-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 17

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saadi88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#701

omg.muski dis was just amazing..truely magical..i just luvd each nd every line.every gesture made by them,it was just marvelous..out of this world....plz cont. Soon

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#702

Nice part

Geet in his love forgot all her pain

Love her

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komlika

@komlika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#703

Beautiful.....n.... Well written.... Cont soon 😳

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#704

oh god...

she is not dying rt...

that was so beautiful.. please continue muskaan!!!

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Hina khan

@Hina.khanxxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#705

Oh god muskaan dat was superb update... Can't belive dey r 2gether...

Thank u so much dear, u just d best, luv u loads....

Aap ko pata hai muskaan aaj kya huwa i got a dream dat TM ki geet marr gayi, i was like wat am i thinking dats not possible wid out wasting a sec i opend IF just 2 make sure she is alive, & saw ur update, ab jaa kar jaan mai jaan aaye,

seriously muskaan u made me truely pagal...

In last update jis tarha se unn kidnappers ne geet ko mara i cud'nt digest dat part, how can sum1 hit a women like dat... I knw its a fiction but still d way u hav written i cud imagine dat is happening right in fornt of me... Ur writting skills r incredible.... God bless u...

plz jaldi se geet ko fit & fine kar dijiye...

U not replying 2 any of my msg, me upset...

Plz update d nxt part soon...

Ratings:
TM:10/10
Writting skills:10/10...

Aur ha plz don't end dwngi....

Hina

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#706

did he do it???????? m confused.......god, she is so injured.....dont knw wht to say.........i loved d update.......guess now he wont doubt abt mk, geet being his wife n his love only......

hope police arrives soon n takes dem to hospital n mk gets back her mom n dad.........once how geet n her body was n now wht she has become........due to d pain, hurt, loneliness, no love at all.......muskan pls give her everything bck.....she deserves every bit of it.........amazing story dear..........its getting interesting..............

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#707

hey when r u going to update next?????? looking f/w to read it soon........wanna c everything as it was........

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#708

hope geet will be fine
she went through soo much of pain
now finally maan is with her.....hope she will be fine

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maaniqra

@maaniqra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#709

superb update..
beautifully writtn..
loved it sooo much...

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deejagi

@deejagi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#710

Muski, If it were any one else, he would have died of the sorrow. If it would have any other lady she would have died immediately with first thrust but they are Maneet. love is the only thing rules in their life. But Muski tell me one thing, why he always feel the urge to make love only when she too vulnerable. I really couldn't control my laugh the moment I read 'there was no time to prepare'🤢🤢🤢🤢😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.

Now that things have come under control and we are assured of their reunion, just a small doubt, please don't block me from your ff just because I asked this...........😉😉😉😉😉 Ok, promise?????? , why on the earth he was carrying them (😛😛) when he was not even aware of her where abouts? had he had emergency .......... sorry contingency plan of making love to her immediately on meeting her and become father?????????????????

Now that we know the out come of their fierce love, are we going to have master Maan who shares Geet's birthday?????

That was too amazing and here you go 🤗🤗🤗🤗👏👏👏👏👏👏

love you sweetheart. You are ⭐️

when is the next update and are you planning to meet him his daughter (I mean knowingly)

Jaya