The Power of Garlic - A Maaneet One Shot - Page 5

Opti....Wow!!! You have really outdone yourself this time....you have brought out the yearning, passion and love in both Geet and Maan's heart very well....

And Geet wanting Maan's child is so natural....Usually love comes a full circle when you create another life with the one you love....so Kudos to you for bringing that out in this story...👍🏼

And I am so happy that the son is a splitting image of his dad....another one for girls' hearts to go Dhak Dhak over.....😉😆

Originally posted by: panchjun5

Opti....Wow!!! You have really outdone yourself this time....you have brought out the yearning, passion and love in both Geet and Maan's heart very well....

And Geet wanting Maan's child is so natural....Usually love comes a full circle when you create another life with the one you love....so Kudos to you for bringing that out in this story...👍🏼

And I am so happy that the son is a splitting image of his dad....another one for girls' hearts to go Dhak Dhak over.....😉😆

Thanks Kavi. Yes, Geet wanted to Maan's baby. She wanted to carry his symbol of love and also provide her daughter with a sibling. It took some under handed tactics to get Maan to agree for he was more concerned about her health and eventually he had to come around with an adorable wife like Geet. Sure, Maan's son will make many a girl's heart go Dhak Dhak indeed!

Nice os

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks sweet scorpio.

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice os

Geet was too inteligent here😆😆

Thanks Afsha. Yes, Geet knows how to corner her man.

opti...2 gud dear..read so mny OS's bt nvr hve cme across such brilliant piece of writing.. u hve a way wid words.opti.. n watever read so far totally enjoyed it. n read it mre than twice..... i think i kno from where tis idea of tis OS must hve popped in cos tat day i had stalked the den..abt garlic being simulator😆...n believe me i cme 2 kno from u tat day itself...luking 4ward u 2 write such short stories soon... can we hve 1 how wud MAAN react wen he comes 2 kno tat geet is pregnant wid his child??😃

Originally posted by: mehraan

opti...2 gud dear..read so mny OS's bt nvr hve cme across such brilliant piece of writing.. u hve a way wid words.opti.. n watever read so far totally enjoyed it. n read it mre than twice..... i think i kno from where tis idea of tis OS must hve popped in cos tat day i had stalked the den..abt garlic being simulator😆...n believe me i cme 2 kno from u tat day itself...luking 4ward u 2 write such short stories soon... can we hve 1 how wud MAAN react wen he comes 2 kno tat geet is pregnant wid his child??😃

it was soooooo cuteeeeeeeee
luved itttttttt

Shooooo chewweeet!!!
Really appreciate ur writing skills Opti!!

-Kads

awesome.... loved it...
thanks for pm
and sorry for commenting so late.