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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

oye emi....go read my cute and funny continuation of Viji's last scene



Kya man?....Seriously I died and had resuscitate myself in order to read further! 😆
Dude make this a separate post!!!... So I'm not the only one who gets tortured!!! 😆


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

As she falls on top of him.......Maan rolls on the bed....and the ends up being on top of her.......his eyes closed.....still in half sleep..........he sleeps on her chest like a kid.......

Maan- geet so jao na.......we r on break after all.....u have no work to do....so why wake up so early!
Geet smiles- maan get up......
she nudges him........but he doesn't get up......he is just chillin and sleeping......holding her tightly........
finally out of no where......he again rolls on the other side....and now she is on top of him........
and then in his sleep he says....ha yeh position bhi theek hai.....kyun baby??
Geet- nahin papa.....yeh position bilcool bhi acha nahin hai...momma ko yeh position se ulti karne ka mann ho raha hai...(geet smiles)
Maan- ha ulti......kya???
His eyes open shocked.....he gently moves her off of him....and he looks at her concerned........and geet starts to laugh...
Maan- oh to mommy papa ko ullu bana rahi hai?
geet yeh tumnay acha nahin kiya......now expect the unexpected.....be alert today....as you will be shocked....he looks at her...angrily....
Geet- oh really aisa kya karne wale hai aap?
maan- did i just not just say expect the unexpected??
he growls off of the bed.....and runs into the shower.
Here geet reallys starts feels sick...especially after the rolling on the bed and all......and has to throw up.........she knocks on the door feelin uneasy..
geet- maan i need to use the washroom......can u open the door please?
Maan hears geet but does not answer...
geet- maan i really need to use the sink....please i really have to throw up...
Maan- yea right.....u already used this trick.....
wraps the towel around him and opens the door......sadly it was too late.....as soon as the door opened.......she threw up right on him...
Maan looks at geet in the same expression he gave when geet spilled coffee on him!!!
Continue someone please



oh this was perfect!! I loved the ending part...!! Looks like Maan is going to have to take another shower!!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AR2gether4lyf

@Viji (Rickks) and mysterygurl1427 (Shiv right???I just Saw Viji call that, sorry if i am wrong)

That whole write up for your own version of the Valentines Day was Great, Awesome, In fact No words to describe it at all.....Starting from the room to ending with the song an absolutely perfect VALENTINES SPECIAL 👏

I am a silent reader of the 3 Idiots Thread, I love the discussions going on here, Gives me a better Insight of the Show....But i had to Congratulate you on the wonderful Story-Episode you Guys just penned down here 👏

Yes Shivi😛 thanks....we were just tryin to lighten the mood in here......to just have fun rather then cribbing.....for whatever reason the CV's are doin this....they better make it up in the end.......thanks for reading...glad u liked it.....do join us on the discussions.....🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Emi-thanks yaar....tryin to balance everything......love, romance, passion, intensity, and comedy with a hint of logic and realism....which was why i wrote about the morning sickness...as we never had any morning sickness shown......what other way is there to it to be shown this way??
I thought it made perfect sense.....as they rolled twice on the bed.....so it sort of made geet uneasy, hence made the morning sickness...
cool right?? i actually am thinkin where i got the brilliant idea phrom...
good good shivi....
speakin of the continuation oye emi.......saath mein shower kya bolti??😃😈
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Hellooo Shelloooo Idiotsssss // 🤗

Helloo to my dearies: Shivz, Emmz, Munni, G, Viji, Nagz, Magz, and every other lovely person here! <3

It won't be a long one from me today as I'm tres tireddd. I don't want to talk about Kacche AAM at all (although I think that because Dev track is starting soon ... they are finishing off with them .. hence the lengthy scenes given solely to them -- good sign right? *looks on hopefully*)

LIKES of the Day:

1) Maan's concern for Geet: Character consistency here; whenever he senses that there's danger for Geet or that something will be making her super-stressed or shocked.. then he decides to take the matter into his own hands as always. Him not being able to sleep all night just wondering about Dev's reason of being here and why he has been doing what he is was justified. He should open up to her a bit more as she has already "seen" Dev..and although it did shock her.. I'm sure she'll be able to handle it. I guess Baby is the only reason he isn't letting anything in harms way for her. Loved when Maan, instead of lying, tried making up excuses to divert Geet's mind. So like him to not bother her with trouble.

