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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

u were right i really wanna throw juttis n chapal over ur head for such terribly awesom deadly concept ..

well from the first intro lines it was clr its going to be a wrong choice still i tries n guess my 10min were nt a waist ...

awesom narration i must say ...

thnxx for writing this ...

Luv Ya

Sobia

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

@_SiinnceMaan_: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Amazing dear!!!👏

must say a nice way to gain sympathy😉

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mahi_gurmeet

@mahi_gurmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

wowww.,im speechless.totally a diffirent flavourd os.maan killed geet to take revenge.bt he surely ws madly in love wid her.thnx 4introducing dis kind of story.really loved it

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KomaLSunny

@KomaLSunny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

OMG such an HAWT and SIZZLING os , keep up the great work 👍🏼

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

this is one OS i never get tired of reading.. its sooo beautiful even with a heartbreaking ending.. wonderfully written.. even years after it has been posted i still look for it just to re-read over and over

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greshu

@greshu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

inspite of being a sad ending, the story is superb,continue soon...with more...

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Khushboo12

@Khushboo12

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Oh God !!!! it's so painfull i'm crying kyun kiya aisa ??? uummm... but i loved it dear 😉 👏 ⭐️

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

I don't blame you to write it, Even if it was Valentine.

It was beautiful, I can't say I liked it or I loved it. I think it just got captured in my heart and I Loved to think about it when I had once already read it. Only few works have capability to make me think about them, and this one did. Its like a connection.

Though I didn't cry anytime but I felt for Maan(surprisingly not for Geet) Was it your purpose?

Thanks for writing it. You are a wonderful writer Always...