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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: muniza75


I am 2nd in that, waiting for her idea....

Muniza




😆😆😆😆😆

OMG!!!!

so much pressure 😲

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Posted: 14 years ago
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one drink after another rolled down his throat...one for the good times, one for the bad times...one for his wife and one for ...the one that was gone...his heart was heavy though the ambience was colorful...he watched her from a far as she looked gone from the whole scene...he would give anything to see her smile again...but she won't let him in...and he can't seem to figure out how to unlock the door to where his old geet hides...he knows she is in there just crying for him to let her out...one more drink for his old geet...

the blood starts to boil inside him as he sees the rat that calls himself his brother approach the celebration with his so called dadi...another drink for the rat....and suddenly out of the corner of his eye he sees it..the one thing that would bring him back to life again...she smiled...a brilliant smile...but it wasn't because of him...then who caused it?...was it the rat?...as the drinks started to take over his senses he makes an effort to walk toward her...to see that smile again but this time from up close...
if only his feet would ccoperate with him...suddenly all turns dark and the next thing he knew he wakes up on his bed with her sitting near him...apparently she was watching him sleep...just as she noticed that he was awake she made an attempt to get up...but his hand was to quick and his grip was too strong...and so she lost the advantage and was flipped over him to her side of the bed...and as his senses were still under the effects of the drink he was not holding back...
he heard his old geet calling him from deep inside her..."come to me"...he heard the tiny voice say...and so he got closer and closer...but the guardian of the voice fought his proximity...he would let her out no matter what it took...he heard the voice again and imagined it came from her guardians mouth...she pushed and she shoved...but he was already on top of her...making his way towards her mouth...to set his old geet free...
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SUPERB...EXCELLENT...AWESOME....AMAZING...U captured it all the torment of MAAN & his desire to c his old GEET again ...to bring her to life again....Loved it dear...Please do continue....😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oooh la la, that was brilliant babes, you've got to continue 👏⭐️
i'm glad you liked it...i would love to see maan drunk and aggressive...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

one drink after another rolled down his throat...one for the good times, one for the bad times...one for his wife and one for ...the one that was gone...his heart was heavy though the ambience was colorful...he watched her from a far as she looked gone from the whole scene...he would give anything to see her smile again...but she won't let him in...and he can't seem to figure out how to unlock the door to where his old geet hides...he knows she is in there just crying for him to let her out...one more drink for his old geet...

the blood starts to boil inside him as he sees the rat that calls himself his brother approach the celebration with his so called dadi...another drink for the rat....and suddenly out of the corner of his eye he sees it..the one thing that would bring him back to life again...she smiled...a brilliant smile...but it wasn't because of him...then who caused it?...was it the rat?...as the drinks started to take over his senses he makes an effort to walk toward her...to see that smile again but this time from up close...
if only his feet would ccoperate with him...suddenly all turns dark and the next thing he knew he wakes up on his bed with her sitting near him...apparently she was watching him sleep...just as she noticed that he was awake she made an attempt to get up...but his hand was to quick and his grip was too strong...and so she lost the advantage and was flipped over him to her side of the bed...and as his senses were still under the effects of the drink he was not holding back...
he heard his old geet calling him from deep inside her..."come to me"...he heard the tiny voice say...and so he got closer and closer...but the guardian of the voice fought his proximity...he would let her out no matter what it took...he heard the voice again and imagined it came from her guardians mouth...she pushed and she shoved...but he was already on top of her...making his way towards her mouth...to set his old geet free...