2) MaanDev: The way Maan wouldn't let Dev say anything and saying he knows Dev isn't upto any good was brilliant. He always has his sensors up .. and when he knows he doesn't trust someone.. he doesn't trust them at all. He still has problems with Arjun .. so why not Dev? Give it to him good!

3) Dev: Bro! Lol! I wanted to hear Samir say it and it sounded just like AS! Ahah.. I guess he saw that this is one thing Dev loves to say. But he acted well today..but got stopped bechara. I really want to see Dev have a maqsad tho! I want negative Dev.. who is here to lay claim on a child that should never be his but he only wants it due to the gateway to KM and the daulat, etc. that the Baby brings along with it.

4) Geet: Character consistency in the fact that she knows exactly when Maan is telling the truth and when he's trying to hide it. Yes, hide it because he never lies, never wants to lie, and never can lie. As per Daadi "It shows purely on his face when he is trying to make up excuses" .. I remembered the post-train station proposal dialogue. He was doing the same here.. making up every possible excuse to get Geet's mind on something else, but Geet knowing Maan like the back of her hand, knows something is amiss with him.

5) Maaneet: Maaneet in white and red. Total Valentine spirit…they both looked heavenly. Maan in white always kills me. And I loved what Geet was wearing! I just have one request.. the hairdresser is sometimes sloppy with DD's hair. Don't get me wrong.. I love this new style.. but somehow they sometimes do it hurrily. If you compare today's hair to the first day after marriage when she is cooking puri's .. OMG she loooked so breathtaking in that episode.. with her bangs and everything… they should keep it that neat. Other than that DD always looks fabulous! 😍

DISLIKES of the Day:

1) MaanDev: Confrontation was supposed to continue right after they bumped into each other..it didn't. Why? I wonder.. (who knows if there was a problem off-set?) but I wanted a more jhakaas showdown. But … it happened the next day. I just wanted to see a continuation of that scene.

2) Sightseeing: Well.. they went and came back .. and we didn't get to see but instead heard of the fun they had. Would've been nice to see something done outside.. we are being deprived of outdoor scenes.. I wonder why.

CUTEST Moments of the Day:

1) Maaneet: I always like all of their bed scenes. Haha. And I love how Geet was resting her head on his shoulder .. something different at least! LOVED how she got up and said "Good Morning" and demanded a response to it! HAHA! Teaching Maan Singh Khurana manners. Maan as usual went tain tain phuss on Geet's expectations on the HM so I loved how she basically rendered him helpless but to go sightseeing with her. Good! Drag him outside..take his mind off a few things and let him enjoy.

2) Ghubbara Bana Kabab Mein Haddi: Ae lo! First it was Daadima, then Truck Driver, and now a Balloon! Too many distractions! LOOL! Ahhhhh Maan's bedroom eyes.. Geet will always act the same when he starts to come close that way… she should stand with her head held high and not move and see how far he goes in following her ! LOL! But as always she gets lost in his beautiful yet magnet-like eyes and goes into a trance.. just like the rest of us. I saw GC's hand going towards the balloon! Were they trynna show that Maan was doing it on purpose or.. ? Hmmm?

3) Imitate: GOOD GOD! I haven't cackled so hard as I did with Geet's expressions today! Only Geet can get away with imitating The Maan Singh Khurana right in front of him. I just love how she openly imitates him to no extent and he can't help but to just look on .. and then follow her with his kill-me-now eyes! HAAHA!

I won't crib! I won't crib! I won't crib! Haan! I have my fingers crossed that in a few days everything will be back to normal with full-on high drama and more Maaneet.. as per the wonderful spoilers! Gosh! I hate when they give away storylines and plots. They should keep spoilers like that to a minimum. Rather show us pictures instead! But looking fwd to the upcoming track. Dev… tu nahin bachne waala! Haan!

