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Hello everyone.......this OS, Scenes....whatever u want to call them were written i believe last week.....forgot when......I thought of an idea to cheer up my idiots family and there we wrote our own screenplay for that day where we wrote on a special valentines day for them. Viji and I both have written the scenes together....and there were ideas that were also given to us by Munni di. Felt to share this with u all so everyone can sit back and enjoy. I have to admit this was real fun to do....and if it is damn good😆....i can sit and read what i have written and it will be as thought Did i really write this?? Anywayz here you go all sit back and enjoy ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Viji and Shivani Screenplay...
Scene 1 by me
Hotel throws a Valentines bash for all of the couples stayin there.....and Geet wants to attend the party.....but Maan of carse does not want to....as he is sadu and because of dev out on loose.......
But after much thought......Maaan goes and tells dev flat out to stay the hell away from him and geet at all costs.....and with the hopes that dev would follow his orders.....he listens to geet and tells her to get ready.
She wears that beautiful chiffon peach pinkish sari.....aray the one she held in her hands a few episodes ago....
while tryin to put on the sari.......she pokes her self with the safety pin and starts to bleed........maan is outside still waiting.......wonders what is takin her sooo long...
geet comes out of the bathroom with her sari half done....lookin for a band aid.......as her finger is bleeding......maan sees her and cannot handle how mesmerizing she looks.......
and flat hot tummy completely revealed.....her back revealed with a cute blouse on....where the doris are also undone.......
he looks on...as she is wandering for a bandaid....finally maan snaps out and notices that she is bleeding.....
so he runs to her....and tells her that she cannot even put on her own clothes without hurting herself...and at this rate he will have to put her clothes on her for her....
and she looks at him lovingly.....and says....I don't mind.....naughty naughty geet eyes😉
and maan says really?? Suddenly geet chokes on what she just said...and gulps hard.....maan holds onto her pallu......and pulls it off
Geet whispers as to why he pulled that off....it was done correctly....and maan whispers back....sayin that he can do the pallu better☺️
ahem ahem...
Viji...emi....vrush di.....munni di...anyone want to continue??
Scene 2 by Viji
Maan puts the Pallu on Geet's Left Shoulder Undone , goes behind her and and takes hold of the sari to do the front pleats, he does the pleat his hand swiftly moving about, geet stands with bated breath as Maan does her pleats, and he tucks it once done, making Geet gasp at the touch of his fingers on her bare stomach making her inhale in.......Maan notices this, and plans to tease his wife more.....His takes the dori of the blouse next and runs his fingers on her bare back before tying it in a knot.....his action makes Geet flex her muscles and she whispers his name......Maan gives his million dollar smirk....😳
Maan then with swift actions does her pallu and pins it up.....Once done Maan from Behind kisses on her shoulder and the nape of her neck, tiny pecks showering one after the other, Geet who no longer can take this, turns around and hugs him with all her love and passion closing every inch of Gap in between them.............
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Maan then with swift actions does her pallu and pins it up.....Once done Maan from Behind kisses on her shoulder and the nape of her neck, tiny pecks showering one after the other, Geet who no longer can take this, turns around and hugs him with all her love and passion closing every inch of Gap in between them.............
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Scene 3 by Me
After the tight hug........they both let go of each other.......geet handles herself....and moves a bit away.....but maan is not done....😉 he sees her finger which is still bleeding......he takes her finger and puts the finger in his mouth.....and sucks on it.....☺️
geet looks at him........tryin hard not to allow him to melt her.........she pulls her hand out.....hesitantly.......as she too was enjoying it.....but she could not handle the heat...not now especially.....she wasn't going to let him win this challenge
she turns around shows him her back.........she needed a bit of air......she inhales and exhales.....slowly tryin to control herself.......and whispers to maan......thank u......cause he just put the sari on her....
but she felt him closing in on her....as she can feel him breathing on her back........he slowly touches her back again....and then her doris.....fixes them a bit......and then slowly he brings his face closer to her back....teasing her as if he will kiss her there......but alas the man knows how to tease well.....he slowly tickling her back...playfully brings her hair from the right shoulder to her back.....and settles her hair.....
brings his face closer to her ear......and now his lips are touching her ear....and she can feel his warmth....he smiles naughtily....cause he knows what he has done to her........but he slowly kisses her ear....then whispers......you are lookin gorgeous.....and now ur sari is on as well.......so madam if u r ready shall we go for the party???
geet's eyes are closed....as she cannot handle him this close......and she some how handles herself.....and moves away again...
yes yes....shall we....still unable to look at him.......maan grins evily....and naughtly........puts his hands on her waist....and starts to lead her out of the room.....
geet's heart keeps skipping beats....as they make their way to the party
Scene 4 by Viji
They walk into the Hall....Decorated with Roses, and Balloons, Candles etc....and makes their way to one of the tables....Maan Holds out the chair for Geet to sit , Geet takes the cue and sits down, she looks around the room, struck by the grandeur and the beauty of the decorated Hall...
