'Love In Amritsar' ideas to writers of Geet.

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Episode 1: Maan and Geet in Amritsar
Episode 1:

Scene 1: Maahi moment as Geet jumps on and eats golgappa's as Maan secretly watches her and feels good to see Geet having golgappa's..some releif to Maan's bleeding heart which is feeling the pain of being so close to Geet and still away....and above all atlast Geet had something...Maan hears the servant informing Geet that the driver had prepared golgappa's for her.

Scene 2:He immediately makes a move and clashes with Jugnu the funny mama with weird sunglasses on making him look like a funny and idiotic detective...Mama suspects Balwant ...( Maan) he tires to stop him but Maan gets away saying Lucky had called him..

Geet wondering and suspecting if Maan was around specially after having "golgappa's" and hearing from the servant that "Balwant" the driver had made them..she immediately rushes out in search of Balwant...( Maan)..

Scene 3: Maan with his younger saala...who calls him to be there and listen to his nonsense till the time he was working out...poor Maan gets stuck with his sample " Saala" Lucky irritates Maan further when he asks Maan to show his biceps....and proves his biceps were not as good as lucky despite Maan's biceps better than him...Maan feels it was waste of time...and he quickly moves out saying Teji was looking for him..

Scene 4:Geet meets lucky and asks him where the driver was..lucky feels odd why Geet was confirming about the driver..Geet asks lucky to tell her as she had some work...Lucky informs Geet he just rshed away to meet Teji...Geet feels even more fishy...Geet too moves out quickly as funny mama "Jugnu" follows her with his wierd sunglass on and a detective book in his hand..

Scene 5: Maan sees Geet searching for him..."Maaahiiiiiii" moment as Maan feels Geet had caught him and has realised he was around..happens Maahiii moment as Geet keeps searching for Maan and he keeps staring her from far...and with situational circumstances such that Maan makes Geet search for him even more...playing hide and seek...and make Geet run to catch him if she can...

Scene 6: Maan holds Geet's hand and is behind her with a place chosen where he can immediately get off...

" Maahii at its utmost pitch and its best...." as Geet feels the presence and feel of Maan's touch and she worried what if anyone sees her...( Geet has not yet turned back as she is stunned to feel Maan's presence and that fear of what wud her family do makes her stand still and shocked for a moment)

Maan leaves her hand and gets off as shocked and stunned Geet turns back and finds no one there....and only marks of Maan's fingers on her hand....

" Maahi in the back ground...as Geet shows mixed emotions of joy,fear as well as feeling of being hurt"

Scene 7: Maan who is observing Geet from far...feels good as Geet was upset but still loved and missed him,making him feel assured he wud win back her heart..

Scene 8: Jugnu Mama finds Maan....and asks him what was he doing..Maan to divert Jugnu mama's attention asks him to observe Geet as she was smiling alone....Jugnu observes it and feels he was right...but before he cud say aomething else Maan gets off and leaves Jugnu in a dilemma who is wondering what was he thinking before...and why was Geet smiling alone..

Scene 9: Beeji asks Teji to be free in the evening...as she had planned to go out to dargah..the same dargah where Maan was shown....visiting....before he comes in ...Geet too comes in while the chat is on searching for Maan...Beeji informs Geet that since she had soemthing after a while and was now good..she wanted her to come with her to dargah to take blessings....Geet earlier denies but Beeji with her "constipating looks" as Jane says and I just love that description by Jane meme...orders Geet to be ready..

Break: Teji asks Maan to give the keys as he was going to drive the car...Maan requests Teji to let him drive as he too wanted to come ..Teji shouts at him and asks him to be in his limits and do what he wanted him to...and if he was so eager to go then he can go there later on...Maan feels disappointed as he really wanted to come...

All of them gather as Geet looks for the driver in hope of catching Maan..........she asks where the driver was..Teji informs Geet he asked him not to come..Geet feels upset as she realy wanted to confirm if Maan had come as driver..

Break: Everyone in Dargah...Geet too goes there as flashes a moment from past when Maan and Geet had gone to dargah....feeling the pain of missing Maan she closes her eyes....and prays for betterment of Maan and a wish that the driver wasnt Maan and Maan stays away from Teji and her family....
( Sad Maahi in the back drop)

Geet opens her eyes and sees Maan on the other side in white shit and blue jeans...