Alrighty, I know I bakk-ed yet again more than I said I would.

Comment karo na .. or not.. your choice. LOL! 😆

Love,

Z

<3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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go read the last few pages.......viji, me and munni di wrote some hot hot scenes of maaneet....starting from page 37😃
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Viji and Shivani Screenplay for today's episode...
Scene 1 by me
Hotel throws a Valentines bash for all of the couples stayin there.....and Geet wants to attend the party.....but Maan of carse does not want to....as he is sadu and because of dev out on loose.......
But after much thought......Maaan goes and tells dev flat out to stay the hell away from him and geet at all costs.....and with the hopes that dev would follow his orders.....he listens to geet and tells her to get ready.
She wears that beautiful chiffon peach pinkish sari.....aray the one she held in her hands a few episodes ago....
while tryin to put on the sari.......she pokes her self with the safety pin and starts to bleed........maan is outside still waiting.......wonders what is takin her sooo long...
geet comes out of the bathroom with her sari half done....lookin for a band aid.......as her finger is bleeding......maan sees her and cannot handle how mesmerizing she looks.......
and flat hot tummy completely revealed.....her back revealed with a cute blouse on....where the doris are also undone.......
he looks on...as she is wandering for a bandaid....finally maan snaps out and notices that she is bleeding.....
so he runs to her....and tells her that she cannot even put on her own clothes without hurting herself...and at this rate he will have to put her clothes on her for her....
and she looks at him lovingly.....and says....I don't mind.....naughty naughty geet eyes😉
and maan says really?? Suddenly geet chokes on what she just said...and gulps hard.....maan holds onto her pallu......and pulls it off
Geet whispers as to why he pulled that off....it was done correctly....and maan whispers back....sayin that he can do the pallu better☺️
ahem ahem...
Viji...emi....vrush di.....munni di...anyone want to continue??
Scene 2 by Viji
Maan puts the Pallu on Geet's Left Shoulder Undone , goes behind her and and takes hold of the sari to do the front pleats, he does the pleat his hand swiftly moving about, geet stands with bated breath as Maan does her pleats, and he tucks it once done, making Geet gasp at the touch of his fingers on her bare stomach making her inhale in.......Maan notices this, and plans to tease his wife more.....His takes the dori of the blouse next and runs his fingers on her bare back before tying it in a knot.....his action makes Geet flex her muscles and she whispers his name......Maan gives his million dollar smirk....😳

Maan then with swift actions does her pallu and pins it up.....Once done Maan from Behind kisses on her shoulder and the nape of her neck, tiny pecks showering one after the other, Geet who no longer can take this, turns around and hugs him with all her love and passion closing every inch of Gap in between them.............

Continue
Scene 3 by Me
After the tight hug........they both let go of each other.......geet handles herself....and moves a bit away.....but maan is not done....😉 he sees her finger which is still bleeding......he takes her finger and puts the finger in his mouth.....and sucks on it.....☺️
geet looks at him........tryin hard not to allow him to melt her.........she pulls her hand out.....hesitantly.......as she too was enjoying it.....but she could not handle the heat...not now especially.....she wasn't going to let him win this challenge
she turns around shows him her back.........she needed a bit of air......she inhales and exhales.....slowly tryin to control herself.......and whispers to maan......thank u......cause he just put the sari on her....
but she felt him closing in on her....as she can feel him breathing on her back........he slowly touches her back again....and then her doris.....fixes them a bit......and then slowly he brings his face closer to her back....teasing her as if he will kiss her there......but alas the man knows how to tease well.....he slowly tickling her back...playfully brings her hair from the right shoulder to her back.....and settles her hair.....
brings his face closer to her ear......and now his lips are touching her ear....and she can feel his warmth....he smiles naughtily....cause he knows what he has done to her........but he slowly kisses her ear....then whispers......you are lookin gorgeous.....and now ur sari is on as well.......so madam if u r ready shall we go for the party???EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
geet's eyes are closed....as she cannot handle him this close......and she some how handles herself.....and moves away again...
yes yes....shall we....still unable to look at him.......maan grins evily....and naughtly........puts his hands on her waist....and starts to lead her out of the room.....
geet's heart keeps skipping beats....as they make their way to the party
Scene 4 by Viji
They walk into the Hall....Decorated with Roses, and Balloons, Candles etc....and makes their way to one of the tables....Maan Holds out the chair for Geet to sit , Geet takes the cue and sits down, she looks around the room, struck by the grandeur and the beauty of the decorated Hall...

