Devil's Den- The Sherni is back..... - Page 56

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Posted: 14 years ago
I don't want to talk to anyone😛 frrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well said Jyoti, if its executed well, I think everyone will be happy! SR/CON...its ok...I'v love to see a mature couple then the bickering one!

Let's see what they have in store for us...Sam aunty coming, I just hope not!
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Posted: 14 years ago
From a story standpoint, a separation makes perfect logical sense. Whenever a person undergoes great personal tragedy, the best way to take those baby steps forward is to be distracted. Now, if Geet and Maan were under the same roof, it would represent a status quo that makes it easy for Geet to stay in grief mode. But, if they separate, it takes Geet out of the familiar environment. It would force her to confront her loss and also give her space to actually miss Maan's presence. Absence will make the heart grow fonder leading to a more logical passionate reunion and groW*H in their relationship.

I hope Geet leaves KM and returns to Hoshirpur. Maan follows but realizes that he needs to let Geet work through her emotions without jumping in. For her part, Geet should find that the land that was given to Dev during the fake marriage has been restored to her name. I hope she then decides to do something with it...maybe open a school or a home for orphans. She could be shown returning to Delhi to seek donations.

For those against a separation, here is a scene for you.

Arre aankh se boond gira koi

Chingari ka tukda jala koi

Umeed ko aag laga zara

Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara.

The steady noise of the falling rain woke Geet from the reverie she had been in for a while. Unconsciously, Geet stepped out in to the quiet corridor to take in the cool evening air as memories of another day flooded her being.

Was it only a few months ago that Maan had faced the angry villagers in this very same spot as he attempted to save Rasika Rathod from their wrath? So much had changed since then. It had rained that evening too just as it had when she had dragged a reluctant Maan to the Dhabha. Water had a curious way of bringing them together. But today, the few hundred miles between Delhi and Hoshiarpur that separated them felt like the proverbial seven oceans.

"Snap out of it Geet", she told herself as a faint growl served as a reminder that she had eaten nothing all day. Gathering her bag Geet hurriedly left the inn hoping some store would still be open.

As she turned the corner in to the main square, a gentle tug on her dupatta held her back. "Maan…aap bhi…" she started to blurt in gentle annoyance before stopping herself. Why would Maan be here in Hoshiarpur. The anger in his eyes when she left their home two days ago was not likely to have dissolved so soon.

Turning around sadly, Geet disentangled her dupatta from the bumper of a parked jeep before crossing the square to the lone store still open selling groceries.

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Posted: 14 years ago
😛
😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Res: Good u wrote, now I can PM u 😆
Kya hua? Why are u angry?........
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ Jyo
Fabolous take, liked all ur predictoin possibilities makes perfect sense 👏👏
I will definetly watch todays epi for Geet da Sherni 😳

hmm so may be leap is on way, i have full faith on CVS they will execute nicely😊

@ Jaya Excellent writing ⭐️
Could not agree more separation will bring them more closure, haila Both Maaneet is going back to HP will be treat to watch 😍
@ Tongue showing
😛🤗 why what happen 😆 why u don't want to talk to anyone not even to Spoon 😆


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Posted: 14 years ago
Spoon.......🤗🤗How can I not talk to Spoon? Spoon's my best buddy🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Best Buddy 🤗🤗
today i was so happy to see devils happy 😃😆
do u know what was being discussed in 70 and some pages
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: polly23

@ Best Buddy 🤗🤗
today i was so happy to see devils happy 😃😆
do u know what was being discussed in 70 and some pages


@Happy, I have no idea, 😕 I had asked the same question and no one was kind enough to asnwer hence I am not talking to anyone😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ No idea now i understand 😛
i hope all was happy happy discussion
i m gonna watch todays epi 😳 just Maaneet part though 😃


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