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Posted: 14 years ago

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she's found an ally in the fortress...in which she is kept...both are women in waiting....one thinks of how the other has atleast loved...even though she has lost...and to her own sadness...that she has only lost...but has never loved...and the one that is better off of the two senses that she is being carressed...the breeze could only be telling her one thing...that he is near...with the air of a king comming to declare the land his...he comes before them quite conspicuously...for there is no better hiding place...than in plain sight...he fools the guards that have left their post to join in some revelry...and with his charm even earns their trust...at this point to be near her he would do anything...and for now the mere sight of her feeds his appetite...but it won't be long before he'll need a touch from her to quench his thirst...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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she's found an ally in the fortress...in which she is kept...both are women in waiting....one thinks of how the other has atleast loved...even though she has lost...and to her own sadness...that she has only lost...but has never loved...and the one that is better off of the two senses that she is being carressed...the breeze could only be telling her one thing...that he is near...with the air of a king comming to declare the land his...he comes before them quite conspicuously...for there is no better hiding place...than in plain sight...he fools the guards that have left their post to join in some revelry...and with his charm even earns their trust...at this point to be near her he would do anything...and for now the mere sight of her feeds his appetite...but it won't be long before he'll need a touch from her quench his thirst...

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i loved those lines...u presented the whole episode in beautiful lines...and the last line is the lead to the next episode...i'm sure he will get some thirst fullfilled

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Again!! You know I'll say beautiful 😆 .. so here I go: It was beautiful!

I loved how you put the difference in Pammi and Geet about one atleast having been loved and experienced love .. while she has never.. my heart went out to her today .. the line at the end was so painful when she says "Sometimes I feel like breaking all relations and just flying away" ..

I really feel Maaneet will be helping Tej and Pammi realize the importance of respect and love in the relationship .. and to value your wife :)

About Maan .. yes those glances he stole of her face .. her hair blowing in the wind.. how his heart must have felt not being able to help her with the tray .. as he has always been her saviour ... and how his hands must've itched to push back the strands of hair falling on her face!!

Loved it as usual Syl :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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WAH WAH SYLVIA.. AMAZING!! INCREDIBLE!!! MIND BLOWING! Such a beautiful representation of today's episode!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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😎 very nicely written....loved it....i cried for pammi today....i empathized with her.......very well done with ur writing.....loved how u described Pammi's feelings today....and kudos to the actress that plays pammi.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Maya_P

he looked like a king...all full of attitude...and the way he was looking at her...was like a magnet for her...she was drawn to him...oh the quenching...i'm waiting for that touch that sends the electricity running through their veins...

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Originally posted by: Mk.Gh
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Again!! You know I'll say beautiful 😆 .. so here I go: It was beautiful!

I loved how you put the difference in Pammi and Geet about one atleast having been loved and experienced love .. while she has never.. my heart went out to her today .. the line at the end was so painful when she says "Sometimes I feel like breaking all relations and just flying away" ..

I really feel Maaneet will be helping Tej and Pammi realize the importance of respect and love in the relationship .. and to value your wife :)

About Maan .. yes those glances he stole of her face .. her hair blowing in the wind.. how his heart must have felt not being able to help her with the tray .. as he has always been her saviour ... and how his hands must've itched to push back the strands of hair falling on her face!!

Loved it as usual Syl :)

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i'm such a girl...i never tire of "hearing" the word beautiful when it relates to me...😆 ...i could have written a seperate post on pammi alone...she stole my heart...the actor is amazing...i think drashti did not need glicerine to cry today...awww, those were pammi's last lines before leaving the kitchen?...how heart braking...i hope maan and geet teach them to fall in love...tej is very handsome...but that is not enough for a woman...oh yes, maan must have used all his strength not to run to her and touch her...i loved it all...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: dtri

WAH WAH SYLVIA.. AMAZING!! INCREDIBLE!!! MIND BLOWING! Such a beautiful representation of today's episode!!!

oh stop it...☺️ ...you are amazing and incredible!!!!....i am so happy that you liked my lines...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

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very nicely written....loved it....i cried for pammi today....i empathized with her.......very well done with ur writing.....loved how u described Pammi's feelings today....and kudos to the actress that plays pammi.

thank you...🤗....for some reason i could not click the like button on your comment....but i really wanted to...😭....like i wrote to z, pammi stole my heart..her feeling are so neglected...i can't wait to see more of her...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: undisclosed

oh stop it...☺️ ...you are amazing and incredible!!!!....i am so happy that you liked my lines...😊

NO SYL... you just have an amazing and different perspective.. just a totally unique way of looking at things and then penning them down... you know I am a fan!!

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