She Notices Couples Dance in the Center of the hall, swaying their bodies along with the soft romantic Track that was being played and could not help but think about her first dance ever, at Mr.Chopra's Party

Maan notices the change in her expressions and is about to ask Geet to dance with him, when his Mobile Flashes "Dadi Ma" since it was from home he knew it would be inappropriate if he did not answer it, he shows the Mobile to Geet which was flashing Dadi Ma's Name and mouths" Main abhi aaya"...

Geet nods her head and Maan gets up to leave the Hall.......

The Track that was being played comes to an End and the hall gets filled with a thunderous round of applause's.....

The event Organizer (Not Dev) comes to the center Stage to make an announcement, that on this occasion of VALENTINES day, their next program for the evening would be the girls/Fiances/Wives speaking out their hearts and proposing their guy/Husband etc out loud 😉

He then goes on to say, that the one on whom the spotlight falls first would make the start.....

The Lights go Dim, and the spotlight falls on the spot where Geet was siting , thus choosing her, Geet gets a little tensed, and becomes Uneasy.....

The event manager and his partner announces that they have got their first Victim and the crowd splits into laughter, they go up to Geet and asks her "Aap Akeli Kyu Baiti hai Aapka Valentine Nazar Nahi aa raha"

Geet " Unka Phone aaya tha, isliye bahar chale gaye"

EO : Koi Baat Nahi Is event ko ek alag twist de dethe hai...and the three have some talk (Its all Hush hush to us)

Maan enters the Hall, which looks dimmer than when he left, suddenly a spotlight falls on Maan....

And Geet Calls Out "Maan" her voice booming in the hall

Another Spot Light is shone on Geet 😳

Maan stands there mesmerized seeing the love of his life look breathtakingly beautiful

Geet goes on to say " I LOVE YOU, Main aapse bohat pyaar karthi hoon, ek pal ke liye nahi, ek din ke liye nahi, Zindagi bhar ke liye "...Will you be My Valentine?"

Maan Walks up to Geet, takes her hand kisses it, and says Is Janam mein hi nahi aane wali har Janam mein main sirf tumhare valentine rahoonga Geet "I love you "

They Hug.....Music fades in....

Tu Mile Dil Khile (For a change these two are doing the Lip Sync)

Maan

Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoonga zindagi bhar
Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Geet
Pyaar kabhi, ho marta nahin hum tum marte hain
Hote hai voh, ho log amar pyaar jo karte hain
Jitni adaa, utni vafa
Ek nazar pyaar se dekh lo phir se zinda kar do
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Maan
Haan tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Geet
Na ho tu udaas, tere paas paas
Main rahoongi zindagi bhar

Both

Saare sansaar ka pyaar maine tujhi mein paaya
Tu mile, dil khile
Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye

Aur jeene ko kya chaahiye
Screenplay for the next day
Scene 5 by me
After the dance.....maan can ask the baby if he/she is okay........and if zyada dance to nahin ho gaya....
and geet can look at him with soo much love and see how much he cares for the baby.....and we can have dev look from the side.......😉😉😉😉
Scene 6 by Viji
Maaneet go to their Room, Change into their Night Suits and head towards the Bed, Geet is going to take hold of Maan;s hand like she always does before going to sleep, when Maan takes Geets Hands in his and says "Thank you Geet" Meri Zindagi ithni Specail Banane Ke liye, Har Pal, Har Lamhon ko Yaadgaar Banane ke liye....