Wooooow!....ur really good...GF has so many talented ppl...keep going
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Posted: 14 years ago
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SUPERB...EXCELLENT...AWESOME....AMAZING...U captured it all the torment of MAAN & his desire to c his old GEET again ...to bring her to life again....Loved it dear...Please do continue....😳 awww...i'm glad you like it...let me see what i can do...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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...continued from page 1
geet struggled under his weight...as his breath fanned her face...it smelled of cool mint liquor...and she felt her self intoxicated...as she looked up to his eyes she saw her reflection...a mirror of what he was looking at...there was darkeness in his eyes...but then there was also desire for her...though he didn't stop her from wiggling underneath him...the weight of his body was enough to keep her pinned down to the bed...
maan kept hearing the tiny voice call him from geet's mouth...and he followed the voice..he came closer and closer...he felt how geet's belly stopped moving as she held her breath...and he finally plunged in to geet's mouth so save her...he stamped his mouth on to hers as if branding her...geet regained her breath but this time it was at a rapid pace...maan could feel her unlocking the door to where his old geet was...the tiny voice grew louder and clearer...as it cried to him "don't leave me now"...
the struggle continued but this time it was for who could hold on tighter to the other...there arms intertwined in each others hair as the their mouths openned and closed as do the wings of a butterfly...letting in just enough air to last them for time indefinite...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wooooow!....ur really good...GF has so many talented ppl...keep going thank you...see continuation on page 3...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: undisclosed

one drink after another rolled down his throat...one for the good times, one for the bad times...one for his wife and one for ...the one that was gone...his heart was heavy though the ambience was colorful...he watched her from a far as she looked gone from the whole scene...he would give anything to see her smile again...but she won't let him in...and he can't seem to figure out how to unlock the door to where his old geet hides...he knows she is in there just crying for him to let her out...one more drink for his old geet...

the blood starts to boil inside him as he sees the rat that calls himself his brother approach the celebration with his so called dadi...another drink for the rat....and suddenly out of the corner of his eye he sees it..the one thing that would bring him back to life again...she smiled...a brilliant smile...but it wasn't because of him...then who caused it?...was it the rat?...as the drinks started to take over his senses he makes an effort to walk toward her...to see that smile again but this time from up close...
if only his feet would ccoperate with him...suddenly all turns dark and the next thing he knew he wakes up on his bed with her sitting near him...apparently she was watching him sleep...just as she noticed that he was awake she made an attempt to get up...but his hand was to quick and his grip was too strong...and so she lost the advantage and was flipped over him to her side of the bed...and as his senses were still under the effects of the drink he was not holding back...
he heard his old geet calling him from deep inside her..."come to me"...he heard the tiny voice say...and so he got closer and closer...but the guardian of the voice fought his proximity...he would let her out no matter what it took...he heard the voice again and imagined it came from her guardians mouth...she pushed and she shoved...but he was already on top of her...making his way towards her mouth...to set his old geet free...


Seriously it's toooooo good, plz write more😳.....




Muniza
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Seriously it's toooooo good, plz write more😳.....
Muniza
i'm glad you liked...a drunk maan is always good inspiration...😆...see continued on page 3...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: undisclosed

...continued from page 1

geet struggled under his weight...as his breath fanned her face...it smelled of cool mint liquor...and she felt her self intoxicated...as she looked up to his eyes she saw her reflection...a mirror of what he was looking at...there was darkeness in his eyes...but then there was also desire for her...though he didn't stop her from wiggling underneath him...the weight of his body was enough to keep her pinned down to the bed...
maan kept hearing the tiny voice call him from geet's mouth...and he followed the voice..he came closer and closer...he felt how geet's belly stopped moving as she held her breath...and he finally plunged in to geet's mouth so save her...he stamped his mouth on to hers as if branding her...geet regained her breath but this time it was at a rapid pace...maan could feel her unlocking the door to where his old geet was...the tiny voice grew louder and clearer...as it cried to him "don't leave me now"...
the struggle continued but this time it was for who could hold on tighter to the other...there arms intertwined in each others hair as the their mouths openned and closed as do the wings of a butterfly...letting in just enough air to last them for time indefinite...


😍😍😍 Hai hai hai, wonderful me toh dead....Plz continue😍.....





Muniza

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