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Posted: 14 years ago
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Note: Read at your own risk. This pathetic OS was written when I couldnt sleep and had the weirdest thought. Its my first and maybe my last piece of work, cuz I normally hate to write anything.

And oh ya I wrote this before I saw the promo

Arre Oh Deva

"Arre Oh Devaa" the girl shouted. She was running in Sarson Ke Khet, panting very hard, till she suddenly stopped. She turned around to see her Devaa holding her dupatta, the reason why she stopped. Devaa gave her a smile, knowing that how much he would tell her to stop bringing the tiffin to the khet, she will never listen.

Finally he spoke "Gittva you dont need to this, it is almost one month left for your delivery and you are here running in sarson ke khet with my tiffin"
"Arre Oh Devaa, you dont know me, but I am a superwoman and my baby a superbaby. And nothing will happen no matter how much I run, ask Maan"

That Devaa knew but still one thing was worrying him and Gittva could see this on his face, afterall she had experienced in this face/eye reading with Maan. She knew what it was about, but she still asked "Arre Oh Devaa kya baat hai?"
"Woh main, umm, I still dont know the reason why you left Maan Veerji on your very own wedding day?"

"Devaa you are not happy with me kya?" Gittva asked
"No its nothing like that, but I still want to know" Devaa replied
"You really want to know then listen"

"Maan is such a nikamma I tell ya, I started to suspect him the day his moon-talks started, and he only did that when it was a full moon, do you get my point Devaa?"
"Oh Bro is a vampire!?" Devaa was shocked

"Devaa you are such a duffer, only good in one thing" and immiediately Devaa felt his cheeks heated up "and seriously I knew you watched that vampire show secretly, I just knew it" This time his cheeks heated up even more but due to embarrassment that he got caught
"Okey but listen now, and dont interupt"

Flashback

Night before wedding day of Maan and Gittva

Gittva was sitting in Maans room waiting for him, when she suddenly heard a knock, and next second she saw Maan moving in with a couch.
Gittva: "Maan why do we need a couch?"
Maan: "Not we, only me!"
Gittva: "Huh?" Eh Gittva forget it she thought

Gittva went up to Maan and started to unbutton his shirt.
Maan: "Gittva what are you doing?" Maan freaked out
"Giving pleasure to my fiance" Gittva said and ignored his reaction and continued what she was doing. She just had planted a kiss on his throat when she heard him scream "Dont touch me"

"What is wrong with you? we cant get close as long as you are preggy" Maan said
"Huh, are you nuts? W*F do you live in 18th century or what" Gittva felt really irritated now.

Maan: "Well ya, dont you get it from my moon talks, it was quite popular in 18th century"
Gittva: "Huh, you have such a misconception about it" now she was really pissed off. "Then what about our SR?"
Maan: "Well I told you na I will make you wear the kangan, I also found some shawls and sweaters in store room, you can decide what you want to wear" and gave a genuine smile.

Gittva: "Are you seriously talking about our SR or a trip to northpole darling????
Maan you are the most nikamma man I have ever seen, tumse behtar to Devaa hai, you are such a turn off, you know what, Keep your bloody kangan with you Im better off with Devaa, bye"
And with that she left the Khurana Mansion

Back to Present

After Gittva had finnished, she gave Devaa a hug and said you are fast man and winked. And with that both left the sarson ka khet to the guest house.



Im so sorry for this crap, but this happens when you are stressed out.
No chappals only bags are allowed.
But suggetions are always welcomed😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ROFL!!!🤣🤣

Touch-me-not Maan.....sigh iske saath kuch bhi nahi honewala hai....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: XXaquafireXX

ROFL!!!🤣🤣

Touch-me-not Maan.....sigh iske saath kuch bhi nahi honewala hai....😆


hehe Im glad you liked it😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
don't touch me....
moon talk....
o my my ...amu....
*still laughing... & *shaking heads*......🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hahaha ammmoo, My darling I cant belive that u wrote a os... I didnt even start to read it nd started to laugh, i had to control my laugh cause im in the library
Jaaano u write so goood didnt expect this from U
It was so hilarious lol
Luvd it
Plzzzzzz do write mode nd pm me
Luuuv uuuuu soooo much... Muuuaaaah
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣

HAHA! That was hilarious!

I loved how you made Geet-Gittva and Dev became Devaa😆
The only change I would have made is I would've maybe made Maan Maanav. Loved the setting and it was a good laugh..especially the bit about Maan putting kangans on Gittva😆
Edited by hindu4lyf - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ilovemsk

hahahahaha

that was hilarious!!


Heheh thanks😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mgdg_2010

🤣

don't touch me....
moon talk....
o my my ...amu....
*still laughing... & *shaking heads*......🤣


Ren🤗

Im glad you liked it😆
So what do ya think should I write more?🤣
Btw Im planning to re-title cuz this wasnt even a title, any suggetions?
And oh ya, Im planning to stop my SR talk, im so fed up with it😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣
"Gittva: "Are you seriously talking about our SR or a trip to northpole darling????"
😆😆😆😆

Do I need to say I like it?🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amiiish


Ren🤗

Im glad you liked it😆
So what do ya think should I write more?🤣
Btw Im planning to re-title cuz this wasnt even a title, any suggetions?
And oh ya, Im planning to stop my SR talk, im so fed up with it😆

yaar....
u must continue...😉
i'm luving it....😛
but why the handa girl run away.....😕
i mean run away sr.....
thora seduce to karlete na......😉
abt SR u never know.....
may be u r planning to stop & they started doing😲 ....🤣
Edited by mgdg_2010 - 14 years ago

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