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Hey guys, i want all of u 2 commment on my blog plz..........plz.......i know it is a selfish request...But...u know....GF & its members though gradually, has become my life.😳😳😳😳.........So guys my blog's url is this.............well, i will just post one of my blog's writing & ................If u like it.......den plz comment & read my other writings on d blog too.........
Here is my blog url........www.suchitragungun.blogspot.com
& plz............leave some comments on here & blog too & i will b grateful 2 hear all ur comments.........Be it good or worst.............I just want some encouragement for my writings.......If u can, I AM GIVING U D ull right 2 share all ur opinions & criticisms regarding my writings, u can freely analyze & bash me 2 on my blog
Well, i am posting one of my writings here..........IF u like plz plz guys visit my blog........😭😭😭😭😭.......I am just considering u all as my real frends 😃😃😃
Welll, HERE IS ONE OF MY WRITINGS

Article on Street children'.

Many pity on them, many detest them, but there are very few who take pains to do something that can actually help them to get out of such conditions. Give a thought to this at least once and you may feel their pain. No'.do not think like this. I am not telling you to sympathize and give them alms out of pity.
Actually, you must not do this at all. If you want to do something for them, then, 'pick up these street children and drop them off at a remand home or an orphanage or at an institution that takes care of such helpless children. Just think about them for a second. They can only see their daily bread by chance. They do not even have a place which they can call as their home. Many of these innocent street children fall prey to anti social activities.
Thus, many of these children turn into drug-addicts. The estimated number of street children living in Mumbai is 35,000. These children only try to lead a better life desperately. In this struggle some of these children even end up with such conditions that normal people cannot even think about.
Literally, street children would mean those children for whom the street is a home more than a family. Living without protection is a thing a well-to-do man cannot think for their own children. However, you can only know the pain of street children when you put your own child in the shoes of these street children. The homelessness leads to exploitation through child labor and prostitution. A small deed that may help them can earn you millions of small and innocent smiles. So, instead of detesting them or sympathizing with them, do something that may lit up their faces.
Ok.....Guys....d abov 1 may b Boring or 2 big......& dats y u all r not commenting so i will post another blogpost of mine....................

My original poem- AIDS

Aids
Knows no boundaries,
Knows no riches,
And of course, no bribes.
Make yourself aware
Else you will be nowhere.
A mass killer, AIDS,
Comes to the fore,
Of the non-condom users
And free lovers alike
And Oh! Also through blood transfusion
Knowingly unknown
You must not be,
So, please use condoms
And be HIV free.
And Oh! Also far from free love you must be!
Never joke on a victim,
Of such perilous disease,
They are not a criminal,
You can hug & kiss,
And Oh! You may be the next one to be!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely point. It's true. Street children. We do negate them most of the time. Thinking they are nothing then people from the road! Presuming some post**** gave birth to them & left them on street. There are even some human who takes bath instantly by there touch. Some when they come to your feet in desperation for help they will kick you. It's us. No one els. So I love your article. Wish us, everyone have a big heart to help one of them. Each person. Maybe we all could get together , don't put them in orphanage because they are bad as the road. Sometime wars. Maybe pay for there education food & there place. Like one person could take the responsibility for one person.
I know in my old school, each house looks after 4 children. Each year we raised money for those 4 children education place to stay & There every day needs. They even used to send us letters. & once they are capable of looking after them self, have jobs, we take another child.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wellll, Ya........i dint cum 2 think of dat.😃😃😃...its a gud idea.........If only sum 1 cud understand their pain & fit themselves in these children's shoes........😃😃😃😃😃Thanks for commenting anyways.....i lovd ur opinion...........hey did u read d other 1?????Thank u so much for commentin

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice strt
gud points on street chilren
liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASMI95

hey nice strt

gud points on street chilren
liked it

Thanks for commenting............... did u read d poem?????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ohhhhhhh..........Thank u so much..........😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmm... its rare that someone talks about such realities... youre doing an awesome job.. keep it going..!! :D
cheers...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Premeena-

hmm... its rare that someone talks about such realities... youre doing an awesome job.. keep it going..!! :D

cheers...!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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this goes with your articles

amazing blog
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z9sTJM3Klbk[/YOUTUBE]


this goes with your articles

amazing blog

O....wow......just awesum.......thanks a lot..........actually million thanks😃 Can i use it????
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