She Notices Couples Dance in the Center of the hall, swaying their bodies along with the soft romantic Track that was being played and could not help but think about her first dance ever, at Mr.Chopra's Party
Maan notices the change in her expressions and is about to ask Geet to dance with him, when his Mobile Flashes "Dadi Ma" since it was from home he knew it would be inappropriate if he did not answer it, he shows the Mobile to Geet which was flashing Dadi Ma's Name and mouths" Main abhi aaya"...
Geet nods her head and Maan gets up to leave the Hall.......
The Track that was being played comes to an End and the hall gets filled with a thunderous round of applause's.....
The event Organizer (Not Dev) comes to the center Stage to make an announcement, that on this occasion of VALENTINES day, their next program for the evening would be the girls/Fiances/Wives speaking out their hearts and proposing their guy/Husband etc out loud 😉
He then goes on to say, that the one on whom the spotlight falls first would make the start.....
The Lights go Dim, and the spotlight falls on the spot where Geet was siting , thus choosing her, Geet gets a little tensed, and becomes Uneasy.....
The event manager and his partner announces that they have got their first Victim and the crowd splits into laughter, they go up to Geet and asks her "Aap Akeli Kyu Baiti hai Aapka Valentine Nazar Nahi aa raha"
Geet " Unka Phone aaya tha, isliye bahar chale gaye"
EO : Koi Baat Nahi Is event ko ek alag twist de dethe hai...and the three have some talk (Its all Hush hush to us)
Maan enters the Hall, which looks dimmer than when he left, suddenly a spotlight falls on Maan....
And Geet Calls Out "Maan" her voice booming in the hall
Another Spot Light is shone on Geet 😳
Maan stands there mesmerized seeing the love of his life look breathtakingly beautiful
Geet goes on to say " I LOVE YOU, Main aapse bohat pyaar karthi hoon, ek pal ke liye nahi, ek din ke liye nahi, Zindagi bhar ke liye "...Will you be My Valentine?"
Maan Walks up to Geet, takes her hand kisses it, and says Is Janam mein hi nahi aane wali har Janam mein main sirf tumhare valentine rahoonga Geet "I love you "
They Hug.....Music fades in....
Tu Mile Dil Khile (For a change these two are doing the Lip Sync)
Maan
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoonga zindagi bhar
Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Geet
Pyaar kabhi, ho marta nahin hum tum marte hain
Hote hai voh, ho log amar pyaar jo karte hain
Jitni adaa, utni vafa
Ek nazar pyaar se dekh lo phir se zinda kar do
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Maan
Haan tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Geet
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoongi zindagi bhar
Both
Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
She Notices Couples Dance in the Center of the hall, swaying their bodies along with the soft romantic Track that was being played and could not help but think about her first dance ever, at Mr.Chopra's Party
Maan notices the change in her expressions and is about to ask Geet to dance with him, when his Mobile Flashes "Dadi Ma" since it was from home he knew it would be inappropriate if he did not answer it, he shows the Mobile to Geet which was flashing Dadi Ma's Name and mouths" Main abhi aaya"...
Geet nods her head and Maan gets up to leave the Hall.......
The Track that was being played comes to an End and the hall gets filled with a thunderous round of applause's.....
The event Organizer (Not Dev) comes to the center Stage to make an announcement, that on this occasion of VALENTINES day, their next program for the evening would be the girls/Fiances/Wives speaking out their hearts and proposing their guy/Husband etc out loud 😉
He then goes on to say, that the one on whom the spotlight falls first would make the start.....
The Lights go Dim, and the spotlight falls on the spot where Geet was siting , thus choosing her, Geet gets a little tensed, and becomes Uneasy.....
The event manager and his partner announces that they have got their first Victim and the crowd splits into laughter, they go up to Geet and asks her "Aap Akeli Kyu Baiti hai Aapka Valentine Nazar Nahi aa raha"
Geet " Unka Phone aaya tha, isliye bahar chale gaye"
EO : Koi Baat Nahi Is event ko ek alag twist de dethe hai...and the three have some talk (Its all Hush hush to us)
Maan enters the Hall, which looks dimmer than when he left, suddenly a spotlight falls on Maan....
And Geet Calls Out "Maan" her voice booming in the hall
Another Spot Light is shone on Geet 😳
Maan stands there mesmerized seeing the love of his life look breathtakingly beautiful
Geet goes on to say " I LOVE YOU, Main aapse bohat pyaar karthi hoon, ek pal ke liye nahi, ek din ke liye nahi, Zindagi bhar ke liye "...Will you be My Valentine?"
Maan Walks up to Geet, takes her hand kisses it, and says Is Janam mein hi nahi aane wali har Janam mein main sirf tumhare valentine rahoonga Geet "I love you "
They Hug.....Music fades in....
