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Posted: 14 years ago
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I wanted to share a poem too for Maneet in the recent situation

The sadness is really hard to bear, struggling on the edge of love.
To really know if it is lost or still there, buried so deep under hurt, guilt and sorrow.
Or is it just a fond remembrance of a once new and passionate love?
The answers, the truth, lay deep inside.
There is no shortcut, no gentle path, it's an uphill battle all the way.
There will be a time, when you crest the hill, and the answer quietly appears.
You may be talking tall and alone or holding hands with the love of your life.
Only time and patience and tears will tell what your heart already knows,
but silently waits to whisper to your soul.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: euphoric

the revolving door or the binding web of destiny that have spun them together in the same plane tied them to the same chord!

yes they may try to escape or think that its ended but the trailing end of the chord pulls the other... the purity is such that the presence is felt... the strings may be strained but breaking them is impossible for the strings are tied to the very life of theirs... so in circles they'll move follow the other but never can they walk to the paths that may not have the same destination 😃

i loved the way you brought the revolving door together with the string...beautifully written!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASMI95

well said u r posts r gud
agree ttly

thank you for reading and commenting...feel free to add anything that i may have missed..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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maan and geet inspire us...don't they?...i'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tooo GOOODDD Sylvia dear.....what a comparision...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara202

I wanted to share a poem too for Maneet in the recent situation

The sadness is really hard to bear, struggling on the edge of love.
To really know if it is lost or still there, buried so deep under hurt, guilt and sorrow.
Or is it just a fond remembrance of a once new and passionate love?
The answers, the truth, lay deep inside.
There is no shortcut, no gentle path, it's an uphill battle all the way.
There will be a time, when you crest the hill, and the answer quietly appears.
You may be talking tall and alone or holding hands with the love of your life.
Only time and patience and tears will tell what your heart already knows,
but silently waits to whisper to your soul.

thank you so much for sharing this is...i especially loved the line above...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww thanks!...your confirmation tells me i'm getting the story right...Smile
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Absoluv

Tooo GOOODDD Sylvia dear.....what a comparision...👏

yay Param!...i'm so happy that you got a chance to read it...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome analysis Sylvia...👍🏼..we don't wanna see Maaneet like this....😔
but definitely like this.😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

yay Param!...i'm so happy that you got a chance to read it...😊


Yaar...u r just too good at using the words so RIGHT....how do u do it ?? R u a writer by any chance ?? I think u cud author a book easily....Ur writing skills r amazing & more than that ur way of looking at situations & coming up with a comparision is just SUPERB....luved it dear...👍🏼

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