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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Awesome.Sauce aka Neha I think.....🤗

@Neha...I dunno...I'm assuming otherwise....coz the MU happened in between so I don't think he would have gone ahead with that plan....coz he was too angry....And after marriage the pregnancy thing and then the Dev fiasco has happened in quick succession...So I don't think he would have transferred the rights to her and for him to transfer the rights ....she too has to sign the papers na....I think...I dunno....🤔

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Neha

@ISHQSalmanSe

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Posted: 14 years ago

@Soma: that was wonderful👏👏👏👏

Please continue😳

@Geets: you working on a Sunday?😕

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

@Neha: Hello and warm hugs 🤗 to my doppleganger😆

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Kavita

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Posted: 14 years ago

@Soma....That was nice...but you r shifting between the third person and first person in your scene ...Keep it as either third person or first person...other than that the flow and the story are.....👍🏼👏

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

@Panchjun:Hello😳What's your name?😃I have seen you here a lot of times but somehow never got the chance to interact😳. Yes, you guessed my name right.I am Neha😆

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

@ Neha:🤣🤣🤣Hola😉😎How are you keeping?

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Kavita

@panchjun5

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Neha...🤗.....I'm Kavita.....You r one of the oldie devils....na....I've seen you here when I was still a stalker ....😆

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

@ Hi Neha (Awesome.sauce)

@ Soma - Maintain the entire story in one person. Either Dev narrating. Or you narrating on Dev's behalf. Else, the story itself is very nice.

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soma kazmi

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Posted: 14 years ago

tnx..... neha and panchjun5 sorry didnt do the proof reading will edit it......

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

@Kavita:😆😆Well yes, Oldie that is.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Glad you came out from the 'stalker' mode.😳

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