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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome....................
u write so beautifully...................
thanks for the pm................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
fantastic job!!! totally love it!!!! I hope the have an "adventure'!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet coco

fantastic job!!! totally love it!!!! I hope the have an "adventure'!

they will no doubt about that this is chapter 8 look out for chapter 9😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb yaaa!! yaa its sad hw it ended......buh i trust on you for more scenes!!

updt soon🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love there cat & mouse fight so cute & adorable finally geet think what she want cant wait to read more pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
brilliant update
thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovelu udpate dear
geet plz make up ur mind what do u really want
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love it lovely update pls cont soonnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏Amazing update👏

"He'd reasoned it this way. If it had been his sister holed up in Monte Carlo in a dead-end job'going nowhere, distanced from her family'he knew Brij would have stepped in.

Of course, there was another part of this reasoning that could not include some fictional sister and his brother-in-arms. He was attracted to Geet'intrigued by her too. She had always been different, and now she was all grown-up he wasn't ready to let go of her yet. 'you can yell at me all you like,' he told her as she swore

Like the way maan wants to take care of Geet (but not as a fictional sister) and protect her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it truly...

And no idea on still where our Maan is taking our Geet?😕

Well this will be a surprise considering no precap...

And Geet has many issues i see...more of her not trusting herself and that the relationship is still very raw....
and Maan's had ants in his pants, but you need to speak the truth.....

but I dont think that will need to happen because he already has geet where he wants her...and she cant help her self..

the butt part was priceless and the kissing...
the ending was so sweet and unexpected...but AMAZING...
Geet you rock...

Thanks for this FAB OS..and i love the title😉
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