened thereafter she could not understand . She only felt herself getting bumped to a rock solid frame which caused her to tumble backwards ; she prepared herself for the fall but instead felt the comfort & soothing warmth from the hold in which she was braced .

She finally opened her eyes to see a very handsome man staring at her intently . His deep brown looking at her with something which made her shiver .

Meanwhile , Savitri Devi came out looking for Maan & the sight in front of her made her want to do a happy dance . After thanking god for helping her out in this mission she cleared her throat " ahem"

Geet & Maan who had no intention of doing whatever they were suppposed to do jolted back to reality . Maan immediately straightened her . Maan looked everywhere except Dadi & Geet whereas Geet turned a cherry red looking down .

Savitri Devi : So , I see , you guys have met ??

Both Geet & Maan were confused . Seeing their confused expressions Dadi chuckled.
" oh ho Maan , remember I told you there's a girl I want you to meet ; arey wohi ladki jiski tasveer subah ko apne dekhi thi . Yeh wohi ladki hai ... she's Geet.Dadi gave a knowing look to Maan.

Maan immediately realized what Dadi was talking about . He did'nt know whether to feel elated or scared so as to why God was being so generous to him . But her feel in his arms & the very thought he would get to see her angelic face every morning filled his heart with joy . He felt himself giving a small smile to Dadi nodding in assurance ; a smile that he only & perhaps last gave when he was with his parents .

Savitri Devi always took care of Geet who was an orphan herself . Savitri also took the responsibility of her education .Geet loved Savitri Devi because she filled the void of her parents ; she was her friend , philosopher & guide .She was the most wonderful thing that ever happened to her ... well that was till she met her grandson Maan Singh Khurana .

Geet was very frank with Dadi & the feeling was mutual so when Dadi expressed her desire to make Geet her bahu Geet silently accepted the proposal as also her fate with a stranger . But a little while back enjoying the warmth & security in his arms ; her joy knew no bounds knowing the same guy is her future husband . Yes she did not love him yet ; but then she was definitely affected by him . She decided to give her fate a 2nd chance .

As time went by Geet & Maan got to know each other well & more closely . Maan made it a point to visit the orphanage & spend time with her .Although Maan did not speak much he simply listened to her musical voice, watched her taking care of the children & occasionally caught her stealing glances at him.

It was one such day after her work @ the orphanage that Maan dropped Geet to her home a few blocks away from there . Geet got out of his car , mouthed a thank you & turned to go when she felt a tug around her neck . Her duppatta fell in no time coz it was stuck to the car door accidently .

Having lost it she quickly covered her neck with her hand & turned around . Geet's face flustered with the thought that Maan saw the entire thing . Seeing her not moving in embarrassment Maan got our from the car took her duppatta out & gave it o her .

Geet was trembling with the close proximity when he gave her the duppatta . Her eyes downcast she quickly mouthed a thank you in a small voice & was about to go when Maan held her wrist & pulled her towards him. She crashed on his chest , her palms rested against his heart , his breath falling on her face ; when he slowly lifted her face to look @ her beautiful eyes .

Maan :" Geet ... " he whispered. "I know dadima wants us to get married & I also know you cannot say no to dadima coz you love her . But there's something you should also know Geet .Since the day I saw you I felt something stir deep in my heart & soul . Since that day I always looked forward to spend time with you .
Your eyes , your face , your entire being never left my thoughts nor dreams.This heart that never desired , wished or craved for anything has become your slave . You are the owner of my heart & soul Geet ... I Love You .

Geet was listening to his voice lost in it coz he neither talked nor expressed himself much . He never even tried to get close to her contemplating her discomfort .But today listening to him pour his heart out Geet could not stop herself . She craned her neck slightly & placed a feather light kiss on his lips .

Maan was momentarily paralyzed with the touch of her lips on his own . He looked @ her & saw the crimson red hue on her cheeks . His lips formed into that famous small smile & he lowered his face this time capturing her lips for a full on passionate one .

In between the kisses he asked " I ... kiss ...guess ... kiss ...that's...kiss ... a ...kiss ... Yes ...kiss "

Geet : ahan ... kiss

That night was the most beautiful full moon night of their lives . Little did they know that the grey clouds of Sam & NT were also witness to their blissful love & they promised to hide this moon within their dark & viscous embrace .

Ok ladies that's it for this week . Questions, any queries please feel free to ask . Its quite long coz you gals deserve it for I made you wait also long enough .
Next update not before 11th June 😊







Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
yipee...i'm the first one to comment...rarely gets the occasion!!
nice start priya...got to knw abt ur SS today only!! wonderful concept! waiting for more... yet anxious that our Maaneet will be separated!!
plz add me in ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: bangalores

yipee...i'm the first one to comment...rarely gets the occasion!!
nice start priya...got to knw abt ur SS today only!! wonderful concept! waiting for more... yet anxious that our Maaneet will be separated!!
plz add me in ur PM list


Thank You so much dear 🤗
I'm really happy you liked it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful updates::
Urrrgh hate sameera & NT
Awww maaneet moments wer sweet,,loved how maan confessed & den geet replied to him wiv a kiss
Wanna see how maaneet separated
Cont soon Xx...
Thanks 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update priya ...
uff abhee 11 june tak wait kerna paray ga ...
btw how many parts will this SS have?
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ... nice ... liked both parts ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sindu555

lovely update priya ...

uff abhee 11 june tak wait kerna paray ga ...
btw how many parts will this SS have?
love
Sana



Thanks for the comments dear 🤗
See I've drafted a rough sketch of what's to be expected in the next updates . Since I've extended part 1 only maybe it will have around 7 to 8 parts coz I don't wanna rush .

Again you would get 2 updates together 😊 coz I really can't give chota chota parts 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ff...
loved both the parts..!!
pls do pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome FF... Loved it
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