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her name sounds as if an echo in the wind...he calls out to her from the center of his being as if thunder from the sky...but the wind does not carry his voice to her and she misses him even though he is so close...it might as well have been her own memory of his voice...that she replays when she wants to hear him...so that at this moment when he's really there she may just have confused him with her own internal recording of his breath...she dreams of him this way...calling out to her...but when for a moment time stands still...he calls out to her in just a gentle wisper...that might have been confused with breathing...but she knows all to well...the vibrations her lover's hushed voice makes...and so as she turns to meet his gaze she is rendered still by his sighing of her name..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful Sergeant, you are absolutely right👍🏼
Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii




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OMG Syl!!
That is exactly what I thought of the way this situation was handled .. except of course you put it a kajillion times more beautifully than I would have!
I felt that when at first he was actually yelling out to her in desperation .. she was lost in her own world, her own thoughts, and she may have only thought that her name being screamed was a figment of her own imagination ..
but the second time .. when his voice was a gentle whisper .. she heard him ..
I felt .. wind played a role again .. as the waves in the wind caught his voice with her name .. and sent them off to her as if it were a message ..
So beautiful!!
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

her name sounds as if an echo in the wind...he calls out to her from the center of his being as if thunder from the sky...but the wind does not carry his voice to her and she misses him even though he is so close...it might as well have been her own memory of his voice...that she replays when she wants to hear him...so that at this moment when he's really there she may just have confused him with her own internal recording of his breath...she dreams of him this way...calling out to her...but when for a moment time stands still...he calls out to her in just a gentle wisper...that might have been confused with breathing...but she knows all to well...the vibrations her lover's hushed voice makes...and so as she turns to meet his gaze she is rendered still by his sighing of her name..

u captured their emotion very well sergeant...i love the moment when their eyes meet...a meeting that was awaited for long...his love for her was well seen in his eyes...his one word...Geet...is enough to see how much he missed her
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Originally posted by: Maaneet-is-best

Beautiful Sergeant, you are absolutely right👍🏼
Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii


oh mishty that was a beautiful still of that blessed moment..i felt like i breathed again too
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OMG Syl!!

That is exactly what I thought of the way this situation was handled .. except of course you put it a kajillion times more beautifully than I would have!
I felt that when at first he was actually yelling out to her in desperation .. she was lost in her own world, her own thoughts, and she may have only thought that her name being screamed was a figment of her own imagination ..
but the second time .. when his voice was a gentle whisper .. she heard him ..
I felt .. wind played a role again .. as the waves in the wind caught his voice with her name .. and sent them off to her as if it were a message ..
So beautiful!!
Z

z....you say quite beautifuly yourself...wind is the element of this track...usualy it's water, but this time it is wind...
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

oh mishty that was a beautiful still of that blessed moment..i felt like i breathed again too



I know Sergeant, thanks to Shinus and everyone else who posts these pictures - I am alive only because of them😍
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u captured their emotion very well sergeant...i love the moment when their eyes meet...a meeting that was awaited for long...his love for her was well seen in his eyes...his one word...Geet...is enough to see how much he missed her

my goodness his eyes are just where any one would want to see themselves...now that he has her in his line of vision he is not going to lose sight of her too easily...
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Originally posted by: Maaneet-is-best



I know Sergeant, thanks to Shinus and everyone else who posts these pictures - I am alive only because of them😍

yes, thanks to them for posting and letting us pass them around...pics are great visual comforts...especialy when it is maan and geet in the frame..
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

my goodness his eyes are just where any one would want to see themselves...now that he has her in his line of vision he is not going to lose sight of her too easily...



Yes Teacher !!! Prema - remember the widening eyes class, that is going to come in handy pretty soon👏, go back and read your notes

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