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Posted: 14 years ago
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SHORT STORY to be FINISHED IN 10 PARTS and 10 days--> The story is different to the show... as u can guess.. the characters used are Adi pinky Maan and Geet. Maan is the same character line as in the story.other character bakgrounds 2 be introduced later

He never believed she was dead. He never believed that she could leave him. That car accident that caused him to be alone for 3 whole years could not have taken her away from him. SHE was alive and he knew it. She was still alive and is somewhere. Today he saw her and finally found her. In the midst of the mall he saw her. He ran up to her. Happinesss knew no bounds. He called out for her. She didn't listen. He walked up to her and stopped her. His best friends with him on either side who were happy to see her alive.

'Geet' He said. She looked at him confused. He couldn't control himself and he hugged her. She stood there confused and shocked and didn't react.

'Geet its me your Maan'

'Geet omg your alive' exclaimed Pinky.

'I'm Sorry but who are you? I don't know you' The girl replied.

'You don't know us. Its Me Maan your husband. Pinky and Adi your best friends and at home Diya your daughter'

'Whose are you I don't know you don't recognise any of you so could you please let me go' The girl walked off and tripped to fall right into Maan's hand. Maan had flashbacks of how many times he had stopped her from falling and how many times she had fallen into his lap. The first day she entered the office until the last time she was with him.

'Mr, Could you please let go of me?'

'Geet how could you do this to your husband?' Adi askd.

'Husband? Do you see a ring on my finger, No. And what is this Geet Geet, Im not Geet I'm Priya Priya Malhotra understood '

She walked off. Maan said to himself if your really my Geet you will turn and face me once more. Priya turned to look at Maan. Maan smiled. Priya quickly turned around and walked away.

'You are my Geet and I will make you say it'

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PRECAP: what happened...???? Why are Maan and Geet separate? Is this really Geet or someone else?? 10 days 10 parts

Index..

Part 1 pg 2, part 2 page 5, part 3 page 7, part 4 page 8, part 5/6 page 11

Part 7 13 part 8 15 part 9/10 pag 16

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TinkJia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First to reply!!!!!!!!!😆
sounds Good, add me to your PM list. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow, intrigued, can't wait to read the next update👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOWW..
AWESOME
LOVE IT
CONTINUE SOON!!!
Looking forward for it!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start! can't wait to read the rest!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome........cant wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice storyline.. very interesting.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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COOL ! Do pm me whenever u update. :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey... nice one...😊
eagerly waiting for next update...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its interesting n nice
but reminded me of MJHT

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