Jaz's Writing Corner Note pg22 Oct26 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly

Ok.i read "pyaare se pyaare"

God,i enjoyed so much reading this short story,although there wastnt maneet...it was smth different...the beauty of another chance to love,to make ur own life...after it was broken by circumstances...Realy i have no words to praise ur writting other then Amazing...loved the way u pictured maan and geets thoughts,questions then answers...u hit sm rite points that made the story even more enjoyable...there were no regrets cause faith have payed for their loss,with plenty of happiness...again,thanks jaz,realy admire ur talent...

ill be honest...that is one of my fave pieces...the dialogues were just amazing to write...and those ending scenes of Maan and Geet in part two...the questions the ask themselves and then answer...i liked doing that as well...because though the story started off about first loves...it moved into love for ones parents and then into love for one's child...so i liked that transition...😳

JAZ

Originally posted by: bluerose1889

Thanks a lot for this thread. I've read all of your SS and FFs and some of the OS you wrote so far. Now I can read the ones that I missed before.

hope you were able to catch up and that you enjoyed the pieces...😃

JAZ

NOTE:

Originally posted by: jnawaz

NOTE:

hey party people...ran into a little problem...actually...quite a big problem...on friday morning...(even before i could watch geet)...my computer decided to have a stroke and not function...so...my cousin...the computer doctor...is to take a look at it and see if he can fix it...unfortunately...until his lazy butt does that...i am computerless until further notice...now...i do have internet access via work and my phone...but...all my work...my updates...are saved on my computer...so...that means...NO UPDATES UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE...😭...i know i know... you all are waiting...but kya karoon...i dont have access to my work...so...pray...keep fingers all crossed...that kaise bhi karke my cousin can at lease save my work...because if he cant...i dont know whats going to happen to me......any way...that means...

NO UPDATES FOR

1. You & I...Collide

2. Beetein Lamhe

3. Baby of Mine

however...for those of you that may have missed the past updates or didnt get a chance to comment..*hint hind*...you have good time to do so now! 😆...

please bare with me...ill be back as soon as its fixed...promise 😳

JAZ