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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi ,
Interesting Concept...pls continue n pm me too
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Waiting ... 😍
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BITTERSWEET
MEMORIES


Part 1 a


When you are still loving what is gone ,
its very hard to move on .


Delhi
Khurana Mansion
12:00 am

"I never thought Maan you would stoop so low . I trusted you with my life , my soul , my heart & my Love but you ... you betrayed me . Your promises , care , concern were all fake ; a mere facade . Behind it was This !!!
I hate you Maan . I regret the day I ever met you & I despise my heart for loving you ..." GEEET!!!!!

Maan screamed awake from the nightmare ; the same one haunting him for the last 5 years .He clenched & unclenched his fists as he seethed in anger @ himself for still feeling the same hollowness & anguish that he felt on that fateful day his life , his soul , his love , his Geet left him .

Gulping down a glass of water he tried to calm himself . He lowered the temperature of the A.C. further to cool him down & slowly drifted to a restless slumber .

London
Raichand Estate
8:00 am

"Good morning Vicky"

Vicky was reading The Sun . He looked up to see Geet coming down . Dressed in a white top & basic blue jeans she still managed to look a class apart .

Vicky : Hey Geet ! Morning ! Just in time . I asked Maria to get your favorite chocolate pancakes & black coff...
Vicky stopped abruptly .
Geet , who was smiling widely suddenly had an array of emotions flooding her face . Memories rushed to her ... blissful & worst .
5 years , 5years since her life took a complete turn , she promised herself never to relive those regretful memories but alas! its easier said than done .His smile , his passion , his favorites everything ... every single detail she remembered with precision .

Vicky sensing the awkwardness tried to divert her ." You know Geet , Gol Gappa called this morning "

Geet who was lost suddenly snapped listening to the 'Gol Gappa' part ;a nick name given by her to her best friend Pinky .

Geet : You mean Pinky called , right ?

Vicky : Yup ! and guess what ? she's getting married to Adi .

Geet : That's great . Finally , they had the courage to confess & seek their parents' permission to go ahead .

Vicky : Yeah . Pinky called up , you were getting ready , so she spoke with me .
Their marriage is on 10th June & they invited us Geet .

" I can't Vicky " ... came Geet's instant reply even before he could finish the sentence .

Vicky : But

" No buts . I'm not going & that is final . If you wanna go please do so ."
Geet quickly stuffed her breakfast & rushed off to work .

Vicky looked at her & decided to deal with the matter later .

Delhi
Khurana Mansion
7:30 am

"Maan , beta Adi has called" ... Savitri Devi ( Maan's grandmom ) told her grandson .

" Hello Maan . Woh ... actually ... kya hai na ... I mean ... you know..."

Maan : Adi , what is it ?

Adi : Woh Maan I'm getting married to Pinky & we would be very happy if you could come .
Adi said in one breath .

Adi was Maan's best buddy .Even though things changed a lot over the last 5 years Adi was always with him , looking after Maan as his own brother . Even though reluctant Maan agreed to be there for him & Pinky .

After having , few talks over the future project of KC (Khurana Constructions) Adi could not stop himself from spilling that he invited Geet & Vicky too .

That was enough to stiffen Maan's composure .

Maan :Are they coming ?

Adi : Well Vicky agreed but am not sure of Geet . Although Vicky promised me he would try his best to convince her .

Maan : Hmmm . Okay , Adi .

'Maan' ... as he disconnected the call , he heard the voice of the biggest blunder he ever committed ; unfortunately now his wife Sameera.

Sam : Who was it ?

Maan(simply coldly replied) : Adi

Sam : Oh ! Anything important .

Maan : Yes . He's getting married to Pinky .

Sam(giving her plastic artificial smile) : Really , wow ! am so happy for them .So nice to see 2 love birds uniting in the holy bonds of matrimony .

Maan gave sarcastic smile turned to face her :'' 2 love birds ', 'holy bonds of matrimony '... save such sweet words for those who don't know you Sam.

Sam : Why do you dig up the past memories Maan . Can't we move on like Geet??

Maan : SAM !!! SHUT UP !! JUST SHUT UP !!
Remember I believe in charity . You're staying in this house , sharing the title Khurana coz your mom is sick ; she already suffered 2 heart attacks.
You're just entitled to food , clothing & shelter - the basics don't I repeat don't even dream of anything more than this .

Maan's mobile rang this time . He would have given Sam a piece of his mind but it was an important project far more precious than her . He received the call & rushed for his usual day @ his place of solace amidst work in Khurana Constructions .


Part 1 b coming up shortly
Pms after both the parts .







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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG...Priya u write and I don't even know...
I am angry...really angry...💔
LOL Nautanki kuch zayada hoga na...
Oh I loved it babes...WTH...
Maan and Sameera married...
someone kill me...or pass the dragger
Maan cheated on her...😭😭
awww my pooor geet...
Congrats on SS🥳
🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8 part !
Continue soon!
Waiting for next part 😍

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ansah

OMG...Priya u write and I don't even know...

I am angry...really angry...💔
LOL Nautanki kuch zayada hoga na...
Oh I loved it babes...WTH...
Maan and Sameera married...
someone kill me...or pass the dragger
Maan cheated on her...😭😭
awww my pooor geet...
Congrats on SS🥳
🤗🤗


Arrey nahi yaar ! I don't write . Actually this was a concept that was buzzing in my mind for a long time so I tried to you know give it a shot .

Awww ! don't feel bad no broken hearts please 🤗
You know I love you ❤️

And Betray !!! well that's the question ❓ You'll soon find out coz I'll wrap it up in the next 4 max. 5 parts .

Thanks a lot hun for the wishes 🤗 🤗 🤗
Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So it's only 4-5 parts...oh no...

ur really good priya plz consider making it a FF
awww love u 2...🤗
maan did not cheat on her...it was the circumstances...
don't tell me vicky and geet are a couple...
waiting for more...eagerly
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey from now onwards would u update on regular basis or once in a month

plz reply to this post
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

hey from now onwards would u update on regular basis or once in a month

plz reply to this post


Hey abinash079 thanks ! Regular basis is lil' difficult ie if you mean every day but 1 to 2 updates a week is possible .

Is that okay?? 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: drashsree100


Hey abinash079 thanks ! Regular basis is lil' difficult ie if you mean every day but 1 to 2 updates a week is possible .

Is that okay?? 😊



its perfectly ok but u said that it would be of max 5 parts so means 5 weeks it would finish na

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