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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

luved every bit of it

brilliantly portrayed

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

liz ... 🤗

it was amazing ... superb

thanks alot for writing this

love

Sana

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

U finished it in 2nd update

Haaye i thought we'll get long matlab 2 3 parts wit long wait after each update😆😆😆😆

U always do that😆😆😆😆😆

U totally changed the track

Wat it was in 1st part n wat came out in 2nd part

Fuly unpredictable update

But it was fab

Loved Maan's like

If like is like this love hoga toh kya hoga

Geet was in shock confuse pain anger all

Love her

Imaginary shaadi hogai still she was back of Maan ki tum ne meri shaadi kharab kar di hehehehehehehe

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

gr8 update
Loved how the truth came out & maan was holding geet so she won't say anyfing
Awww loved the invisible wedding but the fire part was real
Atleast maan fulfilled his promise😉
lovely OS Xx...

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

That was wonderful!!!
Beautiful ending..........loved it!!!

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

awesome ending

loved it!

the wedding at the end was soo sweet.. who knew Maan could be so romantic and caring

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saranya

@nehara

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

wow.. that was really awesome..

i loved it... 😃

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Pallavi

@QueenbeePallavi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

superb !!!! really great work here..loved the way you showed maan coming near geet and enabling him to complete his promise of a wedding..liked it a lot!!! do write more!!!

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euphoric

@euphoric

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Hey Liz....

Thanks a ton sweets.... this was really good👏👏👏👏

i was resisting to read it until you put the whole together😆 and now read it in a go... and had a nice time

I like the way u portray Maan... angry yet balanced and in control... authorative yet sensitive and a perfect lover boy😳👍🏼

Geet was so adamantly trying to get the wedding through not even once understanding or giving him a chance to put through his POV... the sherwani part was hilarious🤣...and then he tried to indimidate her and divert her thoughts in his own way☺️ the bedroom romance was so good😍

wah wah... Dev did something constructive😆... for once he used his brains... and OMG... NT, the con woman! tried to fool Maan and Khuranas... some people never improve but messin with MSK and his family😡

and then wat an end😍 he promised her a wedding😆 perfect MSK style😳

loved it loved it loved it completely😃

Love,

Sonia