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she wiggles loose of the beast's hold...only to meet his gaze again..not too long after...and some where in a land far away...the sidekick and sherlock have a meeting...where sherlock thinks he should take up solving another mistery...not having solved any of the other cases...he still feels confident that this one...will be his lucky break...while back in the kingdom...we find another damsel in destress...the sweat natured girl...is trampled by a tyrant...and the beast...who is the king...finds himself treated worse than a pauper...and our song brakes down at the sight of him being sujected to shame...for he's her prince...despite her pain...but the beast is not one to give up at all...and much less easily...he goes to her this time...and much like a paperback novel...the story unfolds...where the lover jumps the walls to get to the object of his affections...there is no stoping him now...its life or death...either live to see her...or die trying...

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thank you kindly...😳
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Beautifully written dear. I realy waits to read it daily
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Originally posted by: anupm04

Beautifully written dear. I realy waits to read it daily

awww...i call it my daily post...like a news paper we have in nyc 😆...maaneet have us hooked don't they...😍
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How .. wait for it ... Beautiful! 😍
True he was treated worse than a pauper, but he'd do anything for his Princess ... and the Princess cannot see her Prince being treated any less than one and it kills her inside to see him like this all for her!!
Indeed it all unravelled beautifully in the last scene .. where "Deepak and Jyoti" the characters of the novel whose names mean "Light and Brightness" are to meet . very soon .. and when they do all the light that has faded from their life while shine brightly! :)
Wonderful as usual Syl!
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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

How .. wait for it ... Beautiful! 😍
True he was treated worse than a pauper, but he'd do anything for his Princess ... and the Princess cannot see her Prince being treated any less than one and it kills her inside to see him like this all for her!!
Indeed it all unravelled beautifully in the last scene .. where "Deepak and Jyoti" the characters of the novel whose names mean "Light and Brightness" are to meet . very soon .. and when they do all the light that has faded from their life while shine brightly! :)
Wonderful as usual Syl!
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you know what came to my mind when jugnu was reading the novel while maan played it out?...i thought of our FFwriters...i think they knw that our GF has a lot FF dedicated to GHSP...they were trying to give them a shout out...i almost titled the post "Fan Fiction"...now i feel like asking them to "update" soon...like i do with FF writers...😆
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amazing job!!! truly fantastic!

awww...you don't have to say nice things...but i'm glad you did...😃
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Ahahh that's so true!! They dedicated that scene to them surely because we have such amazing writers on this forum!! Ahah I'm sure they'll "Update" tomorrow 😆
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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Ahahh that's so true!! They dedicated that scene to them surely because we have such amazing writers on this forum!! Ahah I'm sure they'll "Update" tomorrow 😆
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they better update tomorrow...if not i'm going to spam their post...😆
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Oh silvi, Jugnu mama- the new Sherlock Holmes, never solved any mystery till today, confident of solving this case- i think your take today has the touch of comedy in it. Ha ha ha...I loved it. Yes he is the king of his own kingdom. His princess is now in a fortress which is built by none other than herself around her heart. Will the king in disguise be able to get his princess after getting all the assaults like a pauper? Can jug nuji be the one solving this mystery?Lets wait and see. Silvi, Somehow i felt jugnu and Lucky are modern version of Laurel and Hardy. Thanks for the daily dose of the Maaneet poem dear.
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