OS - A Letter to His Princess (part 2 on pg 3)

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shreeyazz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

i love ure work please pm me ol ure os's...please ure just awesum..! i can actually visualise...as ii go through it.! :)

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payal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

i m very angry with yu....😡

all ur ss n os r making me cry..yu have to make for it big tym...😈😈

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Maddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

@payal, oooppsss...! was it sad one..? i thought it was a happy ending....! 😆 i believe at least one of my creation will not make you cry, try solitary, its a happy happy kind of thing...! 😆 but lemme tell ya, i m good in rona dhona only 🤣

well sorry buddy...! 😔

Maddy😉

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payal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: maanddy
@payal, oooppsss...! was it sad one..? i thought it was a happy ending....! 😆 i believe at least one of my creation will not make you cry, try solitary, its a happy happy kind of thing...! 😆 but lemme tell ya, i m good in rona dhona only 🤣

well sorry buddy...! 😔

Maddy😉

chill dea...i was jus pulling ur leg..i'll catch up wid ur odr ff's ltr...gotta stdy nw..my boards r gng on..😆

hehe..but as a punishment yu'll have to do sme thng fr me...😈

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Maddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

@ Payal, well, for that, you dont worry, coz once my exams over in may, i will be back with light hearted SS or FF, not decided yet, but i promise, i wont let you cry anymore...😆

and yes, best of luck for the exams...! 😊

Maddy😉

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Maddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Oh ! 😃

Just read my OS for the hundred time ! but this time in link with the current track !

I exactly want this to happen in the show ! WOW ! It would be nice, watching MAANEET on that ! 😉

Maddy😉

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Maddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: thekolgal
It is rly vry amazing..............
the letter...................it was so touching....😭
loved the OS.................😊😊
and yes...........all the best for your exam 😊

thank you so much dear ! for os and exams, both ! 😊

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Maddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome, beautiful updates. loved them.
part one is beautiful , emotional, heart wrenching .
beautifully portrayed the pain of maaneet.
part two brilliant part. loved it.
specially loved the letter. it's so beautiful,beautifully written.

wow, thank you so much and really very sorry for this much delayed reply, i better deserve a slap for this much late reply for your wonderful comments ! 😊

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: maanddy

wow, thank you so much and really very sorry for this much delayed reply, i better deserve a slap for this much late reply for your wonderful comments ! 😊

first don't' say like that darling.
every one busy here.
I can understand it completely.
u might be busy so delay the reply.
thnks for loving my comments🤗

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-AlwaysDamon-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

OMG...That was a brillian piece of work...you made me cry maddy...😭

how can you write so beautifully...

part one : Aww...poor maan...i really felt bad for him...he was being so nice and patient with her...but she jst hurt him badly...i cried...😭

Second : The letter is the heart of this OS...wow...what an idea...and i just loved the letter...it was mind blowing...so emotional and so sad...yet beautiful...

you are a gifted with sad writings...coz i hv never cried readin some OS...or SS or FF...but u made me cry here...here is my fav part from the whole OS...

In the dim light of night, the hidden tears in his eyes were not noticed by her, his silent crying and inner turmoil was not noticed by her, his constant effort to look normal was not noticed by her. He then, made her sleep again, and he slept next to her, holding her tight in his embrace, to share her sorrow, to share his grief.

And how could I forget that, I must continue my love even if my love fails because how could I hate the heart which made me to love it.

With that, he ran his fingers on the letter with tears rolling down his cheeks. He felt her charisma around there. But he did not move. He just sat there crying his emotions out, all that tears, regret, grief, his inner turmoil that he held back for days. Finally, he managed to let drop the mask of unreal and fake happiness, mask of fake anger he wore for sake of geet. And then he felt a soft and warm touch on his shoulder, he didn't turn around, he just sat there. She ran fingers through his dark hair and he turned around and hugged her tight from her waist, crying his heart out.

i though it was a dedication from your part to Maan...as world knows...how much crazy you are for Maan...so babes...here m tellin u...

YOU ROCKED IT...!!!! and made me cry...maddy the bad girl...always make people cry...😆😆😆 just kidding...loved it...you are an awesome writer...keep them coming...but only happy wala...wese sad wala bhi chalega but in limit...me zyada ro nahi sakti...ha ha ha...

Edited by maansi85 - 14 years ago

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