the os which i had written its second part now

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i m writnig this after all these news and etc etc .i hope this come true.and u'll like this . part-1

this is maan's room and geet and maan standing face to face and maan in anger asks geet that why u r doing aal this .why u r helping dadi and dev . why u r caring for dev a lot.why geet whyyyy .

geet says maan actually dadi ... wht dadi geet today i don't want any issue just the truth i want to know and then he asks in very very anger geet says ok so hear in anger that dev had given u blood when u were in hospital but he said that in a situation that if i will hide this that he had given blood to u then only he'll give blood and said yes bcuz in any way i was just trying to save u .that's why i m caring for him .but i did'nt thought that u will be doughting at me that i still love dev . i can't beleive this . and geet will leave from there.

then maan will see geet in the outhouse she will be sleeping maan get to geet and says geet i m sorry geet i did'nt knew it that's why i m really sorry for that what i did but geet will not answer then maan will try to move geet but she will be sleeping and her body will be very cold than maan will say geet wht happened geett geettt wht happened than from geet's hand a poison's bottele than maan will call dadi and annie than geet will be taken to the hospital.

geet in hospital doctor says that geet's heart beat had stopped and there r so less possibleities to save her and her baby .maan will say in any way just save them both doctor .she'll say we r trying but i don't think it could be possible.maan will think that why i did all this with geet .i had done so bad with geet all this is happening today is bcuz of me and says god please save geet and his baby pleasee god than doctor comes and says that we had saved geet but sorry we can't save the baby . sorry mr khurana .maan will go to geet's room then geet will ask maan our baby is alright na pleaseee say na maan yes or no . maan will be silent .then geet will know that his baby is not alive then geet will faint again.then maan call's the doctor . doctor says that she is alright u can take her to home but u should take care of her otherwise anything can happen to her.maan will say ok doctor.

maan takes geet to home . geet is totally silent geet says i hope i had not drunk the water . maan will say what u want to say after eating or drienking sumthing all this happened.geet will say yes .how geet tell me pleaseee maan sais .geet says i had gone to outhouse to take sumthing but i felt thristy and i drunk the water than i feel somethink in my gland then wht happened i don't know maan will say i know that who had did all this.

maan will go to the jasoos who had said him very bad about geet and maan holds his kolour and says why u did all this .he will say sumone had given money for doing all this then maan will say who he'll say i don't know maan will say say the truth otherwise i'll call the police .he'll say i really don't know then he goes to km then he sees geet sleeping and says in mind i hope i had not beleived on that jasoos .then he sleeps inside geet .

part-2 in next post

bye and pleasee press the like button pleaseeeeeeand comments also

byeeeeeee everyone i'll be back with its second part

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thankxx for reading

i m writnig the second part of this os and i hope this come and i hope all of u will comment in this
. part-2

maan and geet in the room sleeping suddenly geet shouts and maan woke upand says what happened geet and geet says i had seen a bad dream maan says its ok geet sleep nothing has happened and they both sleep .but at night maan says in mind i hope i had not doughted geet then then she will be alright today and his baby and he also sleeps.

many days go like this but geet don't smiles and don't talk also .one day maan says let's go to some place geet but geet says no maan i don't want to go geet but maan says why she says i don't want to go that only pleasee maan and geet and maan sleeeps and one day maan arrranges a dinner for geet .after seeing that dinner geet get's happy and geet says thankxx maan and maan says your welcome and they dine .

then they go to their room and geet and maan come closer and u know what happens next .next day they wake up and maan says geet shoud not wake up i should go now for office and he goes then many days pass on and one day geet giving food suddenly feels vomit and maan says what happened geet and geet says i don't know maan but i m not feeling well .maan says i should call the doctor but dadi comes and says no need to call the doctor bcuz geet is pregnent and maan feels so happy and geet also then months pass by and baby comes and thias is the ending

happy ending

thankx for reading my first and second part and please hait the like button also bye

i'll be back with another os and please comment also

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