( Maahi in the backdrop as an eye lock happens with Maan and Geet )

Episode ends with one screen two pictures.

( Maan and Geet looking at each other and an eyelock with Geet happy to see Maan and Maan with a look as if he was calling her to come and dissolve in his arms

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Episode 2;
Scene 1;Maahiiiiii in the backdrop as Maan walks towards Geet and Geet shicked to see him...worried Geet feeling the presence of Maan as
Maan comes close to her and both of them tie a thread with a wish..as Maan goes away with steps backwards and Geet feeling the pain of
Maan going out of her sight....with tears rolling out...Geet realises she was dreaming and when she comes out happens the first realisation by
Geet that she cannot indeed stay away from Maan and how to tackle the situation where she cant forgive him and cant stay away at the
same time..
Scene 2: Maan secretly in the avataar of Sardarji reaches Dargah....searching for Geet...and sees other family members and hides himself..
Scene 3: Geet in her own world thinking about Maan sees men walking on bed of fire.....she slowly walks towards it and steps up on the bed of
fire as Maan finds her but holds himself from shouting as Teji and others too were there...Geet walks on the bed of fire giving punishment to
herself for depriving herself and Maan but she had to becoz she was still in the after shock and pain of what Maan had said to her...
( Maan feels the pain as he finds himself helpless and moves towards Geet)
Scene 4: The same Baba who spoke to Maan speaks with Geet;
Baba: Ajeeb takleef hai teri aankhon mein beti jo dil se utarkar teri aankhon mein dikhrahi hai..
Geet looks at that baba ..
Geet: Takleef paai hai aur kisiko dee bhi hai baba...khud se dur rehne ki takleef aur khud ko unse dur rakhne ki takleef
Maan listens to Geet as he feels the pain even more...and feels for Geet as even she was striving to be with him...but had all right reasons to
be away..
Baba: Khudaa ka ajeeb khek hai beti...kuch dino pehle woh aaya tha kisike dil ko thess pahunchane ki saja mangne aur apne aapko saja dekar
chala gaya..aaj tu aayi hai.....tujhse uska koi nata ho na ho....lekin jazbaat ek hai....
( Maahi runs in the background as Maan looks at Geet and Geet realising Baba might be talking about Maan).....
Just when Maan fels like talking to Geet..comes the entire family who after been informed by one of the fellow devotee...rush towards Geet..
Scene 5: Beeji scolds Geet as Teji and others feel it was all becoz of Maan....and Teji asks Geet not to do such stupid things for one who
doesnt care for her...Geet keeps quiet and moves with them as Maan is left helpless to watch Geet from far and do nothing....
Scene 6; Everyone reach back home and Maan too reaches back..and sees Geet being taken away to her room....since he cannot go
upstairs..he goes back to his room and feeling worried if Geet has applied something to her feet..
Scene 7: Teji's wife applies ointment and Teji asks everyone to leave the room and requests Geet to take care of herself...Teji waits there as
everyone else move out..Geet requests Teji to go in his room and she wud be fine....Teji objects bt Geet requests Tejo to go...

Break:Maan listens to talks by the fellow members and feels good that Geet had applied ointment.....
Song Sequence : " Sohniye heeriye teri yaad aaundi hai"
Singer: Shael
Its past midnight..neither Maan nor Geet have slept..Maan feeling the urge to meet Geet as he remembers all those moments with Geet when
they were together alone in bedroom...Geet on the other hand ...too thinks about those moments...as well as the morning experience...when
Maan holded her hand...
( Song seqence to express feelings of Maan and Geet)...

Break:
Maan feels restless and decides no matter what and who ever comes inbetween he wud barge in as he cant leave Geet alone....Maan secretly
comes in...and happens a Maahi moment....when Maan sees Geet alone in her room....as he walks towards Geet and sees her sleeping with
tears in her eyes still fresh...Maan kneels down and feels the pain seeing at the Geet's feet which are burnt....
( Maahi in the entire scene as Maan recollects those words said by Geet and that moment when Geet walked on the bed of fire...
Episode ends with Maan kneeling down and feeling the pain which Geet was going through....
One screen and one picture...side angle...Maan and Geet together ....

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