ANd then for the first time we see a change in MSK's Character (Another Layer of his character Gets revealed ) when he goes on to say that he loves her too much that he cannot even think of life without her and starts talking about Death , when Geet puts her hand on his Mouth, to stop him from talking further and says "Jab Humdono saath hai, toh kuch galat nahi ho saktha hai, aur agar kuch galath hua bhi, hum dono milkar use teek karenge"

She Moves Forward gives a Kiss on his Forehead and says" Good Night "

Maan also says the same and they fall asleep....

Next Day, Morning.....The sun seeps into their Bedroom,....Geet opens her eyes slowly, looking at the window from where the sun rays were seeping into their room, she Get up, Prays to Babaji and is about to leave the Bed when she fees something tucking on her dupatta, She looks back to see Maan holding on to her dupatta sleeping like an Angel...Her Angel"

She goes close to him and blows on his face, Maan makes a frowning face and turn to lie down straight......She decides that she would not wake him up, as he was in Deep Sleep, and decides to move out of the bed without making noise....when Maan, holds her by her wrist and pulls her back, and she falls on him (Like the Outhouse Night, when se goes to pull the blanket)

And.....Continue
😉
Scene 7 by me
As she falls on top of him.......Maan rolls on the bed....and the ends up being on top of her.......his eyes closed.....still in half sleep..........he sleeps on her chest like a kid.......
Maan- geet so jao na.......we r on break after all.....u have no work to do....so why wake up so early!
Geet smiles- maan get up......
she nudges him........but he doesn't get up......he is just chillin and sleeping......holding her tightly........
finally out of no where......he again rolls on the other side....and now she is on top of him........
and then in his sleep he says....ha yeh position bhi theek hai.....kyun baby??
Geet- nahin papa.....yeh position bilcool bhi acha nahin hai...momma ko yeh position se ulti karne ka mann ho raha hai...(geet smiles)
Maan- ha ulti......kya???
His eyes open shocked.....he gently moves her off of him....and he looks at her concerned........and geet starts to laugh...
Maan- oh to mommy papa ko ullu bana rahi hai?
geet yeh tumnay acha nahin kiya......now expect the unexpected.....be alert today....as you will be shocked....he looks at her...angrily....
Geet- oh really aisa kya karne wale hai aap?
maan- did i just not just say expect the unexpected??
he growls off of the bed.....and runs into the shower.
Here geet reallys starts feels sick...especially after the rolling on the bed and all......and has to throw up.........she knocks on the door feelin uneasy..
geet- maan i need to use the washroom......can u open the door please?
Maan hears geet but does not answer...
geet- maan i really need to use the sink....please i really have to throw up...
Maan- yea right.....u already used this trick.....
Maan wraps the towel around him and opens the door......sadly it was too late.....as soon as the door opened.......she threw up right on him...
Maan looks at geet in the same expression he gave when geet spilled coffee on him!!!
Continue someone please
Possibly showering together eh??Embarrassed
Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 14 years ago
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You know girls......i was thinkin.....I know when geet has to be serious she is....and when she wants to act like a kid she will...
but i do want geet to sit and talk to maan again during the right time...i want geet to tell him that she knows he will always be there for her.....but for some reason she always needs him to tell her that he will always be there.......her past....her insecurities just do not want to stop following her......
she knows how much he loves her.......she knows that he will be with her for ever.....but that fear never wants to leave her.......it is like it will be there forever....
i want her to say this to him.....cause she is always scared and has fear that she will lose him.....but i want her to say it some what like this..
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Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

@Emi-thanks yaar....tryin to balance everything......love, romance, passion, intensity, and comedy with a hint of logic and realism....which was why i wrote about the morning sickness...as we never had any morning sickness shown......what other way is there to it to be shown this way??

I thought it made perfect sense.....as they rolled twice on the bed.....so it sort of made geet uneasy, hence made the morning sickness...
cool right?? i actually am thinkin where i got the brilliant idea phrom...
good good shivi....
speakin of the continuation oye emi.......saath mein shower kya bolti??😃😈



Shower woh bhi saat saath?? Huh? Did I mean that?? 😉 😆
OK no no...back to reality...and like you said "logic and realism"!!! 😆
OH & so you mentioned Pink sari on Geet? hmmm I was thinking a hot RED lace sari ??



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