Tu Mile Dil Khile (For a change these two are doing the Lip Sync)
Maan
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoonga zindagi bhar
Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Geet
Pyaar kabhi, ho marta nahin hum tum marte hain
Hote hai voh, ho log amar pyaar jo karte hain
Jitni adaa, utni vafa
Ek nazar pyaar se dekh lo phir se zinda kar do
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Maan
Haan tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Geet
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoongi zindagi bhar
Both
Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Screenplay for the next day
Scene 5 by me
After the dance.....maan can ask the baby if he/she is okay........and if zyada dance to nahin ho gaya....
and geet can look at him with soo much love and see how much he cares for the baby.....and we can have dev look from the side.......😉😉😉😉
Scene 6 by Viji
Maaneet go to their Room, Change into their Night Suits and head towards the Bed, Geet is going to take hold of Maan;s hand like she always does before going to sleep, when Maan takes Geets Hands in his and says "Thank you Geet" Meri Zindagi ithni Specail Banane Ke liye, Har Pal, Har Lamhon ko Yaadgaar Banane ke liye....
ANd then for the first time we see a change in MSK's Character (Another Layer of his character Gets revealed ) when he goes on to say that he loves her too much that he cannot even think of life without her and starts talking about Death , when Geet puts her hand on his Mouth, to stop him from talking further and says "Jab Humdono saath hai, toh kuch galat nahi ho saktha hai, aur agar kuch galath hua bhi, hum dono milkar use teek karenge"
She Moves Forward gives a Kiss on his Forehead and says" Good Night "
Maan also says the same and they fall asleep....
Next Day, Morning.....The sun seeps into their Bedroom,....Geet opens her eyes slowly, looking at the window from where the sun rays were seeping into their room, she Get up, Prays to Babaji and is about to leave the Bed when she fees something tucking on her dupatta, She looks back to see Maan holding on to her dupatta sleeping like an Angel...Her Angel"
She goes close to him and blows on his face, Maan makes a frowning face and turn to lie down straight......She decides that she would not wake him up, as he was in Deep Sleep, and decides to move out of the bed without making noise....when Maan, holds her by her wrist and pulls her back, and she falls on him (Like the Outhouse Night, when se goes to pull the blanket)
And.....Continue 😉
ANd then for the first time we see a change in MSK's Character (Another Layer of his character Gets revealed ) when he goes on to say that he loves her too much that he cannot even think of life without her and starts talking about Death , when Geet puts her hand on his Mouth, to stop him from talking further and says "Jab Humdono saath hai, toh kuch galat nahi ho saktha hai, aur agar kuch galath hua bhi, hum dono milkar use teek karenge"
She Moves Forward gives a Kiss on his Forehead and says" Good Night "
Maan also says the same and they fall asleep....
Next Day, Morning.....The sun seeps into their Bedroom,....Geet opens her eyes slowly, looking at the window from where the sun rays were seeping into their room, she Get up, Prays to Babaji and is about to leave the Bed when she fees something tucking on her dupatta, She looks back to see Maan holding on to her dupatta sleeping like an Angel...Her Angel"
She goes close to him and blows on his face, Maan makes a frowning face and turn to lie down straight......She decides that she would not wake him up, as he was in Deep Sleep, and decides to move out of the bed without making noise....when Maan, holds her by her wrist and pulls her back, and she falls on him (Like the Outhouse Night, when se goes to pull the blanket)
And.....Continue 😉
Scene 7 by me
As she falls on top of him.......Maan rolls on the bed....and the ends up being on top of her.......his eyes closed.....still in half sleep..........he sleeps on her chest like a kid.......
As she falls on top of him.......Maan rolls on the bed....and the ends up being on top of her.......his eyes closed.....still in half sleep..........he sleeps on her chest like a kid.......
Maan- geet so jao na.......we r on break after all.....u have no work to do....so why wake up so early!
Geet smiles- maan get up......
she nudges him........but he doesn't get up......he is just chillin and sleeping......holding her tightly........
finally out of no where......he again rolls on the other side....and now she is on top of him........
and then in his sleep he says....ha yeh position bhi theek hai.....kyun baby??
Geet- nahin papa.....yeh position bilcool bhi acha nahin hai...momma ko yeh position se ulti karne ka mann ho raha hai...(geet smiles)
Maan- ha ulti......kya???
His eyes open shocked.....he gently moves her off of him....and he looks at her concerned........and geet starts to laugh...
Maan- oh to mommy papa ko ullu bana rahi hai?
geet yeh tumnay acha nahin kiya......now expect the unexpected.....be alert today....as you will be shocked....he looks at her...angrily....
Geet- oh really aisa kya karne wale hai aap?
maan- did i just not just say expect the unexpected??
he growls off of the bed.....and runs into the shower.
Here geet reallys starts feels sick...especially after the rolling on the bed and all......and has to throw up.........she knocks on the door feelin uneasy..
geet- maan i need to use the washroom......can u open the door please?
Maan hears geet but does not answer...
geet- maan i really need to use the sink....please i really have to throw up...
Maan- yea right.....u already used this trick.....
Maan wraps the towel around him and opens the door......sadly it was too late.....as soon as the door opened.......she threw up right on him...
Maan looks at geet in the same expression he gave when geet spilled coffee on him!!!
we ended it here......if anyone wants to contine further from this last scene please do.😛
-From Shivani and Viji......(idiot family) four our GHSP friends😉
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