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@mango27

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

this is truly beautiful...........u r amazing

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

y is geet not happy wid his decision- did she expect him to choose da kid over her???? but liked da way she understood his torment

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

It was emotional!

You've written it so beautifully!

My eyes were moist just like during the episode today.

Truly beautiful! Loved it😊

BTW when do we have the update of your FF? 😳

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Mehak

@Love_Mehak

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Simply amazing!!! hatsss of 2 u!!!

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euphoric

@euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

@johnangad: no its not that Geet expected something different from Maan but as a mother the decision to save her over her child was not acceptable to her. so she wasn't happy.😃

@Shivangi: I'm so sorry. trust me i was penning down the update for Ripped Apart but then my brains went tangential and i ended with this one😕😆 i'll get back to that one now and positively by tomorrow or the day after it should be up. thnx for the support and appreciation.

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Krishi

@knumnum

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: euphoric
@Shivangi: I'm so sorry. trust me i was penning down the update for Ripped Apart but then my brains went tangential and i ended with this one😕😆 i'll get back to that one now and positively by tomorrow or the day after it should be up. thnx for the support and appreciation.

Kisse cheat kar rahi ho????😆 i am sure u ll not update ur FF sooo sooon aur woh bhi in a day or 2??? kaise kaise jhoot bolti ho yaar tum😲😆😆

Coming to the OS, Loved everything except that i felt there are too much of speaking and less of action😉😆😆.. I know how naughty u can get wen u write a story or a scene between the couple but i didnt find any such thing like tat here and i missed tat aspect... I understand tat this has to be emotional and senti and so no complains from me😃

This made me realize how much i miss ur ramblings😆... Loved the OS, it will definitely touch everyone's heart in an emotional and senti way but not in a romantic way😆😆

Krishi

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euphoric

@euphoric

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: knumnum

Kisse cheat kar rahi ho????😆 i am sure u ll not update ur FF sooo sooon aur woh bhi in a day or 2??? kaise kaise jhoot bolti ho yaar tum😲😆😆

Coming to the OS, Loved everything except that i felt there are too much of speaking and less of action😉😆😆.. I know how naughty u can get wen u write a story or a scene between the couple but i didnt find any such thing like tat here and i missed tat aspect... I understand tat this has to be emotional and senti and so no complains from me😃

This made me realize how much i miss ur ramblings😆... Loved the OS, it will definitely touch everyone's heart in an emotional and senti way but not in a romantic way😆😆

Krishi

Tu kabhi nahi sudhregi😆😆... Wats with back to be the Narad Muni😉😆

Thanks a ton honeybuns🤗 and don't worry about my ramblings its coming ur way anyways 😆😆...

Sonia

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Sonia....

Sorry for the delay in comment....I am caught up with exams
Coming to the OS its always Pleasure To read your Writings 😛
and i loved it how you explained each and everything.....Geet's Reactio..hayee i love this kudi in action 😍😆......Beautiful keep writing more....

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Pari

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euphoric

@euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -Parisa-
Sonia....

Sorry for the delay in comment....I am caught up with exams
Coming to the OS its always Pleasure To read your Writings 😛
and i loved it how you explained each and everything.....Geet's Reactio..hayee i love this kudi in action 😍😆......Beautiful keep writing more....

Love
Pari

Hey Pari 🤗

No worries dear... your exams are any day more important... All the best😳
Glad that you still enjoy them... I hardly wrote anything after Maahi Ve... but its really to good to know that you still remember it😃

Luv, Sonia