(OS) Memories of his past part 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank You.
And OK,i will continue😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful..........continue.........u cant leave us like this..😭
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Part 2

Where was i? Why couldn't I see anyone? What had happened?

Slowly, the truth dawned on me and the events of the last day I could remembered were revived.The day when I had realized the love of my life had cheated me,the day that I thought would be my happiest as I'd realised I was pregnant but no.How could I forget that dreams have to break sometime?And I was living in a dream world.A world in which my husband loved me intensely and always looked after me.But the reality was very different.i had been stupid to not realise it.I remembered feeling as if my heartbeats had stopped when he told me the truth.But I have to live,for my unborn child.

Slowly,I opened my eyes.Infront of me, I could see Maan.

(A TEAR ROLLS DOWN HER CHEEK)

G: when will u stop living in a world of dreams,geet?the reality is very different. He doesn't even care about you. He must be sitting at home with Sameera enjoying.Now,he wont even have to put up an act of loving you.He must be so happy.and you keep thinking about him.forget him.

M:youre not dreaming.im actually here.

G:you?

M:yes,me.our talk had'nt finished yet so how could I let u go?

G:why don't u understand?i don't want to talk to you.ive got all the answers I needed and now I want to live alone.

M:but youre not alone?theres a part of me living inside you.

G:how do u know?

M:the doctor told me,Why didn't u tell me,geet?

G: I thought I'd tell u 2nite and u'd be happy.but then…

M:but then what?A girl came to our house and said she was engaged to me and she was pregnant with my child and u believed her?

G:so it was all a lie?

M:did I say that? Come home and we'll talk about this peacefully.

G:I don't want to.tell me here or not at all.

M:atleast listen to someone else sometimes.

G:I did,after our wedding.I listened to your every wish.What did I get?Betrayal again,Pain? Whats the use of listening to someone else?

(A TEAR ROLLS DOWN HER CHEEK)

END

Part 3 to follow tomorrow😊

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-Saruu- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was pretty gud...nicely done :)
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

that was pretty gud...nicely done :)

Thanks😊 I appreciate ur comments😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..thts so sad..mmm i will be waitinf for 3rd part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome sad end
plz update soon
updattttteeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'm looking forward to part 3! :)

Part 1 and 2 were great..I'm hoping part 3 will clear the misunderstandings! :\
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous both part i hope Maan clear the misunderstanding soonnnnnnnn pls cont soonnnnnnn pls do